Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答应更直接并用自然表达说明偏好，避免重复和语法错误。要用主题句开头，然后用一两句具体原因或例子支持。注意动词搭配（例如 use typing/handwriting 而非 tap/tapping）和句子简洁性。可练习用连词（because, so, therefore）使逻辑更清晰。

例: I prefer handwriting to typing because I write faster and feel more comfortable with a pen. For example, during exams I can organize my thoughts more easily on paper, so I usually choose handwriting for important tests.

提案: 回答需更自然简洁，避免重复并使用恰当词汇（例如 type 而不是 tap）。应有主题句并用一两句具体原因支持，使用连接词如 because 或 so 让句子更连贯。注意句子完整性，避免以停顿结尾。

例: I usually type on a laptop because it is portable and convenient. Since people carry laptops everywhere, it's easy to work or study anywhere, which makes the laptop my preferred choice.

提案: 回答应更流畅并注意时态与语法（例如 I learned, my first laptop, I started to learn typing）。先给出时间点，再说明细节和现状，使用连接词如 but 或 however 来表达对比，并避免口头填充词（uh）。

例: I learned to type when I was about five or six, after my family got our first laptop. However, I still find typing difficult and my speed is quite slow, so I practise regularly to improve.

提案: 回答要具体说明方法和频率，句子要完整且用正确动词形式（e.g. I practice, I write）。可以列举具体练习方式（typing exercises, timed tests, lessons）并说明效果或计划，使用连接词使思路清晰。避免重复短语。

例: I improve my typing by practising regularly on my laptop, doing timed typing exercises and writing essays to increase speed. For instance, before exams I set aside 30 minutes a day to do online typing tests to track my progress.

× Of course handwriting because I think typing is too difficult for me to do this and my tapping speed is very slow.

✓ Of course handwriting, because I think typing is too difficult for me to do and my typing speed is very slow.

句中“tapping”用词不当，应使用“typing”。另外“to do this”多余且不自然，改为“to do”。建议记住动名词/现在分词的正确搭配，并使用与语境相关的词汇（typing 表示打字）。

× So in some important examination I will choose to handwriting the things I can't.

✓ So in some important examinations I will choose to handwrite the things I can't type.

“handwriting”作为名词或形容词不能直接作动词使用，正确动词是“handwrite”。此外“examination”应使用复数或前加冠词，且句尾表达不完整，改为“can't type”。

× I can't adapt the tapping.

✓ I can't adapt to typing.

“adapt”后需要介词“to”引出对象；“tapping”应为“typing”。因此改为“adapt to typing”。

× Well, it must be a laptop keyboard because I think the laptop keyboard is very suitable for everyone to tap in a majority time.

✓ Well, it must be a laptop keyboard because I think the laptop keyboard is suitable for most of the time.

原句中“suitable for everyone to tap in a majority time”结构混乱，使用不当。用“suitable for most of the time”更简洁自然。注意固定搭配“most of the time”。

× People always, people always keep the laptop everywhere.

✓ People always keep their laptops with them everywhere.

重复“People always”是口误，应删除重复并改用“keep their laptops with them”表达随身携带更自然。注意代词和名词的一致性。

× So the laptop keyboard is very, uh, convenient for us to.

✓ So the laptop keyboard is very convenient for us to use.

句尾缺少动词“use”，并且“convenient for us to use”是正确用法。建议注意不定式补语的完整性。

× Uh, when I was 5 or 6 years old, my home guide, the first laptop and at that time I started to learn how to tap on the keyboard.

✓ When I was 5 or 6 years old, my parents bought the first laptop for our home, and at that time I started to learn how to type on the keyboard.

原句缺少谓语（“my home guide, the first laptop”不通顺），应补全“bought the first laptop for our home”。“tap”应为“type”。注意过去时间点应使用过去式。

× But As for me, uh, it is still very difficult because my typing speed is very low, so I have to learning, practice it again and again.

✓ But for me, it is still very difficult because my typing speed is very low, so I have to learn and practice it again and again.

“have to”后应接动词原形“learn”，而不是现在分词“learning”。并且并列动作用“and”。建议牢记情态/半情态动词后接动词原形。

× By practice on my laptop again and again, when some important examination come, I have to I have to use my laptop keyboard to practice to to write some essays in my thesis on the laptop.

✓ By practicing on my laptop again and again, when some important examinations come, I have to use my laptop keyboard to practice writing essays for my thesis on the laptop.

动名词“practicing”用作方式状语更合适；“examination”用复数或前加冠词；“practice to to write”结构错误，正确为“practice writing”。建议注意动名词与不定式的选择及重复词的删除。