Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid vague phrases like "not my type", and add a brief specific reason or example. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and use linking words for coherence.

例: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me concentrate better. For example, when I take notes by hand I remember information longer and I am less distracted by the internet. Therefore, handwriting is my usual choice for studying.

提案: Give a direct answer first, then add clear supporting details. Avoid unclear phrases like "own lecture things" and improve grammar (e.g., "I don't own a desktop"). Use linking words such as "however" or "because" for coherence.

例: I don't type every day; however, when I do I usually use a laptop keyboard. I don't own a desktop, and a laptop is more convenient to carry to lectures and study sessions.

提案: Answer with a clear time reference, correct grammar, and concise supporting detail. Replace vague phrasing like "at the moment" with "then" or specific age. Use linking words to connect ideas.

例: I learned to type when I was in elementary school. My school ran an after-school computer club where we practised typing and basic computer skills, so I started then.

提案: Be specific about the program and the methods you use. Avoid repetition and uncertainty like "I think". Mention frequency or results to make the answer more informative and credible.

例: I use a Korean app called "Practicing Typing" to improve my speed and accuracy. I practise on it for about 20 minutes three times a week and take its built-in tests to track my progress.

× I prefer handwriting because I can focus on my tasks more when I write something on my own and typing is not my type.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I can focus on my tasks more when I write on my own, and typing is not my preference.

Using 'something' is vague and unnecessary; 'write on my own' is clearer. 'Typing is not my type' is incorrect collocation; use 'not my preference'. This fixes word choice and clarity. Suggestion: Omit vague quantifiers like 'something' when unnecessary and use 'preference' for expressing likes.

× Actually I'm not typing something every day, but I usually use laptop keyboard when I own lecture things, because first of all I don't have any desktop on my own and laptop is more comfortable to carry on.

✓ Actually I don't type every day, but I usually use a laptop keyboard for my lectures because I don't own a desktop and a laptop is more comfortable to carry.

Use simple present 'don't type' rather than progressive 'am not typing' for habitual actions. 'Typing something' is awkward; say 'type'. 'When I own lecture things' is incorrect phrasing; use 'for my lectures'. 'Own' used incorrectly; 'own a desktop' is correct. Remove redundant 'on' after 'carry'. Use articles: 'a laptop keyboard' and 'a desktop'. Suggestion: Use simple present for routines, correct collocations ('for my lectures', 'own a desktop'), and include appropriate articles.

× When I was in elementary school there was a program to type on a keyboard and some how to use computer program at after school, so I learned at the moment.

✓ When I was in elementary school there was an after-school program to teach typing and how to use computer programs, so I learned then.

'Some how' is wrong; use 'how'. 'Use computer program' needs plural 'programs' or 'a computer program'; 'teach typing' fits better than 'a program to type on a keyboard'. 'At after school' is wrong order; 'after-school program' is correct. 'At the moment' should be 'then' for past time. Use past tense consistently. Suggestion: Use correct noun forms and fixed expressions ('after-school program', 'teach'), and replace 'at the moment' with 'then' when referring to past events.

× In Korea there is a program named Practicing typing. So I usually use that app to improve my typing and I think I have a test to improve my typing.

✓ In Korea there is a program called Practicing Typing, so I usually use that app to improve my typing and I think I take tests to measure my progress.

Program names use 'called' rather than 'named' in casual speech; 'Practicing typing' capitalization adjusted. 'I think I have a test' is unclear and unnatural; 'I think I take tests' or 'I take tests' is better. Using 'to improve my typing' twice is repetitive; clarify as 'to measure my progress'. Also parallel structure: use verbs correctly with '-ing' where needed ('improve my typing'). Suggestion: Use natural verbs for program names, avoid repetition, and use correct collocations ('take tests', 'measure progress').