Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 문장 구성과 어휘 선택에서 자연스럽지 않은 표현(예: "riding by hand", 'record')과 문법 오류가 있습니다. 핵심을 바로 말한 뒤 구체적 이유와 예시를 명확하고 간결하게 연결하세요. 문장 수는 3~4문장으로 유지하고 불필요한 반복을 줄이세요. 또한 단어 선택을 교정하여 더 적절한 표현(예: "handwrite", "grades")을 사용하세요.

例: I prefer handwriting when I study because it helps me remember information better. For example, I usually handwrite notes during lectures, and rewriting key points helps me review more effectively. As a result, my grades on exams have improved.

提案: 시제와 관사·수 일치, 그리고 불필요한 말버릇(예: 'like for example like umm')를 고치세요. 질문에는 간단히 주제 문장으로 답하고, 필요하면 이유와 세부사항을 연결어로 명확히 덧붙이세요. 예: 현재 시제 사용, 'a laptop' 혹은 'my laptop', 'many assignments' 등 정확한 표현으로 교정하세요.

例: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I'm a college student with many assignments. Most of my classes require essay submissions, so I use my laptop to write and edit my work.

提案: 발음 실수 표기(여기선 'hot tie' 대신 'how to type')와 문장 흐름은 괜찮습니다. 더 자연스럽게 말하려면 첫 문장을 명확히 하고 연결어로 결과를 덧붙이세요. 또한 연도를 대략적으로 말하거나 초등학교 몇 학년인지 추가하면 더 구체적인 정보가 됩니다.

例: I learned how to type in elementary school because it was part of the curriculum. We practiced with simple educational typing games, which made learning enjoyable and helped me increase my speed.

提案: 철자 및 단어 선택 오류(예: 'size', 'reputation')와 어순 문제를 바로잡으세요. 구체적인 방법(앱 이름, 연습 시간, 정확도 향상 수치 등)을 추가하면 내용이 더 풍부해집니다. 연결어를 사용해 원인과 결과를 명확히 표현하고, 문장을 간결하게 유지하세요.

例: At first I wasn't very good at typing, but I improved by practicing regularly. I use online typing programs like TypingClub every day for about 20 minutes, which has helped increase both my speed and accuracy.

× When I need to study, I prefer riding by hand and I write something down by hand.

✓ When I need to study, I prefer writing by hand and I write things down by hand.

Incorrect verb form 'riding' was used; the correct present participle for the verb 'write' when expressing preference is 'writing'. Also 'something' is vague in this context; 'things' is more natural for notes. Suggestion: use 'prefer writing by hand' to express a habitual preference and 'write things down' for taking notes.

× It helps me to remember the information better.

✓ It helps me remember information better.

The infinitive 'to remember' is not needed after 'helps' in this structure; the bare infinitive 'remember' is correct. Also 'the information' is unnecessarily specific; use 'information' for general reference. Suggestion: use 'helps me remember information better.'

× For example, I often take handwritten notes for my exams and doing so has always improved my record during tests.

✓ For example, I often take handwritten notes for my exams, and doing so has always improved my performance on tests.

The original mixes verb forms and uses 'record' awkwardly. 'Doing so has always improved' is acceptable, but 'record during tests' is unnatural; 'performance on tests' is idiomatic. Suggestion: use 'performance on tests' to refer to results.

× Yes, I typed on laptop keyboard every day because I'm a college student and there's so many assignments that I need to do with my laptop.

✓ Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I'm a college student and there are so many assignments that I need to do on my laptop.

Tense mismatch: the question asks about daily habit, so present simple 'type' is correct rather than past 'typed'. Also article 'a laptop keyboard' is needed and preposition should be 'on my laptop' not 'with'. 'There's so many' is subject-verb agreement error; use 'there are so many'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions and correct articles and prepositions.

× Like for example like umm, most of my classes require to submit essays.

✓ For example, most of my classes require submitting essays.

The verb 'require' is not followed by 'to' + infinitive in this context; it is followed by a gerund ('submitting') or a noun phrase. Also redundant fillers 'like for example like umm' should be removed. Suggestion: use 'require submitting essays' or 'require that we submit essays.'

× I learned hot tie in elementary school because it was mandatory.

✓ I learned how to type in elementary school because it was mandatory.

There is a typo ('hot tie' instead of 'how to type') and 'learned how to type' is the correct expression. Tense 'learned' is appropriate for a past event. Suggestion: correct typos and use 'learned how to type.'

× We practiced with simple educational typing games which made learning enjoyable and helped me improve my speed.

✓ We practiced with simple educational typing games, which made learning enjoyable and helped me improve my speed.

Comma needed before the non-restrictive relative clause 'which made...' for correct punctuation. Otherwise sentence is correct. Suggestion: add a comma before 'which.'

× At first I wasn't very good at typing, but by practicing regularly I gradually improved.

✓ At first I wasn't very good at typing, but by practicing regularly I gradually improved.

This sentence is correct grammatically. No change needed. Explanation: past narration of improvement is appropriate; 'practicing' as gerund is correct.

× I practice size daily with online typing exercises and reputation, which helped increase both my speed and accuracy, so now I can type much more easily.

✓ I practice daily with online typing exercises and repetition, which helped increase both my speed and accuracy, so now I can type much more easily.

Multiple issues: 'size' appears to be a typo for 'daily' placement; corrected to 'practice daily'. 'Reputation' is a wrong word; intended 'repetition'. 'Practice' followed by adverb 'daily' is correct. 'Which helped' refers to past improvement, which is consistent. Suggestion: use 'practice daily' and 'repetition' for repeated drills.