Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words (for example, "because" or "however"). Avoid repetition and correct small grammar errors (e.g., "teachers" not "teacher").

例: I prefer typing nowadays because it is faster and more convenient for daily tasks. However, when I was a child I enjoyed handwriting and even won several handwriting competitions, so my penmanship used to be admired by my teachers.

提案: Give a clear direct answer first (desktop or phone), then add concise supporting details with linking words. Reduce hesitations and redundancy, and fix grammar ("when I'm outside" and "on my desktop").

例: I usually type on a desktop at work because I send about 10–15 emails a day. However, when I'm away from the office I type emails on my phone.

提案: Start with a direct time reference, then give one or two clear details. Use correct grammar ("my computer teacher taught us"), and avoid unclear phrases like "different type of patterns" — be specific (e.g., "touch-typing and finger placement").

例: I learned to type in high school when my computer teacher taught us touch-typing and proper finger placement on the QWERTY keyboard.

提案: Provide a clear method with specific actions and use linking words to structure the response. Avoid repetition and vague statements. Mention concrete practices (e.g., online exercises, typing software, focused drills) to show depth.

例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing exercises and timed drills. For example, I use a typing website to do 10-minute speed tests every day and focus on accuracy by practicing common words I mistype.

× 'Actually I prefer typing now, mostly because now it's in the modern area, Actually typing is very important.'

✓ 'Actually I prefer typing now, mostly because we live in a modern era. Typing is very important.'

'Uses present tense but contains awkward phrasing and incorrect noun (area vs era). Change to present simple for preference and general truth, and replace "area" with "era". Also avoid repeating "now" and capitalizing incorrectly.'

× 'All of the teacher liked it so much so.'

✓ 'All of the teachers liked it so much.'

'Teacher' should be plural to match "All of the". Remove the redundant "so" at the end. Correct subject-verb agreement and simplify sentence.'

× 'But now with the pace of time, typing is important now.'

✓ 'But now, with the faster pace of life, typing is important.'

'Pace of time' is unnatural; use "pace of life" or "faster pace of life". Keep present simple for general truth and avoid repeating "now".'

× 'I work I work in uh construction, so each and every day I need to write at least 10 to 15 emails.'

✓ 'I work in construction, so every day I need to write at least 10 to 15 emails.'

'I work I work' is repetition and contains filler. Remove repetition and filler "uh". Use "every day" for habitual action; sentence has verb "work" and "need".'

× 'I have a desktop in my work so I usually do by desktop and sometimes when I outside from the work I need to type the emails.'

✓ 'I have a desktop at work, so I usually use the desktop, and sometimes when I am away from work I need to type emails on my phone.'

'in my work' should be "at work". "do by desktop" is incorrect; use "use the desktop". "when I outside from the work" should be "when I am away from work". Also "type the emails" -> "type emails".'

× 'But when I was a child, I won many handwriting competitions, so my writing was so impressive.'

✓ 'When I was a child, I won many handwriting competitions, so my handwriting was very impressive.'

'Writing' here refers to handwriting; use noun "handwriting". "was so impressive" is colloquial; change to "was very impressive". Past tense is appropriate and retained.'

× 'All of the teacher liked it so much so.'

✓ 'All of the teachers liked it so much.'

'Repeat entry removed; subject "All of the" requires plural noun "teachers" to agree with verb "liked".'

× 'I have a desktop in my work so I usually do by desktop and sometimes when I outside from the work I need to type the emails. I just do it on my phone.'

✓ 'I have a desktop at work, so I usually use it, and sometimes when I am away from work I type emails on my phone.'

'Merged sentences for clarity, corrected prepositions and verb choices, and maintained present simple for habitual actions.'

× 'When I was in high school, my teacher computer teacher teach us how to type in a keyboard and he also explained different type of patterns how to type in the QWERTY keywords.'

✓ 'When I was in high school, my computer teacher taught us how to type on a keyboard, and he also explained different types of patterns for typing on the QWERTY keyboard.'

'Teach' should be past tense "taught" to match past time. Use "computer teacher" as single phrase. Use "on a keyboard" rather than "in a keyboard". "different type" -> "different types". "keywords" is wrong; use "keyboard".'

× 'Actually you can only improve your typing by repeatedly doing it.'

✓ 'Actually, you can only improve your typing by practicing it repeatedly.'

'"Repeatedly doing it" is awkward; use gerund "practicing" to express the method of improvement. Keeps present simple general statement.'

× 'It's not a simple way like you can do the typing and improve it.'

✓ 'It is not that simple; you cannot just type occasionally and expect to improve.'

'Original mixes structures and tenses and is unclear. Use present simple to state general truth and rephrase to clarify that consistent practice is needed.'

× 'According to me, I just type again and again repeatingly.'

✓ 'In my opinion, I just type again and again, repeatingly.'

'"According to me" is unnatural; use "In my opinion". "repeatingly" is not common; better to use "repeatedly" or "again and again". Use gerund structure where needed.'

× 'Same thing. It can help me to improve my typing.'

✓ 'The same thing helps me improve my typing.'

'"Same thing" alone is a fragment; combine with main clause. Use "helps me improve" (no "to") for natural phrasing and correct adverb/adjective use.'