Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a shorter, clearer topic sentence then add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use correct article/noun forms and smoother phrasing.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because I usually carry my laptop and find it more convenient. For example, typing allows me to edit and rearrange sentences easily, which speeds up my essay writing. Also, my laptop stores my files so I rarely lose my work.

提案: Start with a direct answer (desktop or laptop), then explain briefly with a clear reason and avoid hesitation and repetition. Correct phrasing (e.g. 'I use a laptop') and remove unnecessary brand detail unless relevant.

例: I type on a laptop keyboard most days because I spend a lot of time on campus and cannot access a desktop easily. The laptop is portable and lets me work in the library between classes.

提案: Provide a concise time reference, then give one or two specific details about the class using correct grammar. Remove hesitations and fix sentence structure (e.g. 'taught me how to type quickly and accurately').

例: I learned to type in elementary school because there was a compulsory typing class. The teacher showed us proper finger placement and timed exercises to help us type faster and more accurately.

提案: Answer directly with a clear method, use linking words (for example, by, so, therefore) and give a specific practice routine. Avoid vague phrases and fillers; use accurate vocabulary (e.g. 'typing drills', 'accuracy', 'speed').

例: I improve my typing by practising regularly with online typing drills and varied texts. For example, I do 20 minutes of timed exercises every day to increase speed, and I copy articles to focus on accuracy and different vocabulary.

× I prefer typing because I usually carry my laptop so when I do my homework or writing essay I always use my keyboard because when I write some essay with keyboard I can erase anyway and anytime so it is really comfortable.

✓ I prefer typing because I usually carry my laptop, so when I do my homework or write essays I always use my keyboard; when I write an essay on a keyboard I can erase anytime, so it is very comfortable.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'writing essay' should be 'write essays' (present tense and plural noun); awkward repetition and run-on sentence. Suggestion: use parallel verb forms after 'do' (do my homework or write essays), make 'essay' plural for general statements, add articles ('an essay'), and split into clearer clauses using commas or semicolons. Ensure consistent present simple tense for habitual actions.

× Umm, I type on a Raptor keyboard because I usually stay in university campus so it is hard to It is hard for me to use desktop, so I usually prefer to use laptop keyboard.

✓ Umm, I type on a Raptor keyboard because I usually stay on campus, so it is hard for me to use a desktop; I usually prefer to use a laptop keyboard.

Errors: 'university campus' is wordy and missing preposition — correct is 'on campus'. 'use desktop' and 'use laptop keyboard' need articles: 'a desktop' and 'a laptop keyboard'. Also remove duplicated phrase 'It is hard'. Suggestion: include appropriate articles for singular countable nouns and use correct prepositions ('on campus').

× When I was in a elementary school, uh there there was a typing class in the elementary school. Also this class is compulsory. So I took this class and teachers taught me how can how could I type fast and accurately?

✓ When I was in elementary school, there was a typing class. This class was compulsory, so I took it and the teachers taught me how I could type quickly and accurately.

Errors: 'a elementary school' should be 'elementary school' without 'a' when speaking generally; repeated words 'there there' removed. 'in the elementary school' is redundant. Question word order 'how can how could I type' is incorrect — use indirect statement 'how I could type'. 'fast' as adverb should be 'quickly'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles, avoid repetition, use indirect speech word order for reported learning, and use proper adverbs.

× In my opinion, practicing by a lot of tense, a lot of sentence or various sentence is really, uh, effective for increasing, uh, improving, uh, people's typing skills because, uh, it naturally, uh.

✓ In my opinion, practicing with many tenses and a variety of sentences is really effective for improving people's typing skills because it happens naturally.

Errors: 'practicing by a lot of tense' is ungrammatical; use 'practicing with many tenses' or 'practicing many tenses'. 'a lot of sentence' should be 'a variety of sentences' or 'many sentences' (plural). Redundant 'increasing, improving' — choose one ('improving'). 'it naturally' is incomplete; complete thought as 'it happens naturally'. Suggestion: use correct preposition 'with' after 'practicing', pluralize countable nouns, and streamline vocabulary to avoid redundancy.