Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and repetition. Also correct vocabulary mistakes (e.g., “my handwriting” not “my hair”).

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because I can type much faster and it’s easier to edit and share my work. For instance, I can quickly send messages to friends or copy text into emails, which saves time and reduces mistakes.

提案: Give a direct answer (desktop or laptop) then explain briefly with clear reasons. Use correct verbs and avoid unclear phrases like “I'm tired on my desktop” or fragmented sentences. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I type on a desktop every day because I use my computer for writing posts and communicating on social media. As a result, I spend several hours online, mainly editing documents and replying to messages.

提案: Answer with a clear time reference then give concise supporting detail. Use correct possessive/pronoun forms and natural verbs (e.g., “taught me how to type”). Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases like “apply all the keyboard.”

例: I learned to type when I was about 13. My secondary school’s IT teacher, Mr. Ward, taught our class basic typing skills and we practised regularly in computer lab sessions.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and then give specific, coherent methods using correct collocations (e.g., “typing games,” “online competitions,” “regular practice”). Use linking words like “for example” and give one concrete detail about frequency or results.

例: I improve my typing by practising with online typing games and taking part in typing competitions. For example, I play ten-minute typing drills every morning, which has increased my speed and accuracy over the past few months.

× For my typing, I think it's easy for me to send the message to my friends.

✓ For typing, I find it easy to send messages to my friends.

The original sentence uses an awkward pronoun phrase 'For my typing' and singular 'the message'. Replace 'For my typing' with 'For typing' and use plural 'messages' to match general meaning; also 'I find it easy' sounds more natural than 'I think it's easy for me'.

× But my hair I think my handwriting is not very good.

✓ But, to be honest, I think my handwriting is not very good.

'My hair' is an incorrect phrase likely from a mishearing. Remove it and use a clear phrase like 'to be honest' for discourse. The pronoun use 'my handwriting' is fine; correct the surrounding words for clarity.

× So I need you.

✓ So I need to practice more.

'So I need you' is a sentence structure error and unclear in context. The speaker likely meant they need practice or help. Using 'I need to practice more' fits the context and question about handwriting/typing ability.

× Yes, of course I'm tired on my desktop every day because every day I use my computer to share my ideas or message with my friends through social media or different blogs.

✓ Yes, of course I sit at my desktop every day because I use my computer to share my ideas and messages with my friends through social media and various blogs.

'I'm tired on my desktop' is incorrect; likely intended 'I sit at my desktop'. Also use plural 'messages' and 'various' instead of 'different'. Adjust verbs and prepositions: 'sit at' instead of 'tired on'. This fixes subject-verb and preposition misuse and makes sentence natural.

× Sometime a little time, but I documents.

✓ Sometimes I only have a little time, but I do work on documents.

Original sentence fragments lack verbs and clear structure. 'Sometime a little time' should be 'Sometimes I only have a little time'. 'but I documents' needs a verb; 'I do work on documents' clarifies meaning.

× I remember that my secondary teachers, his IT teachers called Mr. Ward, taught me how to apply all the keyboard.

✓ I remember that my secondary IT teacher, Mr. Ward, taught me how to use the keyboard.

Use singular 'teacher' if referring to one person, remove 'his', and change 'apply all the keyboard' to 'use the keyboard'. 'Taught' is correct past tense; simplify to natural phrasing.

× This was my 13th birthday.

✓ It was on my 13th birthday.

Use 'It was on my 13th birthday' to indicate when the teaching happened. 'This was my 13th birthday' is less natural in this context.

× For example, play the typing games on the on the Internet and participate some hyping competitions.

✓ For example, I play typing games on the Internet and participate in some typing competitions.

After 'for example' the speaker should use a subject and verb ('I play'). Fix duplicated 'on the'. Use 'participate in' (correct preposition) and correct 'hyping' to 'typing'.

× It's very helpful for me.

✓ They are very helpful for me.

Refers to 'typing games and competitions' (plural), so use 'They are' rather than 'It is'. Match pronoun number to the plural noun.