Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more natural and concise, correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g. "information" is uncountable), and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. For example, mention a concrete task that benefits from typing (e.g. saving drafts, searching text).

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because digital text is much easier to search and edit. For example, when I draft reports or code comments, I can quickly find phrases and revise them, which saves a lot of time.

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, fix tense and article errors, and avoid repeating job information. Use linking words to list specific items and choose precise vocabulary ("documentation" singular or "documents").

例: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I work as a software engineer. I mainly write code, reply to emails, and prepare technical documentation.

提案: Make the timeline clearer and avoid repetition. Use one concise topic sentence about when you started and one supporting sentence explaining how and why your skills improved, with linking words (e.g. "later", "because").

例: I learned to type in high school, but my speed improved significantly later when I became a software engineer. Because I type daily for coding and documentation, I practised a lot and gradually became much faster.

提案: Be grammatically accurate (e.g. "measures", "lets", "results"), and give one specific example of a website or feature and explain how it helps you improve. Use a linking word to show result or purpose.

例: I use an online tool that measures my typing speed and accuracy and lets me compare my scores with other users. As a result, I can identify weak keys and practise specific exercises to increase both speed and accuracy.

× Since I worked as a software engineer, I have a lot of opportunity to edit informations, so it's.

✓ Since I worked as a software engineer, I have had a lot of opportunities to edit information, so I do.

Issues: 'have a lot of opportunity' should use plural 'opportunities' and present perfect 'have had' fits continuing relevance from past work; 'informations' is uncountable and should be 'information'; sentence ending 'so it's' is incomplete and unclear, corrected to 'so I do' to complete the idea. Suggestion: use correct countable/uncountable nouns and complete clauses; use present perfect 'have had' to link past experience to present effect.

× Yes, of course, because I worked as a software engineer, I type on laptop keyboard every day and I need to write code, emails and documentations.

✓ Yes, of course. Because I worked as a software engineer, I type on a laptop keyboard every day and I need to write code, emails and documentation.

Issues: missing articles before 'laptop keyboard' (should be 'a laptop keyboard'); 'documentations' is uncountable and should be 'documentation'. Also sentence run-on fixed by splitting. Suggestion: use articles with singular countable nouns and use 'documentation' as uncountable.

× I started to type on a keyboard when I was a high school student, but basically I improved my typing skills after I became a software engineer, and working as a software engineer improved my typing skills a lot.

✓ I started to type on a keyboard when I was a high school student, but I basically improved my typing skills after I became a software engineer; working as a software engineer improved my typing skills a lot.

Issue: sentence is repetitive and slightly awkward but tense usage is generally correct. Main correction: added comma and semicolon and moved 'basically' for natural word order. Suggestion: avoid repetition by combining clauses and placing adverbs in natural positions.

× I use a website that measure my typing speed and accuracy and also the site let me compare with the typing result with other players.

✓ I use a website that measures my typing speed and accuracy, and the site also lets me compare my typing results with other users.

Issues: Subject-verb agreement: 'measure' should be 'measures' and 'let' should be 'lets' (third person singular). Also 'compare with the typing result with other players' is awkward: correct to 'compare my typing results with other users'. Suggestion: ensure verbs match third-person singular and make prepositional phrases concise and correct.