Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and grammatical: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words and repetition. Use correct tense and articles (e.g., "I prefer handwriting because I haven't had computer classes, so typing is difficult for me").

例: I prefer handwriting. Because I haven't had computer classes, I find typing difficult, so I would choose the paper-based IELTS exam rather than the computer-based one.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence and give specific details. Use linking words to expand briefly (e.g., "so" or "therefore"). Avoid hesitations like "umm" and redundant phrases.

例: No, I don't use a desktop or laptop. I only have a mobile phone, so I type on my phone's keyboard for messages and social media.

提案: Answer directly with a clear time reference and concise supporting detail. Use past tense for past events and linking words (e.g., "but" or "however"). Correct grammar: "I learned a little at school in the computer lab, but I still can't type well."

例: I learned a little bit at school when we had computer lab lessons, but I didn't practice enough, so I still can't type well on a computer.

提案: Be direct and logical: state current situation, then future plan with a linking word. Avoid irrelevant words (e.g., "driving") and repetition. Use conditional sentences correctly.

例: At the moment I don't try to improve my typing because I rarely use computers. However, if I needed to type more, I would take a computer class to learn proper typing skills.

× I will simply prefer like handwriting 'cause I don't learn any computer computer classes so it's difficult for me to type in.

✓ I simply prefer handwriting because I haven't taken any computer classes, so it is difficult for me to type.

The original uses 'will' incorrectly with 'prefer' and 'like' as filler; 'prefer' is a present preference (modal verb issue). Also tense and articles: 'don't learn any computer classes' is wrong—use present perfect 'haven't taken' to show experience up to now. Remove filler 'like' and use 'because' instead of colloquial ''cause'. Keep sentence concise.

× So I choose IELTS paper based exam rather than computer based exam.

✓ So I choose the IELTS paper-based exam rather than the computer-based exam.

Hyphenation and articles are needed: 'paper based' and 'computer based' should be hyphenated as compound adjectives. Add the definite article 'the' before 'IELTS' to specify the exam. This fixes sentence structure and article use.

× Umm, I don't have any laptops.

✓ Umm, I don't have a laptop.

Using 'any' with plural 'laptops' is acceptable in negative contexts but the speaker refers to a single device, so singular 'a laptop' is clearer. This corrects number agreement to match intended meaning.

× I have only phones, mobile phones.

✓ I only have mobile phones.

Word order is awkward. Place adverb 'only' before the verb phrase and use 'mobile phones' once. This corrects collocation and improves clarity.

× I only type in my mobile keyboards.

✓ I only type on my mobile phone's keyboard.

Use the correct preposition 'on' for typing and singular 'keyboard' when referring to one phone. Also use possessive 'phone's' to show the keyboard belongs to the phone.

× I don't learn like in when I was in school time.

✓ I didn't learn it when I was at school.

The speaker refers to a past event, so use past tense 'didn't learn' not present 'don't learn'. Simplify phrase 'in when I was in school time' to 'when I was at school' for natural English.

× School will teach uh take you in computer lab.

✓ School would take us to the computer lab to teach us.

Original mixes future 'will' with present description. Use 'would' for habitual past action or 'used to'/'took' depending on meaning. Here 'would take us to the computer lab to teach us' clarifies habitual past routine and corrects pronoun and infinitive usage.

× That time I learn little bit but not that much.

✓ At that time I learned a little, but not very much.

Use past tense 'learned' to match past time reference. Replace 'little bit' with 'a little' and 'not that much' with 'not very much' for natural phrasing.

× I don't know how to type in computers.

✓ I don't know how to type on a computer.

Use 'on a computer' rather than 'in computers'. The present simple 'don't know' is correct for current ability, but correct preposition and singular form make the sentence natural.

× And now I don't, I don't think so I need to improve my driving, like I'm not using computers or anything.

✓ And now I don't think I need to improve my typing, because I don't use computers much.

Original is confused: mentions 'driving' mistakenly. Replace with 'typing' to match context. Remove filler 'like' and correct clause order: 'I don't think I need to improve my typing, because I don't use computers much.' This fixes sentence structure and word choice.

× I don't need to use computer or anything.

✓ I don't need to use a computer right now.

Add article 'a' and clarify time with 'right now'. The modal 'need to' is fine, but article and noun form were incorrect.

× But if I need to improve then I will definitely go to computer classes to improve my typing.

✓ But if I need to improve, I will definitely take computer classes to improve my typing.

Use 'take computer classes' rather than 'go to computer classes' for natural collocation. Keep future 'will' for a conditional plan. Add comma after subordinate clause for clarity.