Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and concise: state your preference clearly, give one specific reason, and avoid fillers and repetition. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'Nowadays I prefer typing because it's faster and neater than handwriting') and one supporting detail or example. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: Nowadays I prefer typing because it's faster and produces neater, more readable work. For example, when I write essays or take notes, I can edit quickly and save documents on my laptop.

提案: Answer directly and provide a concise reason with clearer grammar and a linking word. Avoid repeating the same phrase. For example, say which device and why, then add one brief detail about frequency or context.

例: I type on a laptop every day because I do most of my assignments and projects on it. In the evenings I usually work on my laptop for two to three hours to finish school work.

提案: Provide a clear time reference, use correct tense, and organize information with linking words. State when you learned it, mention extra practice or classes, and conclude with the current result. Keep it within three sentences.

例: I learned to type at school in the tenth grade when our teachers gave us basic lessons. After that, I took a few extra typing classes and practised regularly. As a result, I can now type comfortably and quickly.

提案: Be specific and structured: state the main method (practise), then give specific techniques or tools (online exercises, timed tests, proper posture) and a brief example of your routine. Use linking words to organise points and avoid repetition.

例: The best way to improve typing is regular practice. For instance, I use online typing lessons and timed tests for 20 minutes daily, and I focus on posture and accuracy before speed, which has improved my consistency.

× In these days, I love to do typing because it's so much work and uh, when we are doing handwriting, so, uh, it's easy to typing.

✓ These days, I prefer typing because it is less work, and when we write by hand, it is harder to type.

Adverb phrase placement and word choice: 'In these days' should be 'These days'. 'I love to do typing' is unnatural; use 'I prefer typing'. 'It's so much work' conflicts with meaning; likely intended that handwriting is more work, so corrected to 'it is less work'. 'It's easy to typing' is incorrect: 'easy to type' (use base verb after 'to'). Also remove filler 'uh' and redundant conjunctions. Suggestion: place adverbials (These days) at sentence start and use correct infinitive form ('to type').

× I type on a laptop because I have to do many assignments and my projects that.

✓ I type on a laptop because I have many assignments and projects to complete.

Awkward verb and clause structure: 'I have to do many assignments and my projects that' is ungrammatical. Use correct noun phrases and an infinitive purpose clause: 'I have many assignments and projects to complete.' This fits present habitual tense. Remove unnecessary 'do' and trailing 'that'.

× At my school like in my 10th standard my teachers taught me how to do type and after that I took her some classes as well.

✓ At school in tenth grade, my teachers taught me how to type, and after that I took some typing classes.

Tense and verb form problems: 'how to do type' is wrong; use 'how to type'. '10th standard' better phrased 'tenth grade' (style). 'I took her some classes' is incorrect pronoun and word order; use 'I took some typing classes.' Ensure past tense consistency: 'taught' and 'took' are both past simple. Suggest simplifying and using proper object placement.

× So that helps me a lot to learn typing and after sometime I practice and I learn now.

✓ That helped me a lot to learn typing, and after some time I practiced and learned a lot.

Tense inconsistency: speaker refers to past events, so use past tense: 'helped', 'practiced', 'learned'. 'After sometime' should be 'after some time'. 'I practice and I learn now' conflicts with past context; if they mean present ability, say 'I practice now and have improved.' Maintain consistent timeline.

× The main thing is to improve our typing is the practice, and the more practice we do, we the more we learn and the first we can do the practice and the typing is more important.

✓ The main thing to improve typing is practice. The more we practice, the more we learn, so practicing is very important.

Run-on sentence and redundancy: original repeats ideas and misorders clauses. Correct structure: 'The main thing to improve typing is practice.' Use comparative correlative 'The more we practice, the more we learn.' Remove repeated phrases and clarify meaning. Suggest using shorter sentences and correct verb forms ('practice' as noun vs 'practice'/'practice' as verb) and the correlative structure.