Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is natural and directly answers the question, but you can improve by varying vocabulary, adding a brief specific example, and using a linking phrase to connect points. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid repeating simple words like "so" and "really."

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's much faster and more convenient for long documents. For example, when I write essays or reports I can quickly rearrange paragraphs and correct mistakes. Moreover, it makes sharing files with classmates or colleagues effortless.

提案: The answer is relevant but contains grammar errors and some redundancy. Improve accuracy (subject-verb agreement), be concise, and add a short detail about typical tasks to show specificity. Use a linking word to add the extra detail.

例: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day for both studying and work. For instance, I write assignments, take notes during online lectures, and draft emails to classmates.

提案: Good structure and clear timing, but fix grammar (verb forms and prepositions) and condense slightly. Use linking words to connect how classes and personal use helped. Add one specific detail (age or grade) if possible.

例: I first learned to type in primary school when I was about eight. We had weekly computer lessons where we practiced touch-typing, and I also improved by doing homework and playing educational computer games at home.

提案: This answer communicates the idea but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Be concise, correct verb forms, and give a clearer routine with measurable results. Use linking words (for example, as a result) and avoid fragments like "accuracy incre."

例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly; for example, I spend about 20 minutes a day on typing exercises and real tasks like coursework and emails. As a result, my speed has increased and my accuracy has improved noticeably over the past few months.

× I think my assignment are done on my laptop.

✓ I think my assignments are done on my laptop.

The noun 'assignment' should be plural because 'are' indicates a plural subject. Use 'assignments' to match the plural verb. Suggestion: match number between subject and verb (assignments/are).

× Plus it's really easy to edit and share my work with others.

✓ Plus it's really easy to edit and share my work with others.

No correction needed. The verb forms 'edit' and 'share' are correct after 'easy to'. This entry is included for completeness and has no error.

× We had computer classes where we practice some typing skills and I also picked it up from by using computer for my homework and computer games.

✓ We had computer classes where we practiced some typing skills, and I also picked it up by using the computer for my homework and computer games.

The main clause refers to past time ('had'), so the subordinate verb should be past tense: 'practice' should be 'practiced'. Also remove the extra preposition 'from' and add the article 'the' before 'computer'. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent and use correct prepositions/articles.

× I improve my typing skill for practicing regularly.

✓ I improve my typing skills by practicing regularly.

Use the gerund 'practicing' as the object of the preposition 'by' to show method: 'by practicing regularly'. Also pluralize 'skill' to 'skills' which is more idiomatic, and use 'typing skills' as a set phrase.

× For example, I spend about 20 minutes daily for my studies, work and chatting.

✓ For example, I spend about 20 minutes daily on my studies, work, and chatting.

Use the preposition 'on' to indicate allocation of time ('spend time on something'). Also add commas for clarity. This keeps present simple tense appropriate for habitual actions.

× So finally I can improve my typing speed and accuracy incre.

✓ So finally I have improved my typing speed and accuracy.

The original ends with an incomplete word 'incre' and mixes modal/present forms awkwardly. Since the speaker refers to result after practice, present perfect 'have improved' is appropriate to show change over time. Remove the fragment 'incre'. Suggestion: use complete words and choose the correct tense to convey result (have improved).