Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct, grammatical topic sentence and then one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g. 'I prefer handwriting') and avoid vague phrasing like 'feel the thought frequent'.

例: I prefer handwriting to typing because writing by hand helps me think more clearly. For example, when I take notes during meetings I remember ideas better and can sketch diagrams, so my thoughts feel more organized.

提案: Start with a clear, natural sentence (e.g. 'I use a laptop') and explain two specific contexts linked by a connector. Fix awkward phrasing and use natural expressions like 'because' and 'so' correctly.

例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I need to work both in the clinic and at home. Therefore, a laptop is more convenient for moving between places and keeping patient records accessible.

提案: Keep the answer concise and correct minor grammar errors (e.g. 'at school' or 'in computer class'). Add a brief supporting detail about how you learned or practiced to make it more specific.

例: I learned to type when I was about ten years old in computer class at school. At first we practiced with simple exercises, and then I improved by doing typing games at home.

提案: Provide a clearer topic sentence and one or two specific methods with linking words. Replace 'through the regular online practice' with a natural phrase and give an example of a website or routine.

例: I improve my typing by practicing online regularly. For example, I use timed tests on typing.com for 15 minutes a day and focus on accuracy before speed.

× I prefer handwrite because handwriting makes me feel the thought frequent and think clearly.

✓ I prefer handwriting because handwriting helps me think more clearly and make my thoughts more frequent.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by a noun or gerund, so 'handwrite' (base verb) is incorrect; use 'handwriting' (ID 8: Verb + -ing form). Also 'makes me feel the thought frequent' is ungrammatical: 'make thoughts frequent' is awkward. Use 'helps me think more clearly and make my thoughts more frequent' or better 'helps me think more clearly'. Suggestions: use gerund after 'prefer' and rephrase the second clause to 'helps me think more clearly' (IDs 8 and 26).

× I'm typing on a laptop keyboard because I'm a pediatric dermatologist.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard because I'm a pediatric dermatologist.

The question asks about a habitual action (Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?), so the simple present 'I type' is appropriate rather than present continuous 'I'm typing' (ID 6: Present tense issue). Use simple present for routines. Keep 'I'm a pediatric dermatologist' in present continuous? No, occupation uses simple present with 'I am'. The student used 'I'm' which is acceptable as simple present contraction of 'I am'.

× I should in the clinical and home so the laptop keyboard is more convenient.

✓ I work in the clinic and at home, so the laptop keyboard is more convenient.

The original sentence omits the main verb and uses incorrect nouns and prepositions: 'should in the clinical and home' is ungrammatical (ID 23: Sentence without a verb and ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions). Replace with 'I work in the clinic and at home' to express location of work. Use 'clinic' not 'clinical', and 'at home' for correct preposition. Also add comma before 'so'.

× I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was about 10 years old.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was about 10 years old.

Saying 'on the keyboard' implies a specific keyboard; general learning uses 'on a keyboard' (ID 17: Incorrect use of the definite article / ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions). Use the indefinite article 'a' for a general object. The rest of the sentence is correct tense-wise for past action.

× I learned it on the school at the computer classes.

✓ I learned it at school in computer class.

Multiple problems: 'on the school' is incorrect preposition/article combination; use 'at school' (ID 11 and 22). 'at the computer classes' is awkward—use 'in computer class' or 'in computer classes' depending on meaning. For a general statement, 'in computer class' is natural. Remove unnecessary 'the' and adjust preposition accordingly.

× I improve my typing through the regular online practice.

✓ I improve my typing through regular online practice.

The phrase 'the regular online practice' is unnatural; drop 'the' unless referring to a specific program (ID 22: Article errors). Also 'I improve my typing through regular online practice' correctly uses simple present for habitual action (ID 6). Alternatively, 'I improve my typing by practicing online regularly.'