Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar and sentence structure: use correct verb forms (e.g., "I usually type"), add a clear topic sentence then one or two specific supporting reasons. Keep it concise (max 3–4 sentences) and avoid redundancy.

例: I like both typing and handwriting, but I usually type when I need to send documents quickly online. However, I prefer handwriting for personal notes because writing by hand helps me focus and remember information better. For example, I often handwrite lecture notes to retain details.

提案: Clarify and organize ideas: start with a direct topic sentence (Which device you use), then give one or two clear reasons with simple linking words. Correct word choice ("type", not "tap"; "desktop" not "tap on desktop") and avoid long confusing sentences.

例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day rather than a desktop. I use my laptop for studying and work because it’s portable and lets me complete assignments and tests anywhere. For instance, I can take notes in class and finish essays at a cafe.

提案: Make tense and grammar consistent: use past tense for learning ("I learned"), correct verb forms ("taught", "type"), and finish the sentence. Keep it concise and give a specific detail (age, how you practised, result).

例: I learned to type when I was about nine or ten. A teacher taught us proper finger placement at school, and I practised regularly using typing exercises. As a result, my speed and confidence improved and now I can type whole paragraphs comfortably.

提案: Be specific about methods and correct vocabulary: say which online tools or exercises you use (e.g., typing websites, drills), use correct words ("practice typing", "speed", "accuracy"), and give a clear routine with linking words.

例: I improve my typing by practising on online sites like TypingClub or Keybr for 20–30 minutes a day. I focus on accuracy first, then speed, and I also do timed paragraphs to simulate real writing. Over time this routine has increased my words-per-minute and confidence.

× I usually typing when I need to write down document quickly and send information online.

✓ I usually type when I need to write down a document quickly and send information online.

The verb 'typing' is incorrectly used; the simple present 'type' is required with 'usually'. Also add the article 'a' before 'document'. Use base verb after adverb of frequency. Suggestion: Use 'I usually type' and include articles when needed.

× But I prefer handwriting when I'm personally taking notes because writing by hand help me focus and remember think better than typing.

✓ But I prefer handwriting when I'm personally taking notes because writing by hand helps me focus and remember things better than typing.

Subject-verb agreement: 'writing by hand' is singular and needs 'helps' (third person singular). 'think' should be the noun 'things'. Also use plural 'things' to match meaning. Suggestion: Use 'helps' and 'things' to correct agreement and word choice.

× To be honest, I never tap on the desktop.

✓ To be honest, I never use a desktop.

The verb 'tap on' is unnatural for using a desktop; 'use' is appropriate. Also include the article 'a' before 'desktop'. Suggestion: Say 'I never use a desktop' for clarity.

× I tap on the laptop keyboard every day.

✓ I type on the laptop keyboard every day.

Use the correct verb 'type' instead of 'tap' when referring to typing on a keyboard. The simple present is correct for a habitual action. Suggestion: Replace 'tap' with 'type'.

× I use it for my studying and work, writing assignment and completing tests and taking a larger note because it's mainly my work faster and help me remember information better so when I'm typing my hand wears faster and have my hands more quickly.

✓ I use it for studying and work, writing assignments, completing tests, and taking longer notes because it makes my work faster and helps me remember information better; however, when I type for a long time my hands get tired more quickly.

Multiple issues: countable noun 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments'; 'taking a larger note' -> 'taking longer notes'; subject-verb agreement: 'it makes' and 'helps'; awkward phrase 'my hand wears faster and have my hands more quickly' corrected to 'my hands get tired more quickly'. Use proper punctuation to separate ideas. Suggestion: Break into clearer clauses, use plural nouns and correct verb forms, and replace awkward expressions with 'get tired'.

× I learned to type when I was about 9 or 10 years old and my teacher at school teach me how to typing on the keyboard and I practice a lot of time so I could type in a whole paragraphs which improves me my speed and more confident with my typing.

✓ I learned to type when I was about 9 or 10 years old, and my teacher at school taught me how to type on the keyboard. I practiced a lot so I could type whole paragraphs, which improved my speed and made me more confident with my typing.

Tense consistency: use past tense 'taught' and 'practiced' after 'learned'. Use base verb 'type' not 'typing' after 'how to'. 'A whole paragraphs' is incorrect; use 'whole paragraphs' without 'a'. 'Which improves me my speed and more confident' corrected to 'which improved my speed and made me more confident'. Suggestion: Keep past tense consistent and correct verb forms after 'how to'.

× So I'm right now I have a good typing but sometimes I.

✓ So right now I have good typing skills, but sometimes I make mistakes.

Sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'I have a good typing' should be 'I have good typing skills'. Add a contrasting clause after 'but sometimes' to complete the thought. Suggestion: Complete the sentence by stating what happens sometimes (e.g., 'make mistakes').

× To my personality, I will practice hypentry or four time away because I didn't have a computer at home when I was young so I can't practice it at school.

✓ Because of my circumstances, I practiced typing only a few times away from home because I didn't have a computer at home when I was young, so I couldn't practice at school.

'To my personality' is incorrect; use 'Because of my circumstances' or 'Due to my situation'. 'Hypentry' is unclear; assumed 'typing'. 'Four time away' likely 'a few times away from home'. Tense consistency: past 'couldn't'. Prepositions and word choice corrected. Suggestion: Use clear phrases like 'Because I didn't have a computer at home' and maintain past tense.

× So now I'm trying to practice every day with the online.

✓ So now I'm trying to practice every day online.

The phrase 'with the online' is incorrect; 'online' as an adverb is sufficient. Simple present continuous 'I'm trying' is appropriate. Suggestion: Use 'practice every day online'.

× Typing is designed to improve both my space and build more confidence when I'm typing along as the paragraphs.

✓ Typing is designed to improve both my speed and build more confidence when I'm typing long paragraphs.

'space' should be 'speed'. 'Typing along as the paragraphs' is incorrect; likely 'typing long paragraphs'. 'Build' should parallel 'improve' so structure 'improve... and build...' is acceptable. Suggestion: Use correct nouns ('speed') and clear modifiers ('long paragraphs').