Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答自然且直接，但可以更具体并使用连接词丰富细节。建议先给出主题句，然后用原因和具体例子支持，控制在不超过五句。可以加上时间、频率或具体景物来增加内容的丰富度。

例: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I'm travelling by bus or car because watching the passing scenery helps me relax. For example, on my commute I often enjoy seeing tree-lined streets and old buildings, which makes the journey feel shorter. As a result, I rarely feel carsick and I often use the time to think or listen to music.

提案: 回答积极且内容充实，但可用一两个连接词把句子衔接得更流畅，并加入具体例子（如拍摄对象或一次具体旅行）使内容更具体、有说服力。注意句子数量不超过五句。

例: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I want to remember interesting places. For instance, on a recent trip I photographed golden fields and an old stone bridge, which looked stunning in the late afternoon light. Afterwards I shared the best shots with my friends and wrote a short caption about the place.

提案: 回答简洁但太笼统，缺少具体比较与理由。建议先给出明确偏好或保持中立的主题句，然后用连接词给出具体原因和比较（例如天气、活动或感受），并举例说明。

例: It depends on my mood, but if I had to choose I'd prefer the sea for active trips and the mountains for quiet relaxation. For example, I like the sea when I want to swim and enjoy seafood, whereas I choose the mountains when I want hiking and fresh air. Both settings offer different benefits, so I pick based on what I need at the time.

× I usually look out of the window at the scenery when I'm on the bus or in the car. It makes me feel relaxed and I don't get car sick.

✓ I usually look out of the window at the scenery when I'm on the bus or in the car. It makes me feel relaxed and I don't get carsick.

句子总体语法正确，时态和结构都合适。唯一可调整的是“car sick”一词常写作一个合成词“carsick”或连字符“car-sick”。建议统一写法为“carsick”。

× Absolutely. I love capturing beautiful scenery whenever I travel. Taking photos helps me remember special moments and places, and I really enjoy sharing my pictures on social media with my friends.

✓ Absolutely. I love capturing beautiful scenery whenever I travel. Taking photos helps me remember special moments and places, and I really enjoy sharing my pictures on social media with my friends.

句子语法正确，时态一致，动名词用法（Taking photos）正确，连贯自然，无需更改。

× It depends on my mood. Sometimes I want to see the sea, but other times I just want to relax in the mountains. Both are nice in their own way.

✓ It depends on my mood. Sometimes I want to see the sea, but other times I just want to relax in the mountains. Both are nice in their own way.

句子语法正确，时态、语序和用词均恰当，表达清晰，无需修改。