Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (tenses, articles, word order) and avoid repetition. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'however' to contrast past and present habits.

例: I prefer typing on a laptop. Because I work in an office on weekdays, I type a lot and feel faster on a keyboard; however, when I was a student I used to write notes by hand for revision.

提案: Give a direct answer, correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles), and avoid unfinished sentences. Provide one clear reason and a brief additional detail if useful. Keep within 2–3 sentences.

例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because my company provides each employee with a laptop. As a result, I work and type mostly on that device, although my boyfriend prefers a desktop.

提案: Answer with a clear time reference and correct article use and tense. Give a specific detail about the class or how you practiced to make the answer informative and coherent. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

例: I learned to type when I was in elementary school. There was a mandatory computer class that taught typing skills, so I practiced regularly with exercises and simple typing software.

提案: Give a complete, structured response: start with a short main idea, then explain current practice and one specific method you would use to improve (e.g., online courses, timed practice, accuracy drills). Avoid filler words and finish the sentence. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: I practice typing daily at work, which has helped me maintain speed and accuracy. If I wanted to improve further, I would use an online typing course and do timed accuracy drills for 15 minutes a day.

× I prefer typing on laptop because on weekday I work at office so I'm used to typing on laptop and when I was a student it is more it more prefer to write on paper with hand.

✓ I prefer typing on a laptop because on weekdays I work at the office, so I'm used to typing on a laptop. When I was a student, I preferred to write on paper by hand.

Errors: missing articles ('a laptop', 'the office'), wrong prepositions/articles for time ('on weekdays'), incorrect word order and repetition, and incorrect tense/verb choice ('it is more it more prefer' should be 'I preferred'). Suggestion: Use articles before singular countable nouns, use plural for habitual time expressions ('weekdays'), use 'by hand' for writing with your hand, and keep consistent past tense when referring to past habits.

× I use laptop keyboard every day because my company provide laptop for each employees.

✓ I use a laptop keyboard every day because my company provides a laptop for each employee.

Errors: missing article before 'laptop keyboard' ('a laptop keyboard'), subject-verb agreement ('company provide' should be 'company provides'), and incorrect pluralization/article with 'employees' when referring to 'each' which requires singular ('each employee'). Suggestion: Add appropriate articles, match verb to singular subject, and use singular after 'each'.

× That's the reason I use laptop keyboards.

✓ That's the reason I use laptop keyboards.

Original sentence is understandable but could be improved by aligning article usage with previous sentence: if referring to the general habit, keep 'laptop keyboards' or better 'a laptop keyboard.' Suggestion: For consistency, use 'That's why I use a laptop keyboard.' However this is optional; grammar is acceptable but clarity improves with 'why' instead of 'the reason'.

× On the other hand, my boyfriend is always using the.

✓ On the other hand, my boyfriend is always using his.

Original sentence is incomplete; missing the object being used. Likely intended 'his desktop' or 'his laptop.' Ensure sentences include the object. Suggestion: Complete the sentence: 'my boyfriend is always using his desktop.' Also possessive pronoun 'his' is needed.

× I was a elementary school student.

✓ I was an elementary school student.

Error: incorrect article 'a' before a word beginning with a vowel sound. Use 'an' before 'elementary.' Suggestion: Use 'an' before vowel sounds.

× I learned how to type keyboard because there was a one subject about learning computer.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard because there was one subject about learning computers.

Errors: missing preposition 'on' after 'type', unnecessary article 'the' before 'one', and incorrect noun form 'computer' should be plural or 'computer studies'. Suggestion: Use 'type on a keyboard' and say 'one subject about learning computers' or 'a computer class.'

× It is mandatory subjects, so I need to learn how to use it just the experience make.

✓ It was a mandatory subject, so I needed to learn how to use it; it was just for experience.

Errors: number and article mismatch ('mandatory subjects' vs singular), tense mismatch (past should be used), awkward phrase 'just the experience make.' Suggestion: Use past tense and correct number: 'a mandatory subject' and clarify intent: 'it was just for experience.'

× Well, umm, basically I'm really good at typing because as I mentioned, I I'm using laptop keyboard every day at my work, so I don't need to improve my skill, but if I need to improve it, I.

✓ Well, basically I'm really good at typing because, as I mentioned, I use a laptop keyboard every day at work, so I don't need to improve my skill. But if I needed to improve it, I would practice regularly.

Errors: unnecessary continuous form 'I'm using' for habitual action (use simple present 'I use'), missing articles ('a laptop keyboard', 'at work'), run-on and incomplete sentence ending. Conditional sentence incomplete; use correct conditional structure 'if I needed... I would...'. Suggestion: Use simple present for routines, include articles, and complete conditional with 'would' plus base verb.