Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitation and repetition, and use correct forms (e.g., “it’s” → “it is” or “it's;” “very faster” → “much faster”). Provide one or two specific reasons with linking words (e.g., “because” / “for example”) and keep to under five sentences.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much faster and more convenient. For example, I can easily edit long documents and share them with colleagues online, which saves time. Also, most of my work is done on a computer, so typing fits my daily routine.

提案: Give a direct answer naming device and reduce filler words. Use one clear topic sentence (desktop or laptop), then add a specific supporting detail using a linking word like “because” or “for example.” Correct grammar (e.g., “assignments are done,” “typing is a good habit”).

例: Yes, I use a laptop every day for work because it is portable and convenient. For example, I complete most of my assignments and communicate with classmates via email and messaging apps on my laptop.

提案: Provide a concise timeline and one clear result. Use past tense correctly (“taught me”) and avoid repetitive phrasing. Offer a specific effect of learning to type using linking words like “so” or “which” and one concrete example of improvement.

例: I learned to type when I was 18; my brother taught me on our home computer. Since then I have practiced daily, so my speed and accuracy improved, and I can type essays and emails much more quickly now.

提案: Answer directly with a clear routine and specific methods. Avoid repetition and fillers, use linking words like “for example” or “by” and give measurable evidence of improvement (e.g., typing speed, fewer errors).

例: I improve my typing by practicing every day as part of my routine. For example, I type assignments, chat online, and use typing practice websites; as a result, my speed has increased and I make fewer mistakes.

× Yes, I prefer typing because of it's, it's very faster and very convenient.

✓ Yes, I prefer typing because it is much faster and more convenient.

The original uses the contraction 'it's' incorrectly with 'because of' and misuses 'very faster' (comparative requires 'much' or 'much faster' and 'very' plus comparative is ungrammatical). Replace 'because of it's' with 'because it is' and use 'much faster' and 'more convenient' for correct comparative/adverb usage.

× Umm uh, for long document I can easily use it and it it can ETA, it can be edit or correct my flaws.

✓ For long documents I can easily use it, and I can edit or correct my mistakes.

Multiple issues: 'document' should be plural when speaking generally, 'it it can ETA' appears garbled and 'it can be edit' incorrectly uses base form instead of past participle. 'Flaws' in this context is better as 'mistakes'. Use active 'I can edit' rather than passive with wrong form.

× And yeah, most of my work are related to the computer and very easy to share document to others.

✓ And yeah, most of my work is related to the computer and it's very easy to share documents with others.

'Work' is an uncountable noun and takes singular verb 'is'. 'Document' should be plural 'documents' when speaking generally. Use 'it's' as contraction for 'it is' and 'share with others' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× Yes, I, I have, uh, as I said, I have a computer, so I use it daily for my work and many of my, uh, assignment done by computer.

✓ Yes, I have a computer, so I use it daily for my work and many of my assignments are done on the computer.

'Assignment' should be plural 'assignments'. The clause 'many of my assignments are done on the computer' requires the auxiliary 'are' for the passive voice and the preposition 'on' or 'by' the computer; 'on the computer' is more natural.

× I think, uh, typing habit is a very, uh, good thing to be communicate with others and I think everyone should typing uh, for daily work.

✓ I think typing is a very good habit for communicating with others, and I think everyone should type for their daily work.

'Typing habit' should be 'typing is a habit' or 'typing is a very good habit'. 'To be communicate' is incorrect; use the gerund 'communicating'. 'Everyone should typing' is wrong because modal 'should' is followed by base verb 'type' not the -ing form.

× When I was 18, my brother teach me how to type on our keyboard and, uh, I type every day as much as I type on keyboard, as much as I faster and accurate to do on it.

✓ When I was 18, my brother taught me how to type on our keyboard, and I practiced every day so I became faster and more accurate at it.

'Teach' should be past tense 'taught'. The phrasing 'I type every day as much as I type on keyboard' is awkward; better 'I practiced every day'. Use comparative forms 'faster' and 'more accurate' and the preposition 'at it' for clarity.

× And uh, I noticed that when I use computer, uh, typing so I can improve my, uh, communication skills to add.

✓ And I noticed that when I use the computer and type, I can improve my communication skills.

Missing article 'the computer'. 'Typing so I can improve my communication skills to add' is ungrammatical; remove 'to add' and restructure: 'when I use the computer and type, I can improve my communication skills'.

× Well, I try to type every day as my daily routine.

✓ Well, I try to type every day as part of my daily routine.

Add 'part of' to make the expression idiomatic: 'type every day as part of my daily routine'.

× Most of the most of my studies work or any assignment or anything online chatting.

✓ Most of my study work, assignments, or online chats I do using the keyboard.

Original repeats 'Most of the most of' and uses unclear nouns. Use 'most of my study work' or simply 'most of my assignments' and 'online chats' as plural; reorder sentence for clarity.

× I use keyboard and for typing and as I uh, as I type more, uh, my typing skill are faster and accurate.

✓ I use the keyboard for typing, and as I type more, my typing skills become faster and more accurate.

'Keyboard' needs the article 'the'. 'Typing skill' should be plural 'typing skills'. Use 'become' to show change and 'more accurate' for comparative. 'Are faster and accurate' mismatches number and form.

× Well, so I noticed the improvement using computer typing.

✓ So I have noticed improvement in my typing by using the computer.

Reorder words for natural English: 'noticed the improvement using computer typing' is awkward. Use 'noticed improvement in my typing by using the computer' or 'I have noticed improvement in my typing from using the computer'.