Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct minor grammar; use linking words and give a clear topic sentence, one supporting reason for each preference, and a brief comparison. Avoid redundancy and ensure verb tenses and pronouns are correct.

例: I prefer typing for formal work like assignments and files because it's faster and easier to edit. However, I enjoy handwriting when jotting down personal thoughts or spontaneous ideas, as it feels more intimate and helps me reflect. Overall, I choose the method based on the purpose.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence, remove repetition, and add a linking phrase to connect reasons. Correct small errors (e.g., 'every day' two words, avoid repeating 'desktop').

例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and lets me study in different places. In contrast, desktop computers are less convenient since they need a separate monitor and keyboard, so I only use them occasionally.

提案: Provide a concise topic sentence, use linking words to sequence events, and correct awkward phrasing. Be specific about timing and methods used to learn typing to add clarity.

例: I learned to type properly after starting university because my earlier schooling relied on handwritten work. Once at university, I had to type essays, lab reports and emails, so I practiced regularly and completed an introductory typing course to improve my speed and accuracy.

提案: Give a clear main sentence, avoid filler words, and list specific practice methods with linking words. Mention measurable improvements (speed, accuracy) or tools used to make the answer more concrete.

例: I improve my typing mainly through daily practice and structured lessons. For example, I use online typing programs to build speed and accuracy, and in university computer classes I completed timed drills that helped me reduce errors and increase my words-per-minute score.

× It depends. I'd prefer typing when I have to hand in some assets and assignments in a file, and I prefer handwriting when I'm writing down some own thoughts and spontaneous ideas because it made me feel more personal.

✓ It depends. I'd prefer typing when I have to hand in some assets and assignments in a file, and I prefer handwriting when I'm writing down my own thoughts and spontaneous ideas because it makes me feel more personal.

The phrase 'some own thoughts' is incorrect; use the possessive adjective 'my' with 'own' omitted or 'my own thoughts'. Also 'made me feel' is past tense but the meaning is general habitual preference, so present simple 'makes me feel' is correct. Use present simple to describe general feelings; use 'my own thoughts' for correct pronoun usage and word order.

× I use a laptop keyboard everyday because my laptop is much more portable so I can bring it to all my classes and study in different places, and desktop desktops require a separate monitor and keyboard so they're less convenient for me.

✓ I use a laptop keyboard every day because my laptop is much more portable, so I can bring it to all my classes and study in different places; desktop computers require a separate monitor and keyboard, so they're less convenient for me.

Two issues: 'everyday' used as an adjective vs adverb. The correct adverbial form is 'every day' (two words) for frequency. Also 'desktop desktops' is redundant; use 'desktop computers'. Commas and sentence splitting help clarity. Use 'so' with comma for result clauses.

× I actually learned to type properly after I entered university because during my earlier studies we rarely submitted assignments online. Everything was handwritten and university I had to type essays, lab reports and emails and so on. So I took time to practice and improve my typing skills.

✓ I actually learned to type properly after I entered university because during my earlier studies we rarely submitted assignments online; everything was handwritten, and once at university I had to type essays, lab reports and emails. So I took time to practice and improve my typing skills.

The original has run-on and misplaced phrase 'and university I had to'. Reordering to 'once at university' clarifies the time reference. Use punctuation to separate ideas and avoid 'and so on' which is vague. Maintain past tense consistency.

× Well, basically by practicing everyday and also uh in the university we have to take a computer class and in the computer session we have the time and chance to train our typing skills to type faster and improve its accuracy.

✓ Well, basically by practicing every day, and also at university we had to take a computer class where, in the computer sessions, we had the time and chance to train our typing skills to type faster and improve their accuracy.

Use 'every day' (two words) as an adverb. For past context, keep past tense 'had' instead of 'have'. 'At university' is the correct prepositional phrase. 'Improve its accuracy' is incorrect because 'skills' is plural, so use 'their accuracy'. Also adjust noun phrases and verb forms for clearer structure.