Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (use 'typing' as noun or verb properly), and give one specific reason or example. Limit to 2–4 sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can compose and edit emails quickly on my laptop, which saves me time when I'm working.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence then a clear reason with specific detail. Avoid tense errors and unnecessary words. Use linking words like 'because' and a brief example of when you type. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: I usually type on a desktop keyboard at work because my office computer is a desktop. I type emails and reports there throughout the day, especially during morning meetings.

提案: Answer with a clear time reference and concise supporting detail. Correct grammar (use past simple for past events) and avoid repetitive phrasing. Use linking words like 'then' or 'after that' to sequence events. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: I learned to type when I was at school in my computer class. After that, I practiced regularly at home, which helped me improve my speed and accuracy.

提案: Give a focused answer describing specific methods you use to improve (practice, online lessons, exercises) and measurable goals. Avoid vague, repetitive statements and correct awkward phrases like 'typing it' or 'symbols structure'. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'in addition'.

例: I improve my typing by practicing daily with online typing exercises and timed tests. For example, I use a typing tutor to work on accuracy and aim to increase my speed by 10 words per minute each month.

× I usually prefer to type because type.

✓ I usually prefer to type.

The original repeats 'type' unnecessarily and omits a clear object; it should be a simple statement. Use the pronoun/verb correctly without repetition. Suggestion: keep it concise: 'I usually prefer to type.'

× I am very good in typing.

✓ I am very good at typing.

English uses 'good at' to describe skill. 'Good in' is incorrect here. Use 'good at' plus gerund: 'good at typing.'

× So whenever you used to send the emails, I use the typing in the laptop.

✓ So whenever I need to send emails, I type them on my laptop.

Pronoun and verb forms are incorrect: 'you used to send' and 'I use the typing in the laptop' are unnatural. Use first person consistent with speaker: 'I need to send emails' and the verb 'type' with direct object 'them' and preposition 'on my laptop.' Also avoid 'used to' which implies past habitual action when context is general present.

× So I prefer to be typing.

✓ So I prefer typing.

'Prefer to be typing' is awkward; use simple gerund after 'prefer' for general preference: 'prefer typing.' The progressive form suggests an ongoing action, not a general preference.

× I usually type on the desktop keyboard every day because I used to send the emails from my office work, so I prefer to send it from my keyboard.

✓ I usually type on a desktop keyboard every day because I send emails from my office, so I prefer to send them from my keyboard.

Problems: article choice ('the desktop' -> 'a desktop'), misuse of 'used to' (unnecessary for habitual present), 'from my office work' is unnatural; use 'from my office.' Pronoun agreement: 'emails' plural requires 'them' not 'it.' Also 'desktop keyboard' is better without 'the' if speaking generally.

× During my school time, when I was in my computer class, I used to learn it from there and after that when I bring the computer in my home, I usually have a habit of typing.

✓ During my school years, when I was in my computer class, I learned to type there, and after I brought a computer home, I developed the habit of typing.

Mixed tense errors: 'used to learn' is awkward; 'learned' (simple past) fits. 'Bring the computer in my home' should be past 'brought a computer home.' 'I usually have a habit of typing' is unnatural; use 'I developed the habit of typing.' Maintain past timeline with past tense verbs.

× So I learned from there.

✓ So I learned there.

'Learned from there' is nonstandard; 'learned there' is concise and correct. Keep past simple tense consistent.

× I usually improve my typing by typing it on the keyboard as I earlier told you, which helps me in increasing my speed along with the symbols structure.

✓ I usually improve my typing by practicing on the keyboard, as I mentioned earlier, which helps me increase my speed and become more familiar with symbols.

Awkward repetition and incorrect noun phrases: 'typing it' is redundant; use 'practicing.' 'As I earlier told you' should be 'as I mentioned earlier.' 'Helps me in increasing' -> 'helps me increase.' 'Symbols structure' is unclear; 'become more familiar with symbols' is clearer.

× So that makes me helpful in increasing my speed.

✓ This helps me increase my speed.

'Makes me helpful' is incorrect collocation; 'helps me increase' is natural. Use 'this' to refer to the previous statement and the verb 'helps' with object 'me.'