Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 在回答中要更直接并减少重复，同时注意语法和流畅性。可以用一两句清楚表达观点，然后用一到两条具体理由支持，使用连接词（because, so, therefore）使句子更连贯，避免填充词（umm）。例如说明方便性、速度、易于编辑或保存等具体方面。

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and easier to edit. For example, when I type on my laptop I can quickly correct mistakes and save documents to the cloud, which is useful for both study and work.

提案: 回答时先直接说出选择，然后给出一两个具体原因并使用连接词避免重复。注意句子简洁、自然，删除多余短语如“to use it to use”。可以说明使用频率、便携性或功能性。

例: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because I need to complete assignments and attend online classes. The laptop is portable and has all the software I need, so I hardly ever use a desktop.

提案: 回答要更自然并减少口头语，例如“like”。先直接给时间点，然后说明教你的人和原因，使用连接词使信息更连贯。可补充一两句具体记忆或学习方式让内容更具体。

例: I learned to type when I was six in primary school. My computer teacher taught basic typing skills so we could use computers for schoolwork, and I remember practicing simple typing games to improve my speed.

提案: 回答中需去掉犹豫词并更具体地说明方法，最好给出一两个具体练习类型和频率（例如每天练习20分钟，使用特定网站或软件）。同时使用连接词（for example, by, so）让结构清晰。

例: I improve my typing by practicing for about 20 minutes every day on online typing websites. For example, I use typing lessons to practice accuracy and also copy short paragraphs from books to build speed and consistency.

× I prefer typing more because I think typing is more convenient and more efficiency for us like workers or students.

✓ I prefer typing because I think typing is more convenient and more efficient for people like workers or students.

句中使用了名词“efficiency”作为形容词，应该用形容词“efficient”。另外“prefer typing more”与“prefer typing”重复比较意义，直接说“I prefer typing”更自然。建议区分形容词与名词的用法，并避免冗余的比较词“more”。

× Because nowadays as the with the development of technology, more and more people become to use umm like smartphones or like smart devices, so we choose to type in more.

✓ Because nowadays, with the development of technology, more and more people are using smartphones and other smart devices, so we tend to type more.

原句时态及结构混乱：“become to use”是不正确用法，应用进行时“are using”表示正在普遍发生的情况；“choose to type in more”语序和动词搭配不当，改为“tend to type more”或“type more”更自然。建议学习现在进行时表示趋势和短语搭配（tend to, type more）。

× Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

✓ Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

该句语法正确，无需修改。提醒：主谓一致在疑问句中通过助动词do来处理，保持原形动词。

× Yes, I type on the laptop keyboard every day because as a student I have to do a lot of homework every day and we should use smart devices like laptops. So laptop keyboard I will choose to use it to use that every day.

✓ Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because, as a student, I have to do a lot of homework, so I use a laptop regularly.

原句结构冗长且重复多次“every day”和“use”。“So laptop keyboard I will choose to use it to use that every day”语序错误且重复。建议简化句子，避免重复，注意代词指代清晰（用I use a laptop）。

× That was the time when I was like 6 years old in my primary school.

✓ That was when I was about six years old in primary school.

英语中表达年龄时常用“be + age”结构，“the time when”可简化为“when”。“like 6 years old”口语化且位置不当，改为“about six years old”。此外“in my primary school”改为“in primary school”更自然。

× Our science teacher firstly taught us to learn how to type on the keyboard so that we can use the skills and abilities in our future study or future work.

✓ Our science teacher first taught us how to type on the keyboard so that we could use the skill in our future studies or work.

“taught us to learn how to type”冗余且不自然，应为“taught us how to type”或“taught us to type”。“firstly”在此用“first”更自然；时态匹配改为“could”表示过去的能力或目的；“skills and abilities”重复，改为“skill”或“skills”；“future study”应为“future studies”。建议学习动词短语搭配和时态一致性。

× Umm I choose umm occasionally I choose to improve my typing ability by doing that more on the computer and do some like words word typing exercise or I can read a book and I will repeat the the sentences in the book with typing.

✓ I sometimes improve my typing by practicing more on the computer, doing typing exercises, or reading a book and typing its sentences repeatedly.

原句中“choose to improve...by doing that more”结构不自然，应用“improve...by + -ing”结构；“do some like words word typing exercise”词序混乱且冗余，应为“doing typing exercises”；重复的“the the”要去掉。建议学习如何用“by + -ing”表达方式以及并列短语的正确并列形式。