Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 答题要直接并准确使用比较结构，避免语法错误与重复。可改进点：1) 将首句改为更自然的比较结构（prefer typing to handwriting）。2) 删除不必要或自相矛盾的内容（如“I can't use my cell phones and laptop”与上下文冲突），并提供一两个具体原因或例子。3) 控制句子数，最多5句，注意连词使用（because, so, for example）。

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more convenient. For example, I can quickly edit documents and share them with classmates via email or cloud services. Also, typed notes are easier to organize and search when studying.

提案: 回答应直接说明是哪种设备并给出简洁具体的原因。可改进点：1) 开头先回答（Yes, I use a laptop daily.）。2) 提供具体细节（how often, what tasks）并用连词连接因果关系。3) 注意小错误（'on online'应为 'online'）。

例: Yes, I use a laptop every day because my teachers upload assignments to a platform called Calcium. I usually type essays and upload homework online, so the laptop is my main device for schoolwork.

提案: 回答应包含明确的时间点和简洁的细节。可改进点：1) 开头给出时间（e.g. When I was in primary school）。2) 用一两句话说明学习方式和工具，不要留下未完成句（避免 'These programs.' 这样的残句）。3) 使用连词如 'because' 或 'so' 使逻辑更清晰。

例: I learned to type when I was in primary school because we had a computer class. Our teacher used a typing program called Jingshan, and we practiced regularly until we became faster and more accurate.

提案: 回答要简洁并避免重复。可改进点：1) 合并重复信息，使句子更流畅（'it gives you'与 'which helped me' 的重复应删减）。2) 给出具体改进方法或频率（e.g. practise 20 minutes daily, focus on accuracy）。3) 用因果连接词说明结果（so, therefore）。

例: I practice with a typing program called Kingshag, which provides structured exercises and detailed feedback. I use it for about 20 minutes each day, so my speed and accuracy have steadily improved.

× Well, to be honest, I prefer typing than handwriting because it is easier and more convenient.

✓ Well, to be honest, I prefer typing to handwriting because it is easier and more convenient.

错误类型：介词用法不当。动词短语“prefer”后应使用“prefer A to B”的结构，而不是“prefer A than B”。改进建议：记住搭配，prefer 后面接 to 引出被比较对象。

× For example, I can't use my cell phones and laptop to send some message to my friends and teachers, whereas handwriting needs a pen and and.

✓ For example, I can use my cell phone and laptop to send messages to my friends and teachers, whereas handwriting needs a pen.

错误类型：代词/名词形式与重复。1) “cell phones and laptop” 中手机应为单数或保持一致，改为“cell phone and laptop”。2) “some message” 用复数“messages”更自然。3) 句尾有重复单词“and and”且应简化为“needs a pen”。改进建议：保持数的一致性，注意复数形式，并删除多余或重复的词。

× Sure, because nowadays the network is very popular.

✓ Sure. Nowadays the internet is very popular.

错误类型：现在分词使用/用词不当。原句“the network”在此语境下更常用“the internet”。同时原句断句不够自然，改为两句更符合口语表达。改进建议：注意常用搭配并合理断句。

× My teachers often post some assignments on a software called Calcium.

✓ My teachers often post assignments on a platform called Calcium.

错误类型：介词/介词搭配不当。通常说“post on a platform/website”而不是“on a software”。软件通常用“use”或“run”。改进建议：使用恰当名词（platform/website）并搭配正确介词“on”。

× As a result, I have to finish my homework and submit them on online on my laptop.

✓ As a result, I have to finish my homework and submit it online on my laptop.

错误类型：代词使用不当与介词短语错误。1) “homework”是不可数，指代应为“it”而不是“them”。2) “on online” 中“on”多余，正确为“online”。改进建议：注意不可数名词的代词指代和副词“online”不需要介词。

× I remember learning to type when I was in primary school because there is a lesson called computer and typing is a requirement part of the curriculum.

✓ I remember learning to type when I was in primary school because there was a lesson called Computer and typing was a required part of the curriculum.

错误类型：时态使用不当。叙述过去的回忆应使用过去时：lesson 和 required 应用过去时态或过去分词形式。改进建议：描述过去事件时，主句和从句保持过去时一致；“required”作为形容词可用过去分词形式。

× Our teacher let us practice with a typing program called Jingshan. These programs.

✓ Our teacher let us practice with a typing program called Jingshan.

错误类型：句子结构错误。原句后半句“These programs.” 为不完整句，应删除或补充完整。改进建议：避免残缺句，确保每句都有主语和谓语，若要说明多个程序则补充完整信息。

× I use a typing program called Kingshag. It's very user friendly. It gives you it can give you a structured exercise and a feedback after practicing, which helped me, which helped me improve my typing speed and accuracy.

✓ I use a typing program called Kingshag. It's very user-friendly. It gives you structured exercises and feedback after practicing, which helped me improve my typing speed and accuracy.

错误类型：量词/表达不当与重复。1) “a structured exercise and a feedback” 中“exercise”和“feedback”应使用复数或无冠词：“structured exercises and feedback”。2) “It gives you it can give you” 为重复，应简化。3) 句尾“which helped me, which helped me improve” 重复，应合并。改进建议：注意可数/不可数名词的冠词和数，以及避免冗余重复，保持句子简洁连贯。