Part 1
試験官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
受験者
I prefer handwriting because I think it can improve my writing skills, but in fact typing are more convenient and save a lot of time.
試験官
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
受験者
I type on a laptop every day because I think it's more convenient and I have a lot of work to finish. By using laptop to type, I can save a lot of time and finish my work more efficiently.
試験官
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
受験者
Uh is uh, in my college I got my first laptop and then I used it to learn typing and finish some my homeworks. I think they are is very useful.
試験官
How do you improve your typing?
受験者
By practicing every day, I choose some ways to type on my computers and.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
スコア: 62.0提案: 回答要注意语法和单数/复数一致,简洁直接地给出观点,然后用一到两句具体原因支持。避免自相矛盾或不必要的重复。可以用连词(however, although, because)来清晰连接对比观点。
例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information and improves my handwriting skills. However, typing is more convenient and faster when I need to take notes quickly.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
スコア: 78.0提案: 结构基本清楚,但句子有重复和小错误(如冠词使用)。回答可更自然地合并信息并加一两个具体例子以增强说服力。使用连接词(so, therefore, because)使句子更连贯。
例: I type on a laptop every day because it's portable and lets me work anywhere. For example, I can reply to emails on the train and finish documents in cafés, so I can manage my workload more efficiently.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
スコア: 48.0提案: 需要流利性和准确性的提升,避免语音停顿和语法错误(时态、代词和动词形式)。回答要更直接:给出时间点,然后简短说明如何学习和原因。可用连接词如 when/after/because。
例: I learned to type when I started college and received my first laptop. I practiced by typing assignments and online exercises because I wanted to finish homework faster.
How do you improve your typing?
スコア: 40.0提案: 回答不完整且不连贯。应给出具体方法和细节,例如每天练习的时长、使用的练习工具或网站,以及取得的进步。使用序列词(first, then, finally)让答案条理清晰。
例: I improve my typing by practicing for 20 minutes every day using online typing tutors like TypingClub. First I focus on accuracy with slow exercises, then I work on speed with timed tests, and finally I track my progress each week.
× but in fact typing are more convenient and save a lot of time.
✓ but in fact typing is more convenient and saves a lot of time.
“typing”作不可数名词或动名词时,视为单数,谓语应使用单数形式“is”;第二个谓语“save”与主语“typing”不一致,应用第三人称单数“saves”。建议记住动名词作为主语时需用单数动词,且第三人称单数要加-s。
× By using laptop to type, I can save a lot of time and finish my work more efficiently.
✓ By using a laptop to type, I can save a lot of time and finish my work more efficiently.
在英语中,单数可数名词前通常需要冠词或其他限定词。这里“laptop”为单数可数名词,需加不定冠词“a”。建议习惯在单数可数名词前判断是否需要冠词,若泛指单个事物用“a/an”。
× Uh is uh, in my college I got my first laptop and then I used it to learn typing and finish some my homeworks.
✓ In college I got my first laptop and then I used it to learn typing and finish some of my homework.
(1)去掉冗余填词“Uh is uh”。(2)固定搭配应为“in college”而非“in my college”。(3)“homework”為不可數名詞,不用複數形式,也不與“some”連用為“some homework”或“some of my homework”。改为“some of my homework”或直接“some homework”。建议记住“homework”为不可数名词,不加-s,且使用“some of my”时要有of。
× I think they are is very useful.
✓ I think they are very useful. / I think it is very useful.
原句混用“are is”导致主谓重复且不一致。如果指代复数(例如前面提到的多种方式),用“they are”;如果指代不可数或单一的活动(如typing或laptop),用“it is”。建议理清代词指代对象,确保代词与动词在人称和数上一致。
× By practicing every day, I choose some ways to type on my computers and.
✓ By practicing every day, I choose some ways to type on my computer.
原句末尾不完整,且“computers”与上下文不一致(前文为单台笔记本),将句子补全为完整结构并统一单复数。建议避免以分词短语开头后主句残缺,确保句子有完整的主语和谓语并保持数的一致。