Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 内容自然，有个人经历支持，但表达有小错和冗余。建议：1) 把主题句更直接放在前面（例如先说“I prefer handwriting.”），2) 避免模糊或错误短语（如“writing by head”应为“writing by hand”），3) 用一到两句具体例子或结果支持观点，并使用连接词如“because”或“so”。

例: I prefer handwriting. I picked up this habit from my father, who kept a diary when I was growing up, and writing by hand feels more personal. Because I write by hand, I also find I remember information better, so I use it for notes and reflections.

提案: 回答直接但有语法和用词小错误，并有些重复。建议：1) 开头用完整句型例如“I usually type on a laptop.”，2) 修正可数名词（“homeworks”应为“homework”）并减少重复，3) 提供一件具体日常场景作为支持，使用连接词如“because”或“so”。

例: I usually type on a laptop because it's more convenient for emailing and completing homework quickly. For example, I often finish assignments in the university library where a laptop helps me work faster and stay organized.

提案: 时间点和原因表达清楚，但句子连接和语法不佳（如“Only improved”句子不完整，单复数错误）。建议：1) 用一到两个连贯句子说明时间和原因，2) 用正确的动词时态和完整句子描述提升过程，3) 补充具体练习时间或成果以增加细节。

例: I learned to type when I was a freshman at university because most coursework had to be submitted online. I improved my speed by practising on typing websites and completing many writing assignments; after a few months my typing became noticeably faster.

提案: 回答包含具体方法但存在语法和用词错误（如“practice with online typing exercise”应为“practising with online typing exercises”，“accurate”应为“accuracy”），且口语化用词如“you know”应少用。建议：1) 用更正式和准确的词汇，2) 将信息组织成清晰的步骤或频率，3) 给出明确结果或数据以增强说服力（例如每分钟字数提升）。

例: I improve my typing by practising on online typing exercises and doing many writing assignments. I usually use typing tutor websites three times a week and focus on accuracy drills; as a result my words-per-minute has increased and my accuracy is much better.

× I usually type on laptop keyboard every day because it's very convenient for me to write emails and do my homeworks when I need to finish something quickly.

✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because it's very convenient for me to write emails and do my homework when I need to finish something quickly.

“laptop keyboard” 前缺少不定冠词“a”，因为是泛指单个可数名词。homeworks 是不可数名词“homework”的复数形式错误，应使用单数或不可数形式。建议记住“homework”为不可数名词，不加-s；可数名词单数需加冠词或其它限定词。

× The laptops let me type fast and be more efficient.

✓ The laptop lets me type fast and be more efficient.

原句中主语“the laptops”与后面动词短语在语义上应为“笔记本电脑（作为工具）让我更高效”，若指一般情况通常用单数泛指“a laptop”或不定主语“The laptop”并使用单数谓语“lets”。若保留复数也应用“let”。此处改为单数并调整谓语，以保持主谓一致。

× Only improved my speed by practicing with online typing exercise and writing assignments, and after a few months I became much faster.

✓ I only improved my speed by practicing with online typing exercises and writing assignments, and after a few months I became much faster.

原句缺少主语“I”，导致动词形式不完整。并且“exercise”在此情境下应为复数“exercises”。此外副词“only”位置应放在动词之前或在“I only improved”。建议说完整主语和谓语，注意可数名词复数形式。

× I mainly improve my typing by practice with online typing exercise and doing lots of writing assignments.

✓ I mainly improve my typing by practising with online typing exercises and doing lots of writing assignments.

短语“by practice with”结构不自然，习惯用法是“by practising/ by practicing”+ 动名词形式，或“by practising with ...”。另外“exercise”应为复数“exercises”。建议用动名词形式“practising/ practicing”并把可数名词改为复数。

× For example, I usually use typing tutor websites a few times a week, which has helped me increase both my speed and accurate.

✓ For example, I usually use typing tutor websites a few times a week, which has helped me increase both my speed and accuracy.

最后一项应为名词“accuracy”而不是形容词“accurate”。此外非限制性定语从句“which has helped me...”修饰前面的整个事实，语法无误，但需注意并列结构中使用并列名词形式。建议记住“increase accuracy/ improve accuracy”的固定搭配。