Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer more natural, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific reasons, and avoid filler words. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly and correct small errors (e.g. 'that much time' → 'too much time').

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit my notes easily and search through them later, so I save time when studying.

提案: Give a direct, grammatically correct response and be specific about which device you use more. Use linking words to clarify frequency and context. Avoid tense errors—use present simple for habitual actions.

例: Yes, I type every day at work. I mainly use a desktop computer in the office, but I sometimes use a laptop when I travel.

提案: Provide a clear time reference and explain briefly how you learned. Use correct past tense and concise phrasing. Remove redundant phrases like 'used to' repeated unnecessarily.

例: I learned to type when I was a child by playing games on my father's laptop. Over time I practised and became faster.

提案: Avoid inappropriate or unclear content. Give a clear, relevant and positive method for improvement. Use complete sentences, specific activities, and linking words to explain how these activities help. Correct grammar and phrasing.

例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly on online typing exercises and by typing long messages or essays. This helps increase my speed and accuracy over time.

× I prefer typing because it's, well, it's easy and it will not take the that much time even I think.

✓ I prefer typing because it's easy and I don't think it takes that much time.

The original sentence has awkward adverb placement and extra fillers ('well', 'even I think') and a wrong word order ('it will not take the that much time'). Move the negation and the verb together: 'I don't think it takes that much time.' Remove redundant fillers for clarity. This corrects adverb placement and overall sentence structure.

× Yeah, on my job I used to do all day this work writing on my desktop or a laptop.

✓ Yes, at my job I used to spend the whole day writing on a desktop or a laptop.

Use 'at my job' not 'on my job'. 'Used to' requires a base verb: 'used to spend' is natural. 'All day' is better expressed as 'the whole day'. Also choose either 'a desktop or a laptop' for generality. This fixes preposition choice and verb usage.

× When I was a child I used to play a games on my father's laptop and then I used to when I learn on this.

✓ When I was a child I used to play games on my father's laptop, and then I learned how to type on it.

Remove the extra article 'a' before 'games' (plural). The clause 'I used to when I learn on this' is ungrammatical; replace with simple past 'I learned' and the infinitive 'how to type' and refer to the laptop with 'it'. This corrects plural article errors and past tense form.

× By texting girls in my school life, texting the provoking them.

✓ I improved by texting girls at school and sometimes provoking them in conversation.

The original uses a nonstandard phrase 'in my school life' and repeats 'texting' awkwardly. Use the gerund 'texting' as a noun phrase 'by texting girls at school'. Clarify 'provoking them' as 'provoking them in conversation' or rephrase to avoid ambiguity. This fixes gerund usage and prepositional choice.