Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答总体清晰，但有语法和表达上的小问题，内容有些重复。应直接开门见山给出观点（topic sentence），随后用一到两句具体原因支持，避免冗长或模糊表达；注意时态和固定搭配（例如：be accustomed to + -ing）。

例: I prefer typing. It’s faster and more convenient for my daily work, so I use a keyboard most of the time. Also, my handwriting is messy, so typing helps my writing look neater.

提案: 回答能表达意思，但句子结构重复且有语法问题（例如: because重复使用，supportability用词不准确）。应先给出直接回答，然后用一两句原因或背景说明，使用更恰当的词汇（e.g. portable, my company provides）。

例: I usually type on a laptop. My company provides each employee with a laptop, and it’s more portable for my commute, so I seldom use a desktop computer.

提案: 内容具体但表达不够自然，信息有夸张或不合常理（130 WPM很高），并且句子结构需要更清楚。建议先直接回答时间点，然后用一两句说明学习情境并避免不太可信的细节或澄清其含义。

例: I learned to type in the third grade at primary school. We had a compulsory computer class that lasted a semester, and the lessons focused on building basic typing speed and accuracy.

提案: 回答流畅且有逻辑，但有些句子可更自然简练。建议先直接回答方法（or lack of deliberate practice），然后给出具体例子说明如何通过日常使用提高，并可简短提到可能的未来改进方法。

例: I haven’t practiced typing formally; I improved through daily use. Writing reports and emails at school and work gradually increased my speed and accuracy, though I might try dedicated typing exercises in the future to get even faster.

× Well, I prefer typing except for the fact that I already accustomed to typing at my work and in my day-to-day life.

✓ Well, I prefer typing except for the fact that I am already accustomed to typing at my work and in my day-to-day life.

此句缺少系动词“be”的现在时形式。短语“accustomed to”前需要“be”动词（am/is/are）构成被习惯的状态，且句子时态为现在，应使用“am”。建议在“already”后面加“am”。

× Typing is efficient, effortless and time saving compared to handwriting.

✓ Typing is efficient, effortless and time-saving compared to handwriting.

“time saving”作形容词应连字符连接为“time-saving”。这里不是定冠词问题的典型，但属于形容词构词和标点用法，应合并为复合形容词以保持书面语标准。建议使用连字符。

× And to be honest, I don't want it to show my awful handwriting to others.

✓ And to be honest, I don't want to show my awful handwriting to others.

句中多余的代词“it”造成句子结构不自然。动词短语“want to show”后直接接宾语即可，去掉“it”使句子通顺。建议删除多余代词。

× Well, I type with laptop keyboard a lot because I own a laptop myself because of supportability and our company allocated each employee a laptop, so I rarely have a chance to type with desktop keyboard.

✓ Well, I type with a laptop keyboard a lot because I own a laptop myself due to its portability, and our company allocated each employee a laptop, so I rarely have a chance to type with a desktop keyboard.

缺少不定冠词“a”在“laptop keyboard”和“desktop keyboard”前；“because of supportability”表达不自然，应改为“due to its portability”。句子过长建议分割或用连词更清晰。建议在可数名词前加冠词并使用更合适的词汇。

× All back on the 3rd grade of elementary school.

✓ All back in the 3rd grade of elementary school.

介词使用错误，应使用“in the 3rd grade”表示“在三年级”。此外句首“All back”口语化且位置不自然，常用“All back in…”结构。建议将“on”改为“in”。

× Our school had a required course of computer science and we spent a semester of time to only be able to type at a normal speed, which was typing 130 words per minute.

✓ Our school had a required computer science course and we spent one semester just learning to type at a normal speed, which was about 130 words per minute.

“a required course of computer science”的词序不自然，通常说“a required computer science course”。“a semester of time”冗余，应简化为“one semester”。“to only be able to type”位置和用法不自然，改为“just learning to type”。建议调整词序并去掉冗余短语。

× To be honest, I have never intentionally worked on my typing skills.

✓ To be honest, I have never intentionally worked on my typing skills.

此句语法本身正确，包含现在完成时与副词位置均合理。无需修改。说明：虽然句子正确，但它涉及动词短语“worked on”，与“Verb + -ing form”无直接错误。

× I improved unconsciously because of the environment that I'm living at school or now at my work.

✓ I improved unconsciously because of the environment in which I live, at school and now at my workplace.

时态和介词需调整：描述持续状态应使用一般现在时“I live”而非进行时“I'm living”；介词“at school”可以保留，但“at my work”更自然为“at my workplace”。建议使用一般现在时并改正介词短语。

× I type reports or emails every day, which gradually increase my speed and accuracy in typing.

✓ I type reports and emails every day, which gradually increases my speed and accuracy in typing.

先行词为单数概念（行为）或整体“typing every day”时，关系代词引导的从句动词应与先行词保持一致，这里用单数第三人称“increases”。另外“reports or emails”改为“reports and emails”更自然。建议主句与从句保持主谓一致并使用“and”。