Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 문장 구조를 명확히 하고 군더더기 표현(예: 'uh', 불완전한 문장)을 줄이세요. 주제문으로 바로 답한 뒤 이유를 2문장 이내로 구체적으로 설명하고 연결어를 사용해 자연스럽게 이어가면 좋습니다. 예를 들어 ‘faster’, ‘easier to edit’, ‘helps me memorize’ 같은 구체적 이유와 상황(노트 필기, 암기할 때 등)을 제시하세요.

例: I prefer typing because it is faster and makes editing easy. However, I use handwriting when I need to memorize facts, such as vocabulary or formulas, because writing by hand helps me remember information better.

提案: 핵심 문장(토픽 문장)을 짧고 정확하게 말한 뒤, 구체적 용도와 이유를 연결어로 자연스럽게 이어보세요. 불필요한 반복(예: 'every day' 중복)과 말더듬을 줄이고, 'research'나 'papers'와 같은 단어를 정확히 사용하세요.

例: I usually type on a laptop because it is portable and convenient. For example, I write research papers and send emails on it, and I can work anywhere like a café or the library.

提案: 시간과 장소를 명확히 밝히고 잡음을 제거하세요. ‘when I was there’처럼 모호한 표현 대신 연령이나 학년을 사용하고, 관련된 활동(컴퓨터 수업, 게임 등)을 구체적으로 연결어로 설명하세요.

例: I learned to type in elementary school during computer class, around age eight. I also practiced a lot by playing typing games, which helped me improve my speed.

提案: 문장을 완성형으로 만들고 시제와 주어-동사 일치를 정확히 하세요. 구체적인 개선 방법(연습 시간, 온라인 타자 연습, 목표 속도 등)을 제시하면 더 설득력 있습니다. 불필요한 반복과 망설임을 없애고 간결하게 말하세요.

例: I improve my typing through daily use rather than formal practice. For instance, I type essays and reports every day, and recently I started using a typing website for 15 minutes a day to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because it's faster and easier to, uh, edit my mistakes, but I still use handwriting when I want to memorize information. Because.

✓ I prefer typing because it's faster and makes it easier to edit my mistakes, but I still use handwriting when I want to memorize information.

The original has a sentence fragment 'Because.' and an awkward clause 'easier to, uh, edit my mistakes'. Combine and complete the idea: use 'makes it easier to edit' or 'easier to edit' without a trailing 'to' and remove the fragment. Improve fluency by deleting filler words and integrating clauses. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I always type on laptop keyboard every day.

✓ I always type on a laptop keyboard every day.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before singular countable noun 'laptop keyboard'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article or determiner. Add 'a' to be grammatical. Grammar problem type ID:22

× so I usually use it for writing my papers for researcher and sending emails.

✓ so I usually use it for writing my research papers and sending emails.

The phrase 'papers for researcher' is incorrect. Use 'research papers' to refer to academic papers. Also use plural 'papers' and include 'research' as an adjective. This corrects word choice and noun form. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Uh, when I was there, I picked it up in elementary school during computer class, uh, or while playing computer games.

✓ I picked it up in elementary school during computer class or while playing computer games.

The phrase 'when I was there' is unclear and unnecessary. Remove filler 'uh' and the redundant clause to make the sentence direct and correctly structured. Keep tense consistent (past simple) since this is a past event. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I didn't practice separately, it just naturally improve while daily assignments like such as writing essay and reports because I uh, I type every day umm my.

✓ I didn't practice separately; it just naturally improved through daily assignments such as writing essays and reports because I type every day.

Multiple issues: comma splice between clauses (use semicolon or separate sentences); verb tense/agreement 'improve' should be past 'improved' to match 'didn't practice' and the time frame; redundant 'like such as' should be 'such as'; singular 'essay' should be plural 'essays'; trailing fragmented 'my' removed. Rephrase for clarity and correct agreement. Grammar problem type ID:27