Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and fix article and plural errors (e.g. "different kinds of paragraphs").

例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me improve my writing skills. For example, writing different kinds of paragraphs and personal letters lets me practice vocabulary and sentence structure, which I find harder to do when I type.

提案: Answer directly and use correct verbs and clear phrasing. Provide one specific detail about what you do when typing. Avoid incorrect verbs like "ride on"; use "use" or "work on".

例: Yes, I use my laptop every day. I usually type emails and notes for my classes, and I also write short reports or homework on it.

提案: Give a clear time reference and correct tense forms. Start with a direct answer, then add one brief detail about where or how you learned. Use past simple for past events.

例: I learned to type when I was at high school. We had computer classes in my childhood where the teacher taught us basic typing and practice exercises.

提案: Provide a coherent, specific method and use correct grammar. Begin with a direct statement of your method, then give an example routine and link ideas with words like "by" or "through". Avoid unclear fragments.

例: I improve my typing by practising regularly. For example, I do online typing exercises for 15 minutes a day and type my class notes by hand to reinforce finger movements and accuracy.

× 'Definitely handwriting because we can improve our writing skills by by writing different kind of paragraphs or to send someone a letter or anything.'

✓ 'Definitely handwriting because we can improve our writing skills by writing different kinds of paragraphs, sending someone a letter, or doing other things.'

'by by' has a repeated word and after "by" the gerund (verb+ing) form is required; 'different kind' should be pluralized to 'different kinds' when followed by a plural noun; parallel structure requires all items after 'by' to be gerunds (writing, sending, doing). Suggestion: use single "by" and all gerunds and make noun forms agree (kinds).'

× 'Definitely handwriting because we can improve our writing skills by by writing different kind of paragraphs or to send someone a letter or anything.'

✓ 'Definitely handwriting because we can improve our writing skills by writing different kinds of paragraphs, sending someone a letter, or doing other things.'

'different kind of paragraphs' is incorrect because 'kind' should agree with the plural noun 'paragraphs'; use 'different kinds of paragraphs' or 'different kinds of paragraph' depending on structure. Here 'different kinds of paragraphs' is natural.

× 'Yes, I have my laptop and I ride on my laptop every day on the topic like what I do every day.'

✓ 'Yes, I have a laptop and I use it every day to do the things I need to do.'

The original sentence has awkward, incorrect verbs ('ride on my laptop') and an unclear phrase ('on the topic like what I do every day'). Replace 'ride' with 'use' for devices and restructure to a clear relative/infinitive clause. Suggestion: say 'I use it every day to do the things I need to do' or 'I use it every day for my daily tasks.'

× 'So from my childhood when we have our computer class in my high school, then I learn how to write on a keyboard.'

✓ 'Since my childhood, when we had computer classes in high school, I learned how to type on a keyboard.'

Tense consistency: 'have' should be past 'had' because speaker refers to past time; 'learn' should be past 'learned' to match; 'from my childhood' fits with 'since' and past events. Also 'write on a keyboard' is better as 'type on a keyboard.' Suggestion: maintain past tense when describing past learning.

× 'So from my childhood when we have our computer class in my high school, then I learn how to write on a keyboard.'

✓ 'Since my childhood, when we had computer classes in high school, I learned how to type on a keyboard.'

The verbs refer to past events, so use past tense 'had' and 'learned'. Using present tense 'have' and 'learn' is incorrect here. Also 'computer class' should be plural or 'the computer class' and 'type' is the correct verb for keyboards.

× 'I broke my writing but repetitively doing thing. Things on paper or on keyboard?'

✓ 'I broke my writing habits, but by practicing repeatedly I improved. Do you mean writing on paper or on a keyboard?'

'I broke my writing' is unclear and ungrammatical; likely the speaker meant they disrupted or practiced writing. 'repetitively doing thing' is ungrammatical—need 'by practicing repeatedly' or 'by doing things repeatedly.' The fragment 'Things on paper or on keyboard?' should be a full question and include articles: 'on paper or on a keyboard.' Suggestion: use clear verbs and complete question forms.