Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap kısa ve doğrudan; ancak daha doğal ve gelişmiş olması için nedenlerinizi belirtin ve bağlaç kullanın. Ayrıca gereksiz sesleri (“Uh”) çıkarın. Öneri: bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın, sonra bir veya iki destekleyici neden verin ve sonuç cümlesi ekleyin.

例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I can organize ideas with diagrams and summaries, which makes revision easier.

提案: Cümle mantıklı ancak bazı kelime seçimi ve tekrar hataları var ("use use", "convergent"). Daha doğal bir kelime seçin, tekrarları düzeltin ve bağlaçlarla akışı güçlendirin. Ayrıca bir kısa örnek ekleyin.

例: I don't use a desktop or laptop daily; I usually type on my phone because it's more portable and convenient. For instance, I often reply to emails while commuting, which saves time.

提案: Cevap tekrar içeriyor ve detay eksik. Tekrarları kaldırın, açık bir zaman ifadesi verin ve kısa bir açıklama ekleyin (nasıl veya kim öğretti). Bağlaç kullanın ve 1-2 destekleyici cümle verin.

例: I learned to type when I was about eight years old. My primary school had computer lessons, and the teacher taught us basic typing techniques which I practiced at home.

提案: Cevap belirsiz ve yazım hatası var (taping → typing). Daha spesifik ve yapılandırılmış bir cevap verin: bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın, sonra kullandığınız yöntemleri ve bir örnek veya sonuç belirtin. Bağlaçlarla mantığı güçlendirin.

例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing tests and using my phone's autocorrect feedback to correct mistakes. As a result, my accuracy has improved and I can type faster when messaging.

× I don't use use desktop or a laptop, I usually use my phone.

✓ I don't use a desktop or a laptop; I usually use my phone.

The sentence has a missing article before 'desktop' and the repetition 'use use'. Add the indefinite article 'a' before singular countable nouns ('a desktop', 'a laptop'). Also replace the comma with a semicolon or a period to properly join two independent clauses. Suggestion: say 'I don't use a desktop or a laptop; I usually use my phone.'

× It's more convergent and portable so I can type my messages and emails on the go.

✓ It's more convenient and portable, so I can type my messages and emails on the go.

The adjective 'convergent' is incorrect in this context; the intended adjective is 'convenient'. Also add a comma before 'so' when joining independent clauses. Suggestion: replace 'convergent' with 'convenient' and add a comma: 'It's more convenient and portable, so...'.

× When I was a kid, I learned it when I was a kid.

✓ I learned to type when I was a kid.

The original sentence repeats the phrase 'when I was a kid', causing redundancy and awkward structure. Also 'learned it' is vague—specify what 'it' refers to: 'to type'. Suggestion: remove redundancy and state 'I learned to type when I was a kid.'

× I don't know how I improve my taping.

✓ I don't know how to improve my typing.

Errors: 'taping' is incorrect (means recording with tape); the correct noun is 'typing'. Also the verb pattern after 'know how' should be 'know how to + base verb' rather than 'know how I + verb'. Suggestion: use 'know how to improve' and correct spelling to 'typing': 'I don't know how to improve my typing.'