Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct verb forms and word choice (e.g., 'when I write' not 'when I writing', 'lecture' not 'literature'). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it helps me avoid mistakes and keeps my notes neat. For example, when I write lecture notes on my laptop I can edit typos quickly and organize points with bullet lists, so my notes are easier to review later.

提案: Answer directly and fix tense and word-choice errors. Use linking words (because, so) and concise specific details (what you type, when). Avoid repetition and unclear words."

例: Yes, I use a laptop every day because I take notes during lectures and type essays. Because the laptop is portable, I can work in class or at home, so it makes my study routine much more efficient.

提案: Give a clear time reference and concise reasons. Use past tense consistently for past events, and avoid unclear phrases ('contrast', 'in person'). Provide one or two supporting detail sentences linked logically.

例: I learned to type when I was a child by practicing on my own while watching my father work. He often gave me tips on finger placement, so over time I became faster and more accurate.

提案: Be specific about methods and use present tense for current habits. Mention concrete practice techniques (timed exercises, online lessons) and results. Avoid repetition and correct verbs ('type' not 'tap').

例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly, for example using online typing tests and timing myself to increase speed and accuracy. I also type essays and chat with friends, which helped me become faster and more reliable when typing documents.

× I prefer typing because it's easier for me and when I type I will make fewer mistakes, especially when I writing my eyes or taking literature so my notes is more clear and easy to read.

✓ I prefer typing because it's easier for me and when I type I make fewer mistakes, especially when I am writing in my classes or taking literature, so my notes are clearer and easier to read.

Multiple present tense errors and agreement: 'I will make' is inappropriate when stating general preference; use simple present 'I make'. 'when I writing my eyes' is ungrammatical—likely intended 'when I am writing in my classes' using present continuous for ongoing action. 'taking literature' revised to 'taking literature (classes)' for clarity. 'my notes is' should be 'my notes are' to match plural subject; 'more clear and easy to read' corrected to comparative 'clearer' and parallel adjective 'easier to read'. Suggestions: use simple present for habitual facts, use present continuous for actions in progress, ensure subject-verb agreement, and keep adjective forms parallel.

× Yes, I type on a laptop every day because I often need to take my notes when I was taking my literatures or just writing my Ices and typing makes my life more convenient and my nose is more E is easier to know and it's more efficient.

✓ Yes, I type on a laptop every day because I often need to take notes when I am attending my literature classes or just writing my ideas, and typing makes my life more convenient and my notes are easier to read and more efficient.

Tense and word choice errors: 'when I was taking my literatures' mixes past tense with habitual present; use present continuous 'when I am attending my literature classes'. 'my Ices' likely 'ideas'. 'my nose is more E is easier to know' is garbled; intended 'my notes are easier to read'. Also 'take my notes' -> 'take notes'. Suggestions: keep tense consistent with habitual present, correct vocabulary ('literature classes', 'ideas', 'notes'), and ensure subject-verb agreement for plural 'notes are'.

× When I was very young I just practiced typing because I can always tell my father typing a day and because he always need to finish his contrast and I just practice on my own.

✓ When I was very young I practiced typing because I could always see my father typing every day and because he always needed to finish his contracts, so I practiced on my own.

Tense inconsistency and modal misuse: main clause is past 'When I was very young I practiced', so supporting verbs should be past: 'can' -> 'could', 'need' -> 'needed'. 'tell my father typing a day' is incorrect; replace with 'see my father typing every day'. 'contrast' likely 'contracts'. Suggestions: maintain past tense throughout when narrating past events, use correct verbs ('see' vs 'tell'), and correct vocabulary ('contracts').

× But sometimes my father will give me some tips but honestly I just do it in person.

✓ But sometimes my father would give me some tips, although honestly I learned by practicing on my own.

'will give' is awkward when describing habitual or past occasions; use 'would give' for repeated past actions or 'gives' for habitual present. 'I just do it in person' is unclear; 'I learned by practicing on my own' fits the context of past learning. Suggestions: choose appropriate modal for time frame ('would' for habitual past), and clarify 'do it in person' to a precise phrase describing learning method.

× By practicing, I just practice and practice when I was writing my essays or just chatting with my friends and now I do well in I do well in typing and I can tap quickly and roughly.

✓ By practicing, I practiced a lot when I wrote my essays or chatted with my friends, and now I do well in typing and I can type quickly and accurately.

Tense mismatch: 'By practicing, I just practice and practice when I was writing' mixes present and past; use past 'practiced' and 'wrote/chatted' to describe past practice. 'I do well in I do well in typing' is repetition; keep single clause. 'tap' should be 'type', and 'roughly' is unnatural for skill—use 'accurately'. Suggestions: maintain consistent tense when referring to past practice, avoid repetition, and choose precise adverbs describing skill quality.

× Sometimes my friends will ask me for help if he or she needs typing.

✓ Sometimes my friends ask me for help if they need help with typing.

Pronoun agreement and awkward phrasing: 'my friends' is plural, so 'he or she' is incorrect; use plural 'they'. 'needs typing' is ungrammatical; say 'need help with typing'. Also 'will ask' can be simple present 'ask' for habitual actions. Suggestions: match pronouns to antecedents in number, and use clear noun phrases ('help with typing').