Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concise supporting reasons with correct verb forms and vocabulary. Avoid redundancy (e.g., “you don't have to take much time to finished a texting”) and keep under five sentences.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, when I chat with friends on my phone I can reply quickly and use features like autocorrect and emojis to make messages clearer.

提案: Use correct verb tenses and avoid repetition. Begin with a direct answer, then add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words (e.g., "also") correctly and be concise.

例: I type on a laptop every day. I use it for web searches, writing documents and sometimes teaching friends basic typing skills, so I practice regularly.

提案: Combine short fragments into smooth sentences and use linking words for coherence. Give a clear time reference and one specific detail about the learning experience.

例: I learned to type when I was at primary school. My teacher used fun typing games to help us practice, which made learning enjoyable and helped me improve quickly.

提案: Organize your answer: start with a direct statement about your main method, then add one or two specific supporting actions. Correct grammar and unclear phrases (e.g., "asked other advised Sis") and use linking words like "and" or "for example."

例: I improve my typing by practicing every day and watching tutorial videos. For example, I follow online typing lessons to learn proper finger placement and I ask more experienced friends for feedback to reduce my errors.

× I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is more convenient and you don't have to take much time to finished a texting if you want to chat with other people through phone.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is more convenient and you don't have to spend much time finishing a text message if you want to chat with other people on the phone.

Errors: 'to finished' uses incorrect past form after 'to' (should be base or -ing), 'a texting' is incorrect countable noun and form, 'through phone' is wrong preposition and article. Correction: use 'spend' with time, 'finishing' as gerund after 'spend time', 'a text message' or 'text' for countable noun, and 'on the phone' as correct prepositional phrase. Suggested improvement: learn verb patterns (to + base verb, spend time + -ing), countable noun usage, and common prepositions for communication (on the phone).

× I have a laptop so I typed on my laptop every day.

✓ I have a laptop so I type on my laptop every day.

Error: 'typed' is past tense while the habitual action uses present simple; subject 'I' uses base form 'type' for daily routines. Use consistent present tense for habitual actions. Suggested improvement: use present simple for routines (I type, I go, I work).

× I used it to search and look up some information on Internet and I also teach other people how to type on the keyboard.

✓ I use it to search and look up information on the Internet and I also teach other people how to type on the keyboard.

Errors: 'used' and 'teach' tenses inconsistent with habitual present; 'on Internet' missing article 'the'; 'some information' redundant with 'information'. Correction: use present simple 'use' and 'teach' for habitual actions, include 'the' before 'Internet'. Suggested improvement: maintain consistent tense for similar actions and remember fixed phrase 'the Internet'.

× When I was young, I learned how to type on a keyboard.

✓ When I was young, I learned how to type on a keyboard.

No correction needed: sentence correctly uses past tense 'learned' for a past event. Keep as is. Suggested improvement: none; this sentence correctly matches past-time context.

× At school, my teacher taught me how to use it.

✓ At school, my teacher taught me how to use it.

Sentence is grammatically correct and clear; no change needed. It correctly uses past tense and pronoun reference. Suggested improvement: ensure 'it' clearly refers to 'the keyboard' in prior context.

× We were playing. Typing games together and it was so much fun.

✓ We were playing typing games together and it was so much fun.

Errors: incorrect sentence break and capitalization; 'Playing' was separated incorrectly causing a sentence fragment. Correction: combine into one sentence and keep 'typing' lowercase. Suggested improvement: avoid unnecessary sentence breaks and ensure participles are connected to the main clause.

× While I practice typing every day and I also look for many tutorial videos about typing and I also asked other advised Sis.

✓ I practice typing every day; I also look for many tutorial videos about typing, and I ask other people for advice.

Errors: incorrect use of 'While' at start without parallel clause, tense inconsistency with 'asked' (past) vs present routines, awkward phrase 'asked other advised Sis'. Corrections: remove 'While' or restructure, use present simple for habits, replace 'asked other advised Sis' with 'ask other people for advice'. Suggested improvement: keep tense consistent for habitual actions and use correct collocations ('ask someone for advice').

× I think it's a great way to learn.

✓ I think it's a great way to learn.

Sentence is correct; no modal errors. It appropriately uses 'it's' and infinitive 'to learn'. Suggested improvement: none.