Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more direct and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid fragmented clauses and ensure subject-verb agreement.

例: I usually prefer typing for work because it is faster and more convenient. However, for personal notes or letters to friends I prefer handwriting, as it feels more personal and expressive.

提案: Give a complete, grammatically correct response with a clear topic sentence and a brief supporting detail. Use linking words like because or so, and avoid repetition. Complete your final thought.

例: I type on a laptop almost every day because I often work from different places. My laptop is compact and easy to carry, so I can work at a cafe or at home.

提案: Provide a specific time frame and organize the answer coherently. Use linking phrases to clarify uncertainty (e.g. I think, I’m not sure) and mention who taught you or how you practised. Keep it to a couple of clear sentences.

例: I think I learned to type when I was in primary school, though I’m not completely sure. I first learned basic skills at school and then improved them in an after-school computer class.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and specific details about your practice methods. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague or repetitive phrases. Mention tools or exercises you use and a brief result.

例: I improve my typing mainly through daily practice using online typing exercises and regular writing tasks. As a result, my typing speed and accuracy have increased a lot over the years.

× It depends. If for the work, I would prefer to type in because is essential and convenient, but is for talking with people I would prefer handwriting.

✓ It depends. If it is for work, I would prefer to type because it is essential and convenient, but for talking with people I would prefer handwriting.

Errors: missing subject and auxiliary verbs and incorrect phrase order. Use 'if it is for work' to make a complete conditional clause, 'I would prefer to type' is fine, and include 'it is essential' to provide a subject and verb. Also change 'is for talking with people' to 'for talking with people' and keep parallel structure. Suggestion: always include a subject and verb and keep parallel phrases consistent. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× Honestly, I tap on laptop almost every day because sometimes I like to doing some work on my laptop and my laptop it is small and I.

✓ Honestly, I tap on my laptop almost every day because sometimes I like to do some work on my laptop; my laptop is small and portable.

Errors: incorrect use of present participle 'doing' after 'like to' (should be base form 'do'), missing article before 'laptop' ('my laptop'), redundant and incomplete clause 'my laptop it is small and I.' Replace with 'my laptop is small and portable' to complete the thought. Suggestion: after 'like to' use base verb, include possessive or article with nouns, and avoid sentence fragments. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× It was when I was in. Kindergarten or after senior school not remember not sure and I learned from the school and also the after school class.

✓ It was when I was in kindergarten or after senior school; I don't remember exactly. I learned from school and also from an after-school class.

Errors: incorrect capitalization and punctuation, missing auxiliary 'do' for negative present 'don't remember', missing articles and prepositions ('from school', 'from an after-school class'). Also sentence fragments and unclear time reference. Suggestion: use correct capitalization, include auxiliary verbs for negatives, and add necessary prepositions and articles. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I would say nothing more but practice. I almost practice every day and for so many years. So my tapping speed now is so fast and wonderful. I would say that.

✓ I would say nothing more than practice. I practice almost every day and have done so for many years. So my typing speed now is very fast and good.

Errors: wrong preposition 'but' should be 'than' in this idiom, awkward use of 'almost practice' (adverb order), incorrect tense for duration ('have done so for many years'), and word choice 'tapping speed' and 'wonderful' are informal/awkward in this context. Suggestion: use idiomatic expressions ('nothing more than'), place adverbs before main verbs, use present perfect for actions continuing to present, and choose appropriate vocabulary ('typing speed', 'very fast and good'). Grammar problem type ID: 10}]}