Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更简洁并直接回应问题，避免重复词汇并修正语法错误。可以先给出主题句（I prefer typing），然后用一到两句具体理由支持（例如方便、效率高、便于保存），并举一两个具体例子。注意冠词和名词单复数的使用。

例: I prefer typing. It’s more convenient and faster for me, and it’s easy to save and organize files on a computer, so I don’t lose notes like I did with handwritten papers.

提案: 答句中存在重复、用词错误和不必要信息，需直接说明使用哪种设备并给出简短原因。避免语音词（Well）过多，纠正形容词和名词形式（e.g. 'more convenient'），删除无关或错误的短语。

例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I don’t have a desktop. The laptop is more convenient for me and I’ve tried an external keyboard before but prefer the built-in one.

提案: 回答总体清晰，但注意介词和单复数（e.g. 'at primary school' / 'in primary school'，'typing games' fine）。可用一两句补充具体时间或举例说明技能学到的内容以增加细节性。使用连接词使句子流畅。

例: I learned to type in primary school when I was about eight. Our computer teacher taught touch-typing techniques, and we practiced daily with typing games to improve speed and accuracy.

提案: 回答要保持时态一致并更具体说明当前的练习方法。删去重复词，明确指出你现在通过哪些具体活动练习（例如写报告、回复邮件、做在线练习）。可加上频率或目标以增加内容丰富度。

例: When I was at school I improved my typing through competitive typing games. Now I practise by writing reports and emails regularly at work and using online typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× Well, I prefer typing because typing for me is more convenient and efficient and additionally typing can also help me to store the my files while handwriting.

✓ Well, I prefer typing because typing is more convenient and efficient for me, and it can also help me store my files compared with handwriting.

句中多处问题：1) 不需要重复主语“for me”，可改为“is more convenient and efficient for me”。2) “help me to store the my files”中有多余的“the”和不必要的“to”，正确用法为“help me store my files”。3) 与“handwriting”比较时常用“compared with handwriting”。建议简化句子，去掉冗余，注意定冠词用法和动词不定式省略to的情况。

× I always lost my documents.

✓ I always lose my documents.

原句时态与频率副词冲突：使用“always”表示习惯应使用一般现在时“lose”，而原句用过去式“lost”。因此改为一般现在时以表达经常发生的情况。

× Well, I I tap on the laptop keyboard every day because I don't have a test testable keyboard and so the laptop keyboard is much convenient for me and I also tried the test testable keyboard.

✓ Well, I tap on the laptop keyboard every day because I don't have a desktop keyboard, so the laptop keyboard is much more convenient for me, and I also tried the desktop keyboard.

句中问题：1) 重复“I I”。2) “test testable keyboard”显然是错误词，应为“desktop keyboard”。3) “much convenient”须用比较级“much more convenient”。4) 时态不一致：前半句用一般现在时，后半句“tried”用过去式，若想表达曾经尝试过保留过去式，否则与现在时一致。建议修正为上面句子并删除重复。

× Well, I I tap on the laptop keyboard every day because I don't have a test testable keyboard and so the laptop keyboard is much convenient for me and I also tried the test testable keyboard.

✓ Well, I tap on the laptop keyboard every day because I don't have a desktop keyboard, so the laptop keyboard is much more convenient for me, and I also tried the desktop keyboard.

“I don't have a ... keyboard”属于存在/拥有表述，注意名词词形和冠词使用。原句中词汇错误导致意思不清，需改为“desktop keyboard”。另外冠词与名词单复数要匹配。

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? Student: I learned how to type in the keyboard in my primary schools.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard in primary school.

问题包括介词错误（应为“on the keyboard”）、名词单复数和习惯用法（通常说“primary school”而不是“primary schools”）以及不必要的冠词。时态使用过去式“learned”是正确的，但其他部分需调整。

× My computer teacher taught us how to type on the keyboard and some typing skills.

✓ My computer teacher taught us how to type on the keyboard and taught us some typing skills.

原句结构并列不清，容易产生歧义。将两个并列宾语改为两个并列动词短语或改写为“taught us how to type on the keyboard and taught us some typing skills”更清晰。介词“on the keyboard”正确，问题在于句子并列结构。

× Additionally, we also have the typing games to compete the typing speed almost every day.

✓ Additionally, we also played typing games to compete for typing speed almost every day.

原句中“have the typing games”用法不自然，且“to compete the typing speed”搭配错误，应为“compete for typing speed”或“compete in typing speed”。时态与语境（过去在小学）一致，改为过去式“played”。

× In my primary schools, I improve my typing skills by by competing with my friends using the typing games.

✓ In primary school, I improved my typing skills by competing with my friends in typing games.

问题：1) 重复“by by”。2) 时态应为过去式“improved”以匹配“in primary school”。3) 介词搭配及名词短语更自然为“competing with my friends in typing games”。建议注意时态一致和去除重复词。

× But nowadays I try to improve my typing skills by typing the reports, e-mail and it answers during the work and study.

✓ But nowadays I try to improve my typing skills by typing reports, emails, and IT answers during work and study.

原句中定冠词“the”不必要，名词复数和拼写错误（e-mail -> emails；it answers -> IT answers），以及“during the work and study”不自然，改为“during work and study”或更具体的“at work and while studying”。建议注意冠词、省略和专有名词大小写与拼写。