Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with brief examples. Avoid filler words (uh, you know) and correct basic grammar (e.g., "faster" without "the", "it destroys your style" -> explain clearly).

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can quickly edit messages and essays on my laptop, and I chat with friends every day, which helps me practice typing. In contrast, handwriting takes longer and can be messier, so I rarely use it for schoolwork.

提案: Give a direct answer then support with specific and coherent details. Remove fillers and correct grammar (e.g., "assignments I need to complete", "based on IELTS topics"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

例: I usually type on my laptop because I find the keyboard comfortable for long essays. Because I have regular assignments and I practice writing IELTS topics, the laptop helps me type faster and save my work more easily.

提案: Give a clear time and simple sequence. Avoid contradiction ("I don't attempt to learn" then describing lessons). Use past tense correctly and concise linking words ("when I was in elementary school"). Provide one specific detail about the lesson or practice.

例: I learned basic typing when I was in elementary school during a computer class. The teacher showed us how to place our fingers on the keys, and we practised with simple exercises, which helped me start using a computer keyboard regularly.

提案: Answer directly and give concrete methods and frequency. Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Mention specific activities or tools (e.g., typing software, timed practice) and link ideas clearly.

例: I improve my typing by practising every day, usually for 20–30 minutes. For example, I chat with friends on my phone, type essays on my laptop, and sometimes use online typing tests to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because typing is more convenient and the faster than handwriting and I do every day I chat with my friend and you know it's easier to correct your mistakes with typing, but when it comes to handwriting, it's much complicated and it destroys your style and.

✓ I prefer typing because typing is more convenient and faster than handwriting. I chat with my friends every day, and you know it's easier to correct your mistakes when typing. But when it comes to handwriting, it's much more complicated and it can ruin your style.

Several issues: 'the faster' is incorrect article+comparative; correct is 'faster than'. 'I do every day I chat' is ungrammatical; reorder to 'I chat with my friends every day'. Use plural 'friends'. 'it's easier to correct your mistakes with typing' is acceptable but improved to 'when typing' for naturalness. 'much complicated' requires an adverb 'much more complicated'. Provide clearer sentence boundaries and conjunctions.

× I use my laptop and phone every day for my studies. Uh yeah, I actually use laptop keyboard uh, because I have the assignment that I need to apply and I like, I always, uh, write essays, umm, base it to related to IELTS topics.

✓ I use my laptop and phone every day for my studies. I actually use my laptop keyboard because I have assignments that I need to complete, and I often write essays based on IELTS-related topics.

Pronoun/article errors: 'use laptop keyboard' needs the article 'my laptop keyboard'. 'the assignment that I need to apply' is incorrect verb and article; use plural 'assignments' if general and verb 'complete' or 'do'. 'base it to related to' is ungrammatical; use 'based on IELTS-related topics'. Also replace 'I like, I always' with 'I often' for fluency.

× Actually, I don't attempt to learn typing, but, uh, in my elementary school time, I, we have a subject that, uh, that's teach us, umm, computer and that and that time I just, uh, write, uh, typing skills. And I already know, I don't know, like I start typing with on computer.

✓ Actually, I didn't try to formally learn typing, but in elementary school we had a subject that taught us computers, and at that time I learned some typing skills. I don't remember exactly when I started typing on a computer.

Tense and verb form errors: 'don't attempt to learn' should be past 'didn't try' because referring to past. 'we have' should be past 'we had'. 'that's teach us' should be past 'that taught us' (teach -> taught). 'I just write typing skills' is incorrect; use 'learned some typing skills'. Final sentence is unclear and ungrammatical; rephrase to 'I don't remember exactly when I started typing on a computer'.

× So when you practice something regularly, it's improve. It improves 100%. So I just practice every day. I just use my phone and chatting with my friends. I just use my laptop and typing on my keyboard and typing to my private channel. So it's become improved.

✓ So when you practice something regularly, it improves. It definitely improves. I practice every day. I use my phone to chat with my friends, and I use my laptop to type on the keyboard and post in my private channel. So my typing has improved.

Verb form and agreement: 'it's improve' is incorrect; use 'it improves'. 'It improves 100%' is informal; 'definitely improves' is better. 'I just use my phone and chatting' mixes verb forms; use 'use my phone to chat'. 'typing on my keyboard and typing to my private channel' is repetitive and ungrammatical; use 'type on the keyboard and post in my private channel'. 'So it's become improved' is wrong passive/tense; use present perfect 'my typing has improved'.