Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “I prefer typing.”) then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repeating words and incorrect grammar (e.g. use “easy to” not “easily to”).

例: I prefer typing. Firstly, it’s faster than handwriting, so I can communicate quickly. Secondly, typed messages are easier to edit and share with many people.

提案: Answer the question directly (desktop or laptop) and give a short reason. Use correct nouns and verbs and avoid repetition. Use a linking word like “because” to connect ideas.

例: I usually type on my laptop because it’s portable and I can work anywhere. Because of that, I can send messages and finish tasks while commuting.

提案: Give a clear time reference and one or two concise details about how you learned. Use past tense for past events (learned). Avoid vague phrases like “for help my Google.”

例: I learned to type when I was about ten years old. My parents enrolled me in a basic computer class, and I practiced typing exercises online to improve my speed.

提案: Describe a specific practice routine and use correct expressions (e.g. “on a daily basis,” “every day”). Mention one concrete method or tool and a linking word to show sequence or reason.

例: I improve my typing by practicing on a typing website every day. For example, I spend 15 minutes on typing exercises and also write messages to my family to build speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because typing is very important in our life and easily to send message for everyone.

✓ I prefer typing because typing is very important in our lives and it is easy to send messages to everyone.

Errors: 'in our life' should be plural 'in our lives' because it refers to people generally; 'easily to send message' is incorrect word form and structure. Use 'it is easy' (adjective) + infinitive 'to send' and plural 'messages'. Also add 'to' before recipient: 'to everyone'. Suggestion: use correct adjective/adverb forms and plural nouns and include dummy subject 'it' for 'easy' constructions.

× Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

✓ Do you type on a desktop or a laptop keyboard every day?

Error: missing article before 'laptop keyboard'. In English, singular countable nouns generally require an article. Use 'a desktop or a laptop keyboard' or 'a desktop or laptop keyboard' consistently. Suggestion: include the indefinite article for singular countable nouns.

× I prefer keyboard because keyboard is very type for everyone. I I send a message for everyone.

✓ I prefer the keyboard because the keyboard is very useful for everyone. I send messages to everyone.

Errors: missing definite article 'the' before 'keyboard' when referring to a specific object; 'very type' is incorrect word choice — likely meant 'useful' (an adjective). 'I I' is a duplication. 'send a message for everyone' is wrong preposition and number: use 'send messages to everyone'. Suggestion: use correct articles, choose appropriate adjective, remove repetitions, and use 'to' for recipients and plural 'messages' for general habit.

× In my childhood I learn about a keyboard for my help, for help my Google and for practice my end on Google.

✓ In my childhood I learned about the keyboard to help myself and to practice using Google.

Errors: verb tense — 'learn' should be past 'learned' to match 'In my childhood'. Article: 'a keyboard' -> 'the keyboard' or 'a keyboard' depending on meaning; 'for my help' unnatural — use 'to help myself'; 'for help my Google' and 'practice my end on Google' are unclear and ungrammatical. Suggestion: use past tense for past events, reflexive pronoun 'myself' for self-help, and clear phrasing 'practice using Google'.

× In my daily basis I send a message for my best friend and my family member and improve my typing with everyday.

✓ On a daily basis I send messages to my best friend and my family members and improve my typing every day.

Errors: 'In my daily basis' is wrong preposition and word order — 'On a daily basis' or 'daily'. 'send a message' should be plural 'send messages' for habitual action. 'for my best friend' should be 'to my best friend'; 'my family member' should be plural 'my family members' for generality. 'with everyday' is incorrect — use 'every day' or 'daily'. Suggestion: use correct adverbial phrase 'on a daily basis' or 'daily', correct preposition 'to', plural nouns for repeated actions, and 'every day' for frequency.