Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clear, concise and directly compare the two. Start with a topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "however"). Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient for editing. However, handwriting is useful for learning and remembering information, so I still use it sometimes.

提案: Begin with a clear yes/no plus brief reason. Use correct role vocabulary (e.g., "employee") and link ideas with words like "because" and "so". Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid repeating phrases.

例: Yes, I type every day because I work as an office employee and most of my tasks require using a computer. I find email and document writing the easiest ways to communicate with colleagues.

提案: Start with a clear time reference and a concise description. Use correct tense and specific details (e.g., "seventh grade"). If you add extra information, connect it with a linking word like "also" and explain why it was enjoyable.

例: I learned to type in seventh grade at school when we started using computers for word processing. I also practiced using Excel, which made learning to type more enjoyable because I could see immediate results.

提案: Give a clear statement about your current level and then list specific methods you use to improve, using linking words like "for example" or "also". Mention concrete activities (online typing practice, timed tests, regular emailing) and keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

例: My typing is decent, but I am trying to improve it by doing online typing exercises and timed practice tests. I also practice by writing emails and working with Excel, and I sometimes use language tools like ChatGPT to get feedback on my writing.

× Typing and handwriting are important for their important weights.

✓ Typing and handwriting are both important for different reasons.

The original uses incorrect pronoun 'their' and awkward phrase 'important weights.' Use 'both' to link two items and 'for different reasons' to express distinct importance.

× So typing it's very easy and good things, but hair ready it's almost important for us because handwritten give me a how to write, how to overhead writing.

✓ Typing is very easy and has many advantages, but handwriting is also important because it helps me learn how to write and how to organize my writing.

Multiple sentence structure issues: 'it's' incorrectly used, 'good things' is vague, 'hair ready' is a mishearing of 'handwriting', and 'give me a how to write' is ungrammatical. Recast into two clear clauses and use correct verbs ('helps', 'learn').

× But writing typing is a very easiest way to type something.

✓ But typing is the easiest way to type something.

'Very easiest' is incorrect; 'easiest' is already a superlative and should not combine with 'very.' Also 'writing typing' is redundant; use 'typing' alone.

× My answer is yes because I am a employer my most of time it's on computers typing and I I like typing because when I typing I like it's the easiest way to communication with other people on e-mail.

✓ Yes. I am an employee and I spend most of my time working on computers, so I like typing because it is the easiest way to communicate with other people by e-mail.

Several issues: article error ('a employer' -> 'an employee'), awkward phrasing ('my most of time'), repeated words, tense and verb forms ('when I typing' -> 'when I type'), and 'communication' should be the verb 'communicate'. Reorder for clarity and correct grammar.

× So typing is I like the most.

✓ So typing is what I like the most.

Missing relative pronoun or object; insert 'what' to make the sentence grammatical.

× In my school and I was in class 7 when I was first type words in my word.

✓ I learned in school; I was in class 7 when I first typed words on the computer.

Tense and verb form errors: 'was first type' should be past tense 'first typed.' 'In my word' is unclear—assume 'on the computer' or 'in Word' (capitalized) depending on meaning; clarified to 'on the computer.' Also simplify by removing redundant 'I was' placement.

× Also I'll excel so it's give me a very enjoyable moment.

✓ I also used Excel, which gave me a very enjoyable experience.

'I'll excel' is confusing (future tense) and likely means 'I used Excel.' Tense should match past context, and 'give me a very enjoyable moment' is awkward—use 'gave me a very enjoyable experience.'

× My typing is not bad but I want to improve my typing using to write emails or some documents and also I am nowadays ChatGPT is the most required so I am using ChatGPT to improve my typing.

✓ My typing is not bad, but I want to improve it for writing e-mails and documents. Nowadays, ChatGPT is widely used, so I am using ChatGPT to help improve my typing.

Awkward tense and structure: 'using to write' should be 'for writing.' 'I am nowadays ChatGPT is the most required' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'Nowadays, ChatGPT is widely used.' Keep verb tenses consistent and separate ideas into two sentences.

× Also I use excel so I am.

✓ I also use Excel for practice.

Original sentence fragment 'so I am' is incomplete. Provide a complete clause explaining the purpose of using Excel.