Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and directly answer with a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations and fillers, and add one specific reason or example. Keep to under five sentences and use a linking word when adding detail.

例: I prefer handwriting. I learned to write by myself when I was about six, so it feels natural and comfortable to me. Moreover, handwriting helps me remember information better, for example when I take study notes I recall the material more easily.

提案: Give a direct answer specifying which device, avoid vague phrasing and irrelevant comments. Use one or two clear reasons linked with a connector and use relevant vocabulary (desktop, laptop, smartphone).

例: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because I study and do assignments online. However, I still handwrite notes for memorization, so I use both depending on the task.

提案: Provide a concise time reference and correct irrelevant or incorrect words. Avoid long hesitations and clarify with a brief example or context. Use linking words if adding detail.

例: I think I learned to type when I was about ten after my family bought a new computer. At first I practised simple typing games, which helped me become faster.

提案: Start with a direct topic sentence describing your method, then give specific actions and a linking word to connect ideas. Reduce informal contractions and vague phrases, and keep it under five sentences.

例: I improve my typing by practising every day. For example, I spend 15 minutes on typing tutor websites and gradually increase speed, and I also focus on accuracy by slowing down and correcting mistakes.

× Umm, I believe I prefer handwriting because, umm, when I was a kid, I was just six or five, I don't know, but I learned by myself handwriting.

✓ Umm, I believe I prefer handwriting because, umm, when I was a kid, I was maybe five or six, I don't know, but I taught myself how to write by hand.

The original mixes tenses and uses unnatural word order. 'I learned by myself handwriting' is ungrammatical. Use 'taught myself' or 'learned by myself' plus 'how to write by hand.' Also use 'five or six' instead of 'six or five' for natural order and 'maybe' for uncertainty.

× And then I'll.

✓ And then I'll continue to write by hand.

The fragment 'And then I'll.' is incomplete and lacks an object or verb phrase. Complete the sentence with the intended action, e.g., 'continue to write by hand.' Use a full clause after 'I'll.'

× Yes, unfortunately nowadays I should umm, I should use some technology because handwriting is not uh, musical all the time.

✓ Yes, unfortunately nowadays I have to use some technology because handwriting is not practical all the time.

'Should' is used incorrectly for obligation here; 'have to' or 'need to' better expresses necessity. 'Musical' is the wrong adjective; 'practical' fits the intended meaning.

× You are, you can writing something short, but still sometimes I should learn something, umm.

✓ You can write something short, but sometimes I still need to learn more.

'You can writing' is incorrect: use base verb 'write' after 'can.' 'I should learn something' is vague; 'I still need to learn more' is clearer and fits context. Also remove unnecessary 'are'.

× I don't remember that, but I think, uh, then I was 10, we got a new umm, bathtub and I learned there how can I write in keyboard?

✓ I don't remember exactly, but I think I was 10 when we got a new computer and I learned there how to type on the keyboard.

Several errors: 'bathtub' is likely wrong word—use 'computer.' Word order in indirect question should be 'how to type on the keyboard,' not 'how can I write in keyboard.' Use past simple consistently ('I was,' 'we got,' 'I learned').

× First of all, I think you should do that every day, because if you wanna do something good, you should repeat that and learn about it and you maybe take a time.

✓ First of all, I think you should practice every day, because if you want to get good at something, you should repeat it and give yourself time.

'Do that' is vague; 'practice' fits better. Use 'want to' instead of colloquial 'wanna.' 'Repeat that and learn about it' is awkward—use 'repeat it.' 'You maybe take a time' is ungrammatical; use 'give yourself time.'