Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, 'because' and 'however'). Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., 'prefer to type', 'when I need to').

例: I prefer handwriting overall because I enjoy improving my penmanship and find it helps me remember information better. However, I type when I need to finish tasks quickly, since typing is faster and more efficient for long documents.

提案: Answer directly (topic sentence), then give a concise reason and a specific detail. Correct grammar: say 'I often use a laptop' and avoid filler phrases like 'one more thing.' Use a linking word such as 'because' to connect reason and detail.

例: I usually use a laptop keyboard every day because it makes my work easier and increases my typing speed. For example, I can carry the laptop to classes and work on documents anywhere, while I don't own a desktop.

提案: Use correct tense and a clear timeline: begin with a brief topic sentence giving the age or year, then add one specific supporting detail about how you learned. Avoid repeating words like 'learn' too often; vary vocabulary (e.g., 'took computer classes', 'improved my typing speed').

例: I learned to type when I was 15, when I took regular computer classes at school. In those lessons I practiced touch-typing and learned basic programming, which helped me type faster and use software more confidently.

提案: Give a focused answer: state the main method, then give one specific example and explain briefly how it helps. Use correct verb forms (e.g., 'I improve my typing by using my smartphone' and 'I usually type on apps such as...'). Avoid vague phrases like 'easy way'.

例: I improve my typing by practicing on my smartphone every day, mainly by messaging on apps such as WhatsApp and Instagram. Regular chatting helps me type faster and more accurately because I frequently use short sentences and common phrases.

× I slightly prefer handwriting because I always want to improve my handwriting as well, but also I like typing when I am needed, when I am already to complete work in time. So I usually prefer to typing.

✓ I slightly prefer handwriting because I always want to improve it, but I also like typing when it is necessary, for example when I need to finish work on time. So I usually prefer typing.

Multiple issues: 'my handwriting as well' is wordy; better to use a pronoun to avoid repetition. 'when I am needed' is incorrect use of passive and person; use 'when it is necessary' or 'when I need to finish work on time'. 'I am already to complete' is incorrect verb form and structure; use 'I need to finish' or 'I have to finish'. 'prefer to typing' mixes 'prefer to + verb' and 'prefer + -ing' forms; correct forms are 'prefer to type' or 'prefer typing'. Suggestions: use pronouns to avoid repetition, choose correct structure for necessity ('need/have to/necessary'), and use consistent verb patterns for 'prefer' (either 'prefer to + base verb' or 'prefer + -ing').

× Definitely I often to use laptop keyboard because it makes me my work easier and also improve my working speed. And one more thing, I don't have desktop yet so I only prefer to work with laptop.

✓ I definitely often use a laptop keyboard because it makes my work easier and also improves my working speed. Also, I don't have a desktop yet, so I prefer to work with a laptop.

'often to use' is incorrect verb pattern; use 'often use'. 'Makes me my work easier' has wrong word order and pronoun; correct is 'makes my work easier'. 'also improve' needs third person singular 'improves' to agree with subject 'it' (the laptop keyboard). 'only prefer to work with laptop' needs article 'a' before 'laptop' and simpler phrasing 'so I prefer to work with a laptop'. Suggestions: remove unnecessary 'to' after adverbs like 'often', ensure subject-verb agreement, use correct word order, and include articles for singular countable nouns.

× I learn it when I was 15 years old.

✓ I learned it when I was 15 years old.

'learn' should be in the past tense 'learned' because the action happened in the past and is anchored by 'when I was 15'. Use simple past for completed past actions. Suggestion: use simple past for past events (learned, went, studied).

× I regularly go to computer classes and learn about how to use computer and how to type keyboard in faster way to make my work easier and faster.

✓ I regularly attended computer classes and learned how to use a computer and how to type on a keyboard more quickly to make my work easier and faster.

'go to computer classes' is okay in present but inconsistent with past context; use past 'attended'. 'learn about how to use computer' is unidiomatic; use 'learned how to use a computer'. Missing articles: 'a computer' and 'a keyboard' are required. 'type keyboard' needs preposition 'type on a keyboard'. 'in faster way' should be 'more quickly' or 'in a faster way'. Suggestions: match tense across the sentence, include articles for singular countable nouns, use correct prepositions ('type on'), and use adverbs ('more quickly').

× And also I learn a lot of programs in coding language as well.

✓ I also learned a lot about programming languages.

'learn' should be past 'learned' to match past timeframe. 'a lot of programs in coding language' is awkward; use 'about programming languages' or 'how to program'. 'in coding language' is incorrect collocation. Suggestions: use 'learned' for past, choose natural expressions like 'programming languages' or 'how to program'.

× I improve my typing with my smartphone.

✓ I improve my typing on my smartphone.

'improve my typing with my smartphone' is understandable but 'on my smartphone' is the more natural preposition for typing devices. If referring to an ongoing habit, present simple 'I improve' is acceptable; if referring to past use, use past tense. Suggestion: use 'on' for typing platforms and ensure tense matches context.

× When I was communicating with my friends, I usually prefer to type with some kind of apps like WhatsApp, Facebook and Instagram.

✓ When I communicate with my friends, I usually prefer to type using apps like WhatsApp, Facebook and Instagram.

'When I was communicating' uses past continuous but the rest uses present habit 'usually prefer'; use present simple 'When I communicate'. 'prefer to type with some kind of apps' is awkward; use 'prefer to type using apps' or 'prefer typing in apps'. 'some kind of' is unnecessary. Suggestions: keep tense consistent for habitual actions, use 'using' for tools, and remove vague phrases like 'some kind of'.

× I go there and I communicate with my friends on the easy way and the fast way.

✓ I go there and communicate with my friends in an easy and fast way.

'on the easy way and the fast way' is unidiomatic; use 'in an easy and fast way' or better 'easily and quickly'. Also omit repeated 'I' for conciseness. Suggestions: use adverbs 'easily' and 'quickly' or the phrase 'in an easy and fast way' and avoid unnecessary repetition.