Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần sửa lỗi từ vựng và phát âm, tránh từ không chính xác (ví dụ: "fatter" sai nghĩa) và rút gọn câu cho tự nhiên hơn. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó đưa 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể. Hạn chế filler (ví dụ: "for example" chỉ cần dùng 1 lần) và giữ trong tối đa 3-4 câu.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more efficient. For example, when I take notes on my laptop I can easily edit and organize them, which saves time and helps me review later.

提案: Cần tránh tiếng "umm" và câu lủng củng. Trả lời trực tiếp (desktop or laptop), giải thích ngắn gọn với lí do rõ ràng và cụ thể. Sửa ngữ pháp (daily -> every day; "type on my laptop" ), và loại bỏ các mệnh đề vô nghĩa.

例: I type on a laptop every day because it is portable and the keyboard is comfortable. I usually work on documents and browse the web, so having a laptop makes it convenient to do everything in one place.

提案: Câu trả lời tốt nhưng cần chính xác hơn và dùng từ phù hợp ("developing skills" không chính xác, nên là "typing skills" hoặc "basic computer skills"). Kết cấu đủ: thời điểm + bối cảnh + chi tiết ngắn. Giữ tự nhiên và ngắn gọn.

例: I learned to type when I was about ten, in the fourth grade at primary school. Our computer teacher showed us the home-row technique and gave simple practice exercises to build basic typing skills.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng: nêu phương pháp cụ thể để cải thiện (luyện tập hàng ngày, dùng phần mềm, tập đúng kỹ thuật). Tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Sử dụng liên từ khi thêm chi tiết để mạch lạc.

例: I improve my typing by practicing every day, usually by doing short typing exercises and using online typing programs. Also, I focus on correct finger placement and gradually increase speed while keeping accuracy.

× I prefer typing to handwriting because it's much fatter and more efficient.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because it's much faster and more efficient.

The adjective 'fatter' (meaning having more fat) is incorrect in this context; the intended comparison is speed. Use 'faster' to compare speed between typing and handwriting. Suggestion: replace 'fatter' with 'faster'.

× Yes, of course. Umm especially I always type UMM on my laptop's keyboard on a daily pages because I think it is so easy to use and I can touch other.

✓ Yes, of course. I always type on my laptop's keyboard every day because I find it easy to use and practical.

The original sentence contains filler words, word order problems and unclear phrases ('UMM', 'on a daily pages', 'I can touch other'). Remove fillers, use correct adverbial phrase 'every day', and replace unclear expressions with 'practical' or 'convenient'. Ensure subject-verb-object order and clarity.

× I learned to type when I was about 10 years old and in the 4th grade as my primary school.

✓ I learned to type when I was about ten years old, in the fourth grade at primary school.

Use consistent past tense and natural phrasing. 'In the 4th grade as my primary school' is awkward. Correct usage is 'in the fourth grade at primary school'. Also spell out numbers in formal speech and match preposition 'at' for institutions.

× My teacher taught us basic developing skills during computer class.

✓ My teacher taught us basic computer skills during class.

'Developing skills' is unclear; likely meant 'computer skills'. 'During computer class' is acceptable but 'during class' after 'computer' as adjective is more natural: 'computer class' or 'during class'. Use clearer noun phrase 'computer skills'.

× Of from my point of view I normally use it on a daily basis.

✓ From my point of view, I normally use it on a daily basis.

The phrase 'Of from my point of view' is redundant and incorrect. Use either 'From my point of view' or 'In my opinion'. Keep one phrase and place comma after it.

× Yes, and I think in the long time time I practical core typing I can improve my typing skills.

✓ Yes, and I think that over time, with regular typing practice, I can improve my typing skills.

The original has repetition ('long time time'), incorrect word order ('I practical core typing'), and missing connectors. Use 'over time' for duration, 'with regular typing practice' to express method, and include 'that' to introduce the clause. This yields a clear, grammatical sentence.