Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ нужно сделать более последовательным и грамматически правильным, убрать повторы и неясные фразы, использовать связки (however, for example) корректно и конкретно. Дайте чёткое вступление (topic sentence), затем одно-два поддерживающих предложения с конкретными деталями и одним примером. Избегайте лишних слов и поправьте слова с ошибками (например, «toughing» → «typing»).

例: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient for long emails and assignments. For example, on my laptop I can quickly edit and reorganize paragraphs. However, I sometimes write notes by hand when I want to remember information, because handwriting helps me focus and retain key points.

提案: Ответ должен быть чётким и грамматически корректным: используйте одно определённое утверждение (desktop или laptop), затем объясните почему и приведите конкретный пример. Уберите опечатки (например, «took on a laptop a keyboard», «tubing») и повторения. Старайтесь не превышать пять предложений и использовать связки (because, for example).

例: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and convenient for both work and study. For example, I often write emails and reports on my laptop when I move between home and the office.

提案: Нужно выразить мысль ясно и грамотно: укажите точное время обучения, место и способ (уроки/игры/практика). Используйте связки (when, because, for example) и корректную лексику (learned to type, practice regularly). Избегайте бессвязных фраз и неверных слов (например, «tube», «toes», «tubing»).

例: I learned to type when I was about ten years old in a school computer class. We practised touch-typing using simple exercises and educational games, and I also practised regularly at home with typing software, which helped me improve my speed and accuracy.

提案: Ответ должен быть конкретным: скажите, какие методы вы используете, как часто и какие результаты это даёт. Исправьте опечатки и неверные слова (например, «tubing» → «typing», «structures» → «structured exercises»). Используйте связки (for example, by doing this) и укажите конкретное время и цель практики. Не больше пяти предложений.

例: I improve my typing by practising regularly with structured exercises and online typing programs. For example, I spend 10–15 minutes a day on lessons that focus on common letter combinations and proper finger placement. This practice has gradually increased my speed and reduced errors.

× I prefer toughing because it is so much faster and more convenient, especially for drafting long emails or assignments.

✓ I prefer typing because it is much faster and more convenient, especially for drafting long emails or assignments.

The student used 'toughing' which is not a correct verb form; the intended verb is 'type' with present participle 'typing'. This is a vocabulary/verb form error that affects present tense meaning. Suggestion: use correct verb 'type' -> 'typing' when saying preferences (I prefer typing).

× For example, I can edit or reorganize my days quickly on a laptop.

✓ For example, I can edit or reorganize my documents quickly on a laptop.

The phrase 'reorganize my days' is likely incorrect word choice and results in sentence meaning confusion. Replace 'days' with 'documents' to fit context. Suggestion: choose nouns that match the action (edit/reorganize documents).

× However, I sometimes and write not when I want to remember information.

✓ However, I sometimes write by hand when I want to remember information.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and extraneous words ('and', 'not'). This is a sentence structure error. Suggestion: follow Subject + adverb + verb + object order: 'I sometimes write by hand when I want to remember information.'

× Better thing.

✓ A better option is handwriting.

Fragment 'Better thing.' lacks a verb and is ungrammatical (sentence without a verb). Provide a full sentence expressing the intended meaning. Suggestion: use a complete clause: 'A better option is handwriting.'

× Writing by by hand helps me focus and retain key points.

✓ Writing by hand helps me focus and retain key points.

There is an accidental duplication 'by by'. Also 'writing by hand' is the correct phrase. Suggestion: remove duplicate word.

× Yes, I took on a laptop a keyboard every day because I use it for work and study.

✓ Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because I use it for work and study.

The original mixes past 'took' with present context and has incorrect word order. It is a sentence structure and tense error. Suggestion: use present simple 'use' to match habitual action and correct noun phrase order 'laptop keyboard'.

× It's convenient and portable for moving between home and the office.

✓ It's convenient and portable for moving between home and the office.

This sentence is acceptable; no correction needed. (Kept for completeness.)

× For example, I write emails and reports on my laptop which makes tubing daily necessity.

✓ For example, I write emails and reports on my laptop, which makes typing a daily necessity.

'Tubing' is incorrect for 'typing', and the phrase 'daily necessity' needs the article 'a'. Add comma before 'which' for a nonrestrictive clause. Suggestion: correct verb 'typing' and include 'a'.

× I learned to tube on a keyboard when I was about 10 years old at school during a computer class via way where toes attached to being using simple exercise and games.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was about 10 years old at school during a computer class, where we used simple exercises and games.

Many incorrect words ('tube', 'via way', 'toes') and awkward structure. The main verb 'learned' is past tense and correct; correct the verb 'type' and simplify the relative clause to 'where we used simple exercises and games'. Suggestion: use clear subjects and verbs and correct vocabulary.

× Practicing like regularly at home and using tubing software helped me improve speed and accurate which has been very a useful form.

✓ Practicing regularly at home and using typing software helped me improve my speed and accuracy, which has been a very useful method.

Multiple issues: 'like' unnecessary, 'tubing' -> 'typing', missing possessive 'my', wrong word 'accurate' should be noun 'accuracy', word order 'very a' incorrect, and 'form' wrong choice. Suggestion: use parallel gerunds, correct nouns, and proper article placement.

× To to improve my tubing, I practice regularly using structures, exercise and online tubing programs.

✓ To improve my typing, I practice regularly using structured exercises and online typing programs.

Duplicate 'To', 'tubing' should be 'typing', 'structures, exercise' unclear; changed to 'structured exercises'. This involves incorrect -ing forms and noun forms. Suggestion: use 'typing' and plural 'exercises' and 'structured' as adjective.

× They focus on extra before.

✓ They focus on accuracy and speed.

Original fragment 'focus on extra before' is meaningless. This is a sentence structure/word choice error. Suggestion: replace with clear targets like 'accuracy and speed'.

× For example, I allocate 3 minutes daily the rules as they target target common letter combination and use Foster and finger placement reminders to reduce arouse at the.

✓ For example, I allocate 3 minutes daily to practice exercises that target common letter combinations and use finger-placement reminders to improve accuracy.

This sentence had many errors: missing preposition 'to', duplicated 'target', incorrect nouns 'Foster', 'arouse at the'. It's a sentence structure and word choice problem. Suggestion: reorganize into clear clause, use 'to practice', 'common letter combinations', and 'finger-placement reminders to improve accuracy'.