Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, um), correct grammar (e.g., "easier to manage"), and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Keep to under 3–4 short sentences.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is easier to manage electronic documents and save time. For example, I can quickly search, edit and share digital files, which is much more convenient than handling paper.

提案: Answer directly and remove hesitation: begin with a clear statement, then add one concise reason with a linking word. Use precise phrasing ("I have a laptop, but I prefer a desktop keyboard because..."), and avoid conflicting conjunctions.

例: I own a laptop, but I prefer using a desktop keyboard because it has a full numeric keypad. This makes entering numbers faster and more comfortable when I work with spreadsheets.

提案: Use correct grammar and a natural tone: give a direct answer, then briefly explain. Avoid awkward phrasing like "we were forced"—use "we were taught" or "we had to learn." Keep sentences short and coherent.

例: I learned to type when I was about ten years old because we had computer lessons at school. The teacher taught us proper finger placement and gave regular practice exercises.

提案: Be specific and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence about the method you use, then give specific details and results using linking words. Correct vocabulary ("typing program is good" → "I use a typing program") and fix unclear phrases ("mad fuel").

例: I use an online typing program that provides structured lessons, practice exercises and timed tests. By completing each lesson regularly, my speed and accuracy have improved significantly.

× I think for, uh, of these documents, I prefer typing because it's more easier for manage managing documents and aid and, uh, also, uh, quickly to.

✓ I think for these documents, I prefer typing because it's easier to manage documents and it is also quicker.

Problems: 'more easier' is incorrect because easier is already comparative; use 'easier' not 'more easier' (type 13). 'for manage managing' shows confusion: correct structure is 'easier to manage' (infinitive), so replace gerund with infinitive (type 8/10) but primary classification is adjective/adverb misuse. Also 'quickly to' is incorrect word order and form; use 'quicker' as adjective modifying the implied process or 'it is also quicker.' Suggestion: use 'easier to + verb' and avoid double comparatives; keep parallel structure 'easier to manage and quicker.'

× Umm, I have a laptop and but I prefer using desktop keyboard because it has a full numerical keypad.

✓ Umm, I have a laptop, but I prefer using a desktop keyboard because it has a full numeric keypad.

Problems: 'and but' is redundant conjunctions; remove 'and' (type 16). Missing article before 'desktop keyboard' — use 'a' (article error type 22/17). 'numerical keypad' is acceptable but 'numeric keypad' is more common; main issues are conjunction and article. Suggestion: use a single conjunction and include the indefinite article before singular countable nouns.

× I remember I learned how to type at about 10 years old because we had a computer lesson at that time.

✓ I remember learning how to type when I was about 10 years old because we had a computer lesson then.

Problems: 'I remember I learned' is grammatical but awkward; 'I remember learning' is more natural (tense/aspect) (type 6/5). 'at about 10 years old' should be 'when I was about 10 years old' (preposition/structure type 11/26). 'at that time' is wordy; 'then' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'remember + -ing' for recalled past events and use 'when I was ... years old.'

× So we forced, we was, we were forced to learn how to use it.

✓ So we were forced to learn how to use it.

Problems: 'we was' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; the correct past tense plural is 'we were' (type 27). Also the phrase repeats unnecessarily. Suggestion: keep a single correct past passive 'we were forced.'

× I use a typing program as good. They give a structure, exercise and time test.

✓ I use a typing program, which is good. It gives a structure, exercises, and timed tests.

Problems: 'as good' is incorrect; use a relative clause 'which is good' or adjective 'It is good' (type 13). 'They give' referring to 'program' should be singular 'It gives' (subject-verb agreement type 27). 'exercise and time test' needs pluralization and correct form 'exercises' and 'timed tests' (singular/plural/type 1 and word formation type 9/10). Suggestion: match subject number and use correct noun forms and modifiers.

× By following each section and practice regularly, I've improved my typing speed and mad fuel.

✓ By following each section and practicing regularly, I've improved my typing speed and accuracy.

Problems: 'By following each section and practice regularly' mixes gerund and base verb; use parallel gerunds 'following' and 'practicing' (type 8/10). 'mad fuel' is nonsensical here; likely intended 'made full' or 'accuracy' or 'made progress.' Context suggests 'accuracy' or 'made progress'; I corrected to 'accuracy.' Suggestion: maintain parallel gerund forms after 'By' and choose appropriate noun ('accuracy' or 'made a lot of progress').