Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Javobingiz tabiiy va tushunarli, lekin qisqartirish va strukturani yaxshilash kerak. Birinchi gapda aniq mavzuni ko'rsating (topic sentence), keyin qisqacha sabablar bering va ortiqcha so'zlardan qoching. Misol uchun, “I prefer typing for long texts because it’s faster and more comfortable” kabi oddiy va aniq gapdan boshlang. Linking so'zlardan (because, so, therefore) foydalaning va har bir sababni bitta-qisqa gap bilan aniq bayon qiling.

例: I prefer typing for long texts because it’s faster and more comfortable. For example, when I write reports I can edit and format my work quickly, so it saves me a lot of time.

提案: Javob juda takroriy va uzun gaplardan iborat. Bir yoki ikki gap bilan aniq javob bering, takrorlarni olib tashlang va sabablarni bog‘lovchi so‘zlar bilan tartiblang. Masalan, “I use my laptop every day because it’s portable and I type long documents for work” kabi struktura ishlating. Konkret misollar qo‘shing (emails, reports).

例: I use my laptop every day because it’s portable and I often type long documents for work. For instance, I write reports and emails on my laptop, which makes it convenient.

提案: Javob aniq, lekin takrorlangan tuzilmalarni kamaytiring va vaqtni aniqlang. Birinchi gapda aniq davrni ayting (as a child / at school aged X). Keyin qisqacha qanday o‘rganganingizni bayon qiling. Bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan (when, then, because) foydalaning.

例: I learned to type when I was a child at school. My teacher showed us touch-typing techniques, which helped me type faster over time.

提案: Javob yaxshi fikrni bildirib turibdi, lekin ko‘proq aniqlik va usullarni ko‘rsating. Birinchi gapda hozirgi yoki o'tmish usullarni ajrating va qanday mashqlar qilganingizni, qaysi natijaga erishganingizni ayting. Linking so‘zlar (for example, by, so) bilan izohlang.

例: I improved my typing by practicing long texts during computer science classes. For example, my teacher assigned typing exercises and timed drills, which significantly increased my speed and accuracy.

× Well, it depends. If it's about really huge texts I prefer typing. It's more comfortable for me and I found it interesting.

✓ Well, it depends. If it's about really huge texts, I prefer typing. It's more comfortable for me and I find it interesting.

The sentence mixes present simple and past simple incorrectly. 'I found it interesting' uses past tense but the context is general preference, so use present simple 'I find it interesting'. Also add a comma after the conditional clause for clarity. Suggestion: keep present simple for general facts and preferences. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I type on laptop keyboard every day because I have laptop it's really useful and comfortable for me and a lot of parts of my job I type very long texts and my laptop's keyboard is really useful.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I have a laptop; it's really useful and comfortable for me. In many parts of my job I type very long texts, and my laptop's keyboard is very helpful.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'laptop' and 'laptop keyboard' is required. Run-on sentence needs separating with punctuation and connectors. Also 'a lot of parts of my job' is awkward; use 'in many parts of my job'. Suggestion: use articles with singular countable nouns and break long sentences into shorter ones. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× If I remember correctly, I used to learn it when I was a child and then I learned how to type on a keyboard and my teacher taught me how we can type fast.

✓ If I remember correctly, I learned it when I was a child. Then my teacher taught me how to type quickly.

'Used to learn' is incorrect here; 'used to' indicates past habits but 'learned' is sufficient. 'How we can type fast' is awkward and mixes structures; use 'how to type quickly'. Keep past tense 'learned' and 'taught' consistent. Suggestion: use simple past for completed actions and prefer 'how to + verb' for indirect instruction. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× When I learned computer science, my teacher always gave us really huge texts where we have to type it, and then I improved my typing.

✓ When I studied computer science, my teacher always gave us very long texts that we had to type, and then I improved my typing.

Tense and wording issues: 'learned computer science' is okay but 'studied' fits better. 'Always gave us really huge texts where we have to type it' mixes past and present; change to past 'we had to type'. Remove redundant 'it'. Use 'very long' instead of 'really huge' for natural collocation. Suggestion: maintain past tense consistency and use appropriate relative clause 'that we had to type'.