Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer more fluent and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), correct repetitions and provide one specific reason or brief example. Use a linking phrase to add a supporting detail.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, when I write long essays or emails, typing lets me edit quickly and saves time, so I get less tired compared with writing by hand.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence naming the device, avoid repetition (carry/carry), and finish your thought with a specific example. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' correctly and keep sentences concise (max 5).

例: I usually type on a laptop every day because it is lightweight and portable. Therefore I can work in different places, for example in libraries or cafes, which helps me study more flexibly.

提案: Give a clear time-based topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid grammatical errors (computer courses, an application) and complete your final clause. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' if needed.

例: I learned to type when I was in primary school. At that time we had a weekly computer class where the teacher showed us proper finger placement, and we practised using a typing application to improve speed and accuracy.

提案: Answer directly with a topic sentence stating how you improve typing, correct grammar (I type, more familiar), and give a specific method or example (practice, online lessons, exercises). Use linking words to explain the result of your practice.

例: I improve my typing by practising every day. For example, I complete short online typing exercises for 10–15 minutes each morning, which has made my speed and accuracy gradually better.

× To be honest, it it, it's quite hard for me to write so many words, it will make me exhausted.

✓ To be honest, it's quite hard for me to write so many words; it makes me exhausted.

The original sentence repeats filler 'it it' and mixes future 'will make' with a general present-tense truth. Use third person singular present 'makes' to state a general result. Also replace comma splice with a semicolon or split into two sentences. Suggestion: remove duplicated filler and use 'it makes me exhausted' for habitual or general effects.

× I type on laptop and keyboard every day because it is very easy to carry and I could carry it to everywhere I went and so that I can work in any places such as libraries or.

✓ I type on a laptop computer every day because it is very easy to carry, so I can take it anywhere I go and work in places such as libraries.

Missing article before 'laptop' and unnecessary word 'keyboard'. Use 'a laptop computer' or 'a laptop'. 'Carry to everywhere I went' is incorrect preposition and tense; use 'take it anywhere I go' for habitual action. 'Any places' should be 'places'. Remove trailing 'or'. Suggestions: include the indefinite article with singular countable nouns and use correct prepositions ('to' -> none, use 'take... anywhere'). Use present tense for habitual actions.

× When I was in primary school I learned it. At that time we had a computer courses every week and the teacher taught us how to type on the keyboard and there was a application for us to.

✓ When I was in primary school I learned it. At that time we had computer courses every week, and the teacher taught us how to type on the keyboard, and there was an application for us to use.

'A computer courses' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'computer courses' or 'a computer course'. Missing article 'an' before 'application' and missing verb 'use' at the end. Maintain past tense consistently. Suggestions: match articles to countable nouns (singular/plural) and include required verbs to complete meaning.

× I type on laptop and keyboard every day because it is very easy to carry and I could carry it to everywhere I went and so that I can work in any places such as libraries or.

✓ I type on a laptop computer every day because it is very easy to carry, so I can take it anywhere I go and work in places such as libraries.

The original uses 'could' and past tense 'I went' incorrectly for a habitual present action; use modal 'can' to express general ability. Avoid mixing modal past 'could' with present habitual context. Suggestion: use 'can' for present ability and consistent present tense.

× I don't attempt to improve my typing, but maybe I typing every day so it made me more friendly to more familiar with it and my.

✓ I don't actively try to improve my typing, but I type every day, so I have become more familiar with it.

'I typing' is incorrect; after subject use base form with auxiliary or simple present 'I type'. 'It made me more friendly to more familiar with it and my' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use present perfect 'have become' to express change over time resulting from habitual action. Suggestions: use correct verb forms after subjects/auxiliaries and choose clear phrasing like 'more familiar with it'.