Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 注意语法和句子结构，提高表达的自然度和连贯性。可以用一个主题句直接回答，然后用一到两句具体说明原因或感受，避免重复。比如说明什么时候喜欢看风景、看风景带来的感受。

例: Yes, I often look out of the window when travelling by bus or car because the scenery helps me relax. For example, I enjoy watching trees and small towns pass by, which makes a long journey feel shorter and more pleasant.

提案: 减少重复，使用连词使句子更流畅，并提供具体细节（例如什么时候拍、用什么设备、拍哪类景色）。注意语法（时态和单复数）和句子完整性。

例: Yes, I do. I often take photos of interesting landscapes from the window, especially when I travel to the countryside. I usually use my smartphone to capture mountains, rivers and small villages because they make me feel happy and relaxed.

提案: 直接回答偏好（mountains or the sea），然后给出具体理由并用连接词衔接。注意词汇搭配（e.g. "mountains mean peace and relaxation"），避免模糊或不完整的句子。

例: I prefer the mountains because they offer peace and a chance to relax. I often go hiking there, enjoy the fresh air and quiet surroundings, which helps me forget the stress of city life.

× Yes, I really love do it look out window scenery and help me relax.

✓ Yes, I really love looking out of the window at the scenery; it helps me relax.

句中“love do it look out window scenery”使用了動詞不定式和不正確的詞序。動詞“love”後面接動作時常用動名詞（-ing）或不定式，但更自然的是“love doing something”。另外，“look out of the window”為固定搭配，需加介詞“of”和定冠詞“the”；“at the scenery”表示看風景；主句要分兩部分，用分號或連詞連接並把主語改為“It helps me relax.”，這裡的“help”需用第三人稱單數形式“helps”。 建議：記住“love + -ing”的用法，並使用固定短語“look out of the window”及正確主謂一致。

× Yes of course I really love it. I I take photo many pictures and scenery.

✓ Yes, of course, I really love it. I take many photos of the scenery.

句中“take photo many pictures and scenery”有幾處錯誤：名詞“photo”需用複數形式“photos”或使用“many pictures”；同時要使用介詞“of”來表示“拍……的照片”：“take photos of the scenery”。另外句首應有逗號分隔“Yes, of course,”。建議：注意可數名詞的單複數形式和常見動詞短語“take photos of”。

× This scenery is make me happy.

✓ This scenery makes me happy.

原句中“is make”誤把現在時和動詞原形混用。描述一般事實或習慣時應用簡單現在時，主語“this scenery”是第三人稱單數，謂語動詞應用第三人稱單數形式“makes”。建議：簡單現在時第三人稱單數動詞要加 -s/-es。

× Yes, I like it. I often go to it. I think mountains hope mean house and relax.

✓ Yes, I like them. I often go to the mountains. I think mountains are a good place to live and relax.

原句存在多處結構問題：1) 回答“Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?”應指代複數“the mountains or the sea”，用“them”更合適。2) “I often go to it”用代詞“it”指代複數“mountains”不正確，且固定表達為“go to the mountains”。3) “I think mountains hope mean house and relax.”語序和詞彙錯亂，可能想表達“我覺得山是適合居住和放鬆的地方”。因此改為“I think mountains are a good place to live and relax.” 建議：注意代詞與先行詞的數一致；學習常用短語“go to the mountains”以及用“be + a good place to + 動詞不定式”表達適合做某事。