Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更直接并注意语法和表达自然。开头应直接回答问题（I prefer handwriting 或 I prefer typing），然后用一到两句具体原因与例子支持。避免语法错误（例如用 perform handwriting 应改为 handwrite；logical 更自然说 clearer or my thoughts are clearer）。句子不要过长，保持不超过五句。

例: I prefer handwriting. When I handwrite, my thoughts become clearer and I can organize ideas on paper more easily. For example, when I draft essays, I jot down my ideas and draw quick outlines, which helps me structure the essay before typing it up.

提案: 回答要更简洁并修正重复与语法。直接说用什么设备（desktop or laptop），然后给一两个简要原因。避免重复“that means”。使用连接词让句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because my university requires uploading coursework online. Therefore, I usually finish essays and assignments on my laptop and submit them through the university portal.

提案: 时间表达要更明确并注意动词和介词用法。避免模糊词汇（it had online classes）和错误短语（tap our answer, upload our teacher）。建议回答直接给出时间点并说明学习原因或方式，使用连接词如 because or so. 另外注意复数和冠词（my teacher → the teacher 或 my teachers）。

例: I learned to type in high school when many of our classes moved online. We had to type and upload assignments and communicate with teachers through chat, so I practised typing a lot during that period.

提案: 说明改进方法时要具体并提供细节，例如练习方法（在线打字练习、练习盲打、使用速度测试网站等）、练习频率和结果。避免口语化缩写（fam）和重复。用一两句说明你是否有计划性练习或只是通过日常使用提高。

例: I improve my typing mainly through daily use for coursework and messaging, but I also practise deliberately by using online typing tests and exercises twice a week to increase my speed and accuracy.

× Will I perform handwriting?

✓ Will I do handwriting? / Will I be handwriting?

句子用词不自然，英语中不用 perform 来搭配 handwriting。可以用 do handwriting 或更自然地说 "write by hand"。建议改为 "Will I write by hand?"（我会用手写吗？）。

× And because every time I handwrite on the paper, my logical is more clear.

✓ And because every time I handwrite on paper, my logic is clearer.

原句中使用了 "my logical"，这是错误的词性（logical 是形容词，需名词 logic）。另外 "on the paper" 在该语境下可简化为 "on paper"。句子时态和比较级应使用 clearer。建议使用 "my logic is clearer" 或 "my thinking is clearer"。

× For example, every time I write my essay draft, I always write down my thinking on the paper.

✓ For example, every time I write my essay draft, I always write my thoughts on paper.

原句冗长且用词不够地道，"write down my thinking" 可改为更自然的 "write my thoughts"；"on the paper" 同样应为简洁的 "on paper"。保持句子结构简洁更自然。

× I think that is useful way for me.

✓ I think that is a useful way for me.

缺少不定冠词 a。可改为 "a useful way" 或更自然地说 "a useful method"。

× Yes I do because my university required everyone should upload our coursework online.

✓ Yes, I do because my university requires everyone to upload their coursework online.

主语 my university 是第三人称单数，动词需加 -s（requires）。此外原句中 "required"（过去式）与上下文不符，应使用一般现在时；"everyone should upload our coursework" 中人称不一致，应统一为 their。建议："my university requires everyone to upload their coursework online."

× That means I should finish my essay or other coursework on my laptop.

✓ That means I should finish my essays or other coursework on my laptop.

句中 singular/plural 可根据语境调整，若指泛指多门课程，essay 可用复数 essays 或保持单数并加限定。此处更自然使用复数 "essays" 或使用 "my essay or other coursework" 也可，但与上句保持一致性更好。

× That means I should type in every day.

✓ That means I should type every day.

"type in" 常用作短语动词表示输入（into），此处只需动词 type，去掉 in 更准确。

× I think it's in the high school because at that time it had online classes.

✓ I think it was in high school because at that time there were online classes.

描述过去时间应使用一般过去时：use was 而不是 is；另外 there were 用来表示过去存在（There be issue），原句使用 had 不自然，且 "in the high school" 中 the 可省略为 "in high school"。因此改为 "it was in high school" 和 "there were online classes"。

× We should tap our answer to upload our teacher and we also need a chat with my teacher or ask some question online so.

✓ We should type our answers to upload to our teacher, and we also need to chat with my teacher or ask some questions online.

原句有多处错误："tap our answer" 用词不当，改为 "type our answers"；"upload our teacher" 结构错误，应为 "upload to our teacher"；"a chat with my teacher" 应为动词短语 "chat with my teacher"；"ask some question" 应为复数 "questions"。句子冗长，建议拆分或重组为两部分。

× Well, as I said, I finished my coursework online and I need to chat with my fam, family number or my friends online so I type every day.

✓ Well, as I said, I finish my coursework online and I need to chat with my family or my friends online, so I type every day.

时态不一致：描述习惯应使用一般现在时（finish 而不是 finished）。"fam, family number" 是非标准表达，应改为 "family"。句子中应使用一致的人称和时态，逗号分隔更清晰。

× That means I don't sit down to practice on purpose naturally.

✓ That means I don't sit down to practice intentionally; I just type naturally every day.

原句表达混乱，"on purpose naturally" 自相矛盾且语序不当。应明确是“并非刻意练习（not intentionally）”，可用 intentionally 或 on purpose，但二者不可同时用。建议改为两部分以表达自然练习的意思。