Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: حاول أن تكون إجابتك منظمة وأكثر إيجازًا، واهتم بالقواعد النحوية وصياغة الجمل. استخدم جملة موضوعية واحدة واضحة في البداية، ثم قدم سببين محددين مع أمثلة قصيرة. تجنّب التكرار (مثل "it's it's") وتصحيح زمن الأفعال والأسماء المركبة (مثلاً "modern technology leads" و"it takes").

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and makes editing easier. For example, when I write essays on my laptop I can quickly fix spelling mistakes and rearrange sentences without starting over.

提案: قلل من الترددات الصوتية (مثل "uh") وحدد الجواب بشكل مباشر مع سبب واضح. صحّح العبارات غير الصحيحة مثل "I finished my work in the laptop" إلى "I do my work on my laptop" و"router typing" غير مناسبة — استخدم "laptop" أو "keyboard". قدم مثالًا موجزًا ليدعم إجابتك.

例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I do most of my work on my laptop. For example, I usually write emails and prepare documents there, which is convenient and portable.

提案: ابتعد عن العبارات الغامضة مثل "I don't remember well" وقدم إطارًا زمنياً واضحًا. استخدم زمن ماضٍ عند الحديث عن أحداث سابقة (مثلاً "I learned" أو "I started learning"). اذكر مصدرين محددين لتعلمك (التدريب الذاتي والدروس المدرسية) مع ترتيب زمني واضح.

例: I started learning to type when I was at school and continued improving as I grew up. At school I took basic computer classes, and later I practised typing daily on my laptop which helped me improve.

提案: اجب بشكل أكثر تحديدًا وابتعد عن التكرار. استخدم تراكيب واضحة لشرح طريقتين على الأقل لتحسين الطباعة: الممارسة العملية واستعمال مواقع تدريب مع ذكر أمثلة لأسماء مواقع أو نوع التمارين. احرص على الأزمنة الصحيحة وصياغة الجمل بسلاسة.

例: I improve my typing mainly by practising regularly and using online typing websites. For example, after finishing work I spend 15 minutes on a typing tutor site that shows words on screen and times my speed, which helps me increase accuracy and speed.

× To be honest with you, I prefer typing because the modern technology lead us to write easily.

✓ To be honest with you, I prefer typing because modern technology leads us to write more easily.

The verb 'lead' should be in third-person singular present form 'leads' to agree with the singular subject 'modern technology'. Also 'more easily' is a clearer adverbial phrase. Suggestion: use subject-verb agreement and choose appropriate adverb phrases.

× By typing, it's it's actually take a little time, it is easy to write and it is easy also to correct the mistakes that I had in the typing.

✓ By typing, it actually takes a little time; it is easy to write and also easy to correct the mistakes I made while typing.

Use 'takes' for third-person singular present. Remove duplicate 'it's'. Use 'made' (past) or 'while typing' to indicate when mistakes occurred; here 'I made' is more natural. Combine clauses for clarity. Suggestion: ensure correct verb form for subject and avoid repetitions.

× Actually, I type on the laptop keyboard every day because, uh, I finished my work in the laptop.

✓ Actually, I type on the laptop keyboard every day because I do my work on the laptop.

Use preposition 'on' with 'laptop' to indicate use of the device. 'Finished my work in the laptop' is incorrect. Also use present tense 'do my work' to match habitual action. Suggestion: use 'on the laptop' and consistent tense for routines.

× Also when I wanted to send an e-mail to my friends, uh, I use the router typing and it is easy way to uh, write an e-mail.

✓ Also, when I want to send an e-mail to my friends, I use the laptop keyboard and it is an easy way to write an e-mail.

Use consistent tense: 'want' for habitual action. 'Router typing' is incorrect—likely intended 'laptop keyboard'. Add article 'an' before 'easy way'. Suggestion: choose correct noun and include articles where needed.

× Actually, I don't remember well, but I think, uh, with the, I am growing up, uh, using, uh, laptop every day.

✓ Actually, I don't remember well, but I think that as I was growing up I used a laptop every day.

Use past tense 'was growing up' and 'used' to describe past habitual actions. Original mixes present continuous with past context. Suggestion: use consistent past forms when referring to past periods.

× So I am learning, uh, by the time when I growing up.

✓ So I learned over time as I grew up.

Use past tense 'learned' and 'grew up' to match past reference. 'By the time when I growing up' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: simplify to 'learned over time as I grew up.'

× And also we take some classes about computer in my school when I was.

✓ We also took some computer classes at my school when I was there.

Use past tense 'took' for completed action. Use preposition 'at' for location and include 'there' to complete clause 'when I was there'. Suggestion: use correct past tense and complete time/place expressions.

× Actually, I improve my typing by writing a lot, for example, when I finished my work, so I always write a lot.

✓ Actually, I improve my typing by writing a lot; for example, after I finish my work, I always write a lot.

Use present simple 'improve' and 'finish' for habitual actions. Original mixes past 'finished' with general routine. Suggestion: match tense for habitual activities and avoid redundant phrases.

× And uh, there is, there is some, uh, website that, uh, improved my type like, uh, uh, there's some words show in the screen and I write this word quickly.

✓ There are some websites that help improve my typing, for example, words appear on the screen and I type them quickly.

Use plural 'websites' with 'there are'. Use 'help improve' rather than 'improved my type'. Use 'appear on the screen' and 'type them' for correct verbs and pronouns. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb agreement with 'there is/are', correct verb collocations, and plural nouns where appropriate.