Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “I prefer typing.”), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Also correct grammar (e.g. use gerunds/infinitives correctly: ‘typing on an online form’).

例: I prefer typing. It is more comfortable and faster for me, especially at work where I type interview notes on an online form, so I can record information quickly and clearly.

提案: Provide a clear, grammatical response with one topic sentence and supporting detail. Use linking words (for example, ‘usually’, ‘sometimes’). Avoid hesitations and repetition. Be specific about frequency and device types.

例: I do not type every day; it depends. Usually I use a laptop when I work from home, but on some days I only use my phone or don’t type at all.

提案: Answer directly with a clear time reference and one supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and clear nouns. Avoid vague phrases like ‘I think I am.’ Mention where or how you learned (class, course, or practice).

例: I learned to type when I was a junior high school student. In class we practiced on an online typing website and I improved my speed through regular exercises.

提案: Give a direct method and a specific example of practice. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g. ‘so’, ‘for example’, ‘by’). Keep it concise and avoid fillers like ‘uh’ and repeated words.

例: I improve my typing by practising on online typing websites regularly. For example, I do 15-minute accuracy and speed exercises three times a week, and I track my progress to focus on weak keys.

× I prefer typing, that's why it is very easy and comfortable for me to type.

✓ I prefer typing because it is easy and comfortable for me.

The original sentence is a run-on with an illogical causal connector. Use 'because' to link preference and reason and remove repetition ('to type'). Keep the verb simple for clarity.

× In my job, I sometimes interview someone and typing on the online paper, so I think my typing speed.

✓ In my job, I sometimes interview people and type on online forms, so I think my typing speed is important.

Errors include incorrect use of 'typing' after 'and' (parallel verbs should match: 'interview' and 'type'), wrong noun phrase 'online paper' (use 'online forms'), and a sentence fragment 'so I think my typing speed' needs completion. Provide parallel verb structure and complete the thought.

× Depend on the days, but I think not always.

✓ It depends on the day, but I don't always type every day.

Missing subject and incorrect verb form. Use 'It depends' for general condition and specify 'the day' singular or use 'days' with 'on different days'. Also clarify the intended meaning about frequency and include a verb.

× I sometimes I I sometimes use a computer, but I I sometime I I don't I don't type some tickets every time.

✓ Sometimes I use a computer, but I don't type tickets every time.

The original contains many repetitions and word-order problems. Remove duplicate words, use 'Sometimes' at the start, and express negative frequency with 'don't ... every time' or better 'don't always type tickets' for natural phrasing.

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

✓ When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

This question sentence is already correct in tense and form, so no correction is necessary.

× I think I am.

✓ I think so.

The original 'I think I am' is vague and ungrammatical here. Use 'I think so' to agree or confirm prior question; match the conversation's intent.

× I was a junior high school student in my class.

✓ I was a junior high school student.

Redundant phrase 'in my class' is unnecessary and unidiomatic. The past tense 'was' is correct; simplify to natural expression.

× I I did type some text on website online typist in my junior high school.

✓ I typed some text on online typing websites when I was in junior high school.

Use simple past 'typed' (no auxiliary 'did'), correct preposition 'on', pluralize 'websites' or use 'a website', and reorder phrase for natural English: 'when I was in junior high school.' Also remove duplicated words.

× How do you improve your typing?

✓ How do you improve your typing?

The question is grammatically correct; no change needed. 'Improve your typing' is a proper verb + -ing noun phrase.

× I think when I sometimes use uh, typing a website, I I feel every time it's important for me to improve my typing skills.

✓ I think when I sometimes use a typing website, I feel every time that it is important for me to improve my typing skills.

Fix article and noun order: 'a typing website' or 'a typing practice website.' Remove duplicate words and filler 'uh'. Add 'that' for clarity. Maintain present simple tense for habitual actions.

× Not every time, I think.

✓ Not always, I think.

Use the more natural adverb 'always' rather than 'every time' in this context; place it before the clause: 'Not always' or 'I don't think so all the time.'