Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, correct key vocabulary and grammar, and keep it concise (max 3–4 short sentences). Use linking words to add one specific reason and an example. Focus on accuracy: correct verb forms, articles and word choice (e.g., "typing" not "time," "documents" not "mattress").

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s faster and more convenient for long documents. For example, when I write emails or reports on my computer I can edit quickly and use spell-check, which saves time. Also, typing makes it easier to store and share my work.

提案: Answer directly and use precise vocabulary. Say "laptop" or "desktop" clearly, give one specific reason and one short example. Improve sentence fluency and correct word forms (e.g., "type," "compact" → "compact size," "cell" → unclear). Use linking word like "because" and "for example."

例: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because its compact size makes it easy to carry between home and university. For example, I regularly write emails and reports on my laptop, which is more efficient than handwriting for my work.

提案: Start with a clear time reference (e.g., "when I was about ten"). Use correct verb forms and clearer nouns ("learned to type," "computer class"). Provide one supporting detail about how you learned and one about how you improved, using linking words like "and" or "since then."

例: I learned to type when I was about ten at school in a basic computer class. Since then I practised regularly with typing exercises and games, which helped me become faster and more accurate.

提案: Give a clear strategy-focused answer: state one or two methods you use to improve (practice time, exercises, posture). Be specific about frequency and tools, and correct unclear phrases (e.g., "doing regular timed practice and online exercises"). Use linking words like "for example" to introduce specifics.

例: I improve my typing by doing regular timed practice and using online typing exercises to build speed and accuracy. For example, I practise for 15–20 minutes every day and focus on proper typing posture and finger placement.

× Oh I prefer time because it faster and more convenient for composing long mattress and document especially on a computer or phone.

✓ Oh, I prefer typing because it's faster and more convenient for composing long messages and documents, especially on a computer or phone.

Multiple errors: 'time' is wrong word; correct is 'typing' (word choice). Missing comma after 'Oh'. 'it faster' lacks auxiliary and apostrophe for 'it is' -> 'it's' (third person singular contraction) which is a third person singular issue (ID 2) and present tense form (ID 6) but per instructions we report the main type as incorrect word/number and singular/plural issue. 'mattress' is incorrect word; correct is 'messages'. 'document' should be plural 'documents' to agree with 'long' and general reference (singular/plural issue). Suggestion: use correct vocabulary ('typing', 'messages'), include the contraction 'it's' or 'it is', and pluralize nouns when speaking generally.

× For example when I rise say or e-mail typing help me edit quickly and use to live speak.

✓ For example, when I write an email, typing helps me edit quickly and use spell-check.

'rise' is wrong word; should be 'write' (word choice). 'e-mail' is fine as 'email'. 'typing help' is missing third person singular agreement -> should be 'typing helps' (third person singular issue, ID 2). 'use to live speak' is unintelligible; likely meant 'use spell-check' or 'use live speech-to-text' — chosen 'use spell-check' as plausible. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement ('typing helps') and choose correct verbs and phrases ('write', 'spell-check').

× Well yes, I tie on laptop keyboard every day because I use it for work and study to compact layout, make it convenient to carry around.

✓ Well yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I use it for work and study; its compact layout makes it convenient to carry around.

'tie' is incorrect word; should be 'type' (word choice). Missing article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' -> 'a laptop keyboard'. 'to compact layout' is incorrect structure; use possessive 'its compact layout' and verb 'makes' to agree with singular subject (third person singular issue, ID 2 and subject-verb agreement ID 27). Suggestion: use correct verb 'type', include articles where needed, and ensure subject-verb agreement in the clause ('layout makes').

× For example I write e-mail and report on monitor with sell time and compare to handwriting.

✓ For example, I write emails and reports on a monitor because it saves time compared to handwriting.

Missing commas. 'e-mail and report' should be plural 'emails and reports' (singular/plural issue). 'on monitor' needs article 'on a monitor' (preposition/article issue, IDs 11 and 22). 'with sell time' is incorrect phrase; intended 'saves time' (word choice). 'compare to handwriting' should be 'compared to handwriting' to show comparison (incorrect verb form/tense, ID 10 or 6). Suggestion: pluralize nouns when generalizing, include articles, use correct verbs ('saves') and the correct comparative form 'compared to'.

× Wow, I learnt to tie on the keyboard when I was around 10 years old at school UMM, where I had a basic computer class to talk to, typing and practicing.

✓ Wow, I learned to type on the keyboard when I was around 10 years old at school, where I had a basic computer class to learn typing and do practice exercises.

'learnt' is acceptable in British English but 'learned' is common in American English; either is okay. 'tie' is wrong word; should be 'type' (word choice). 'to talk to, typing and practicing' is ungrammatical: intended 'to learn typing and practice' or 'to learn typing and practice regularly' (sentence structure error, ID 26). Suggestion: use correct verb 'type' and clearer phrasing 'learn typing and practice' or 'learned typing and practised regularly'.

× Practicing regularly with symbol expression and game help me improve, speak and accurately.

✓ Practicing regularly with exercises and typing games helps me improve my speed and accuracy.

'symbol expression' is unclear; use 'exercises' (word choice). 'game' should be plural 'games' (singular/plural issue). 'help' must agree with singular gerund subject 'Practicing' -> 'helps' (third person singular issue, ID 2/27). 'improve, speak and accurately' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'improve my speed and accuracy'. Suggestion: revise to meaningful nouns ('exercises', 'typing games'), ensure verb agreement ('helps'), and state the objects of improvement clearly ('speed and accuracy').

× Well hiding in the regular using tiring shower and online experience to build speed and accuracy.

✓ Well, I practice regularly using typing software and online exercises to build speed and accuracy.

Sentence is ungrammatical and contains unrelated or wrong words ('hiding', 'tiring shower') — this is a sentence structure and word choice issue (ID 26). 'regular using' should be 'practice regularly' or 'regular use'. Suggestion: simplify to 'I practice regularly using typing software and online exercises' and keep a clear subject and verbs.

× For example, I do daily 15 to 20 minutes to do and 1st the thought typing and posture.

✓ For example, I do 15 to 20 minutes of daily practice focusing first on touch typing and posture.

Phrase 'do daily 15 to 20 minutes to do' is incorrect order and missing noun; should be 'do 15 to 20 minutes of daily practice' (sentence structure error, ID 26). '1st the thought typing' is incorrect — intended 'first focus on touch typing' (word choice and order). 'touch typing' is present participle/compound noun; corrected phrase uses 'focusing' or 'focus'. Suggestion: use 'do X minutes of practice' and specify focus: 'first on touch typing and posture'.