Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid grammar mistakes, remove redundancy, and add a specific example. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and correct comparative forms (easier, more comfortable). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it lets me record my ideas quickly and clearly. For example, I can draft reports on my laptop and email them instantly to my manager, which makes collaboration faster and more convenient.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (verb forms, articles), and be specific about why you choose a laptop. Use one linking word to connect ideas and avoid repeating the same adjective. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and suits my work as a lawyer and my English studies. For instance, I draft case notes and homework on my laptop and can quickly send emails or edit documents on the go.

提案: Provide a clear timeline with correct sentence structure, avoid awkward phrasing, and combine short fragments. Add a brief specific detail about how you practised. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words (when, so, by).

例: I learned to type when I was about 14 or 15 after I first used a computer. I practised every day by typing essays and short stories, which helped me improve my speed and accuracy.

提案: Answer directly and specifically: state the method you use, give concrete practices (timed exercises, online lessons), correct word choice and strange phrases (remove ‘Pisces kind of item’). Use linking words (for example, by, so) and limit to 2–3 sentences.

例: I improve my typing by practising regularly with online typing exercises and timed tests. For example, I do 15 minutes of accuracy drills each day and type full essays to build speed and consistency.

× I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more easier to write down your complete ideas using keyboard.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because it is easier to write down complete ideas using a keyboard.

The phrase 'more easier' is incorrect: 'easier' already is the comparative form, so 'more' is redundant (Grammar problem type 13 and 25). Also articles and possessive pronoun: 'your complete ideas' can be simplified to 'complete ideas' and 'using keyboard' requires an article 'a keyboard'. Suggestion: use the single comparative 'easier' and include the article 'a'.

× Also, it is very comfortable for me to send this kind of document to my manager and teacher.

✓ Also, it is very convenient for me to send these kinds of documents to my manager and my teacher.

'This kind of document' is inconsistent with general meaning; 'these kinds of documents' or 'this kind of document' scenario should match number. 'Comfortable' describes feelings, 'convenient' better describes suitability. Add article/possessive 'my' before 'teacher' for parallelism (Grammar problem types 12 and 22). Suggestion: use 'convenient' and ensure plurality and parallel possessives match.

× This makes our collaboration more easier, faster and comfortable.

✓ This makes our collaboration easier, faster, and more comfortable.

'More easier' is incorrect because 'easier' already comparative; 'comfortable' when compared should be 'more comfortable'. Maintain parallel structure: use comparatives consistently and include Oxford comma for clarity (Grammar problem types 13 and 25). Suggestion: use 'easier, faster, and more comfortable.'

× I am working as a lawyer and also studying English language so format is very important to use laptop keyboard for everyday life.

✓ I work as a lawyer and am also studying English, so formatting is very important and I use a laptop keyboard in everyday life.

Use simple present for habitual facts: 'I work' instead of 'I am working' (both acceptable but simple present clearer here). 'Studying English language' should be 'studying English'. Sentence was run-on; split and reorder for clarity. 'Use laptop keyboard for everyday life' needs article 'a' and clearer phrasing (Grammar problem types 6, 22, 26). Suggestion: use simple present for routines and add articles and conjunctions to join clauses properly.

× I am write down my homeworks and everyday task using laptop keyboard and it is very comfortable and flexible for me to use it and send my emails and messages with it.

✓ I write down my homework and daily tasks using a laptop keyboard, and it is very comfortable and convenient for me to use it to send emails and messages.

'I am write' is incorrect; use 'I write' or 'I am writing' (subject-verb agreement and tense) (Grammar problem type 2/6). 'Homeworks' should be uncountable 'homework'; 'everyday task' plural 'daily tasks'. Add article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard'. 'Flexible' is awkward; 'convenient' fits better. Avoid repeating 'with it' (Grammar problem types 1,13,22). Suggestion: correct verb form, use uncountable nouns, pluralize where needed, and choose appropriate adjective.

× I was about 14 or 15 years old when first I saw computer and laptop.

✓ I was about 14 or 15 years old when I first saw a computer and a laptop.

Word order: 'when first I saw' should be 'when I first saw'. Include articles 'a computer and a laptop'. Tense 'was' fine. (Grammar problem types 5 and 22). Suggestion: place 'first' after subject and add articles.

× I was thrilled by this kind of digital item and I wanted to practice on it.

✓ I was thrilled by these kinds of digital devices and wanted to practice on them.

'This kind of digital item' is awkward and singular while context implies multiple device types; use 'these kinds of digital devices' or 'this digital device'. Also maintain parallel subject: 'I was thrilled... and wanted' omits repeated subject for smoother flow (Grammar problem types 13 and 26). Suggestion: choose correct number and noun, and streamline verbs.

× During all day.

✓ All day long.

'During all day' is a fragment and unnatural; 'all day long' or 'during the whole day' are correct expressions (Grammar problem type 26). Suggestion: use complete phrase 'All day long' or combine into next sentence.

× I was typing some kind of essays on it and trying to improve my proficiency using by this item.

✓ I typed various essays on it and tried to improve my proficiency by using this device.

Tense consistency: use simple past 'typed' and 'tried' to match 'I was about 14...' Earlier progressive is acceptable but here past simple is clearer (Grammar problem type 5). 'Using by this item' is wrong word order and preposition; correct is 'by using this device.' Also 'some kind of essays' should be 'various essays' (Grammar problem types 11 and 26). Suggestion: use correct past tense, proper preposition order, and clearer vocabulary.

× I am improving my typing skills by practice because I think that discipline is the best experience if you want to improve something and achieve anything in any work.

✓ I improve my typing skills through practice because I think discipline is the best way to improve and achieve anything in any work.

Use simple present for habitual actions 'I improve' or 'I am improving' both possible; choose simple present for clarity (Grammar problem type 6). 'By practice' should be 'through practice' or 'by practicing'. 'Best experience' is incorrect collocation; use 'best way'. Suggestion: use correct preposition and collocations and consistent tense.

× So when I have to write some essays or task, I always choose a typing process and make my document using Pisces kind of item.

✓ So when I have to write essays or tasks, I always choose to type and create my documents using a personal computer or laptop.

'Some essays or task' mixed plural/singular; make both plural or both singular. 'Choose a typing process' is unnatural; say 'choose to type'. 'Make my document' -> 'create my documents'. 'Pisces kind of item' seems incorrect word choice; likely meant 'PC' or 'personal computer' or 'laptop'. Article use adjusted (Grammar problem types 1,13,22,26). Suggestion: correct plurals, use natural verbs for document creation, and use correct noun for device.