Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Evita errores gramaticales y organiza la respuesta con una oración temática seguida de dos detalles específicos. Corrige la estructura (por ejemplo, "I used to write poems by hand") y reduce repeticiones. Usa un conector para unir ideas como "however" o "but" y mantén la respuesta en no más de 3-4 oraciones.

例: I used to write poems by hand, but now I prefer typing on my phone because it's faster and easier to edit. However, I think handwriting is also valuable for creativity and memory.

提案: Mejora la gramática y la claridad. Usa un enunciado directo al inicio: "No, I don't type daily" o "I only use a laptop at work." Corrige tiempos y formas verbales (por ejemplo, "I have to register" o "I have to record"). Añade una razón concreta y un ejemplo breve usando un conector como "because" o "so".

例: No, I don't type every day. I only use my laptop at work because I need to record tasks and reports, but I prefer handwriting for quick notes because it's faster for me.

提案: Clarifica y condensa la respuesta. Empieza con una oración clara que responda "When" y luego añade un detalle contextual. Evita muletillas como "like" y repeticiones. Usa un conector como "because" to explain why it happened then provide a brief example.

例: I learned to type when I was about 12 years old, in sixth grade. At that time the government provided laptops to students, so I started practicing typing in school to improve my digital skills.

提案: Organiza la respuesta con una oración principal y 1–2 métodos concretos. Evita contradicciones (mejorar la mecanografía practicando a mano no es claro). Si te refieres a vocabulario, dilo claramente. Usa conectores como "so" o "by" y corrige tiempos verbales ("I search" o "I look up").

例: I improve my typing mainly by practicing on my phone and laptop using typing apps to increase speed. I also handwrite notes to learn new vocabulary, and when I encounter unknown words I look them up online to remember spelling.

× I used to do a lot of handwriting for write my poems but right now I prefer more use my cell phone so I go to the app notes and take notes of things. But I think both of them are very good options.

✓ I used to handwrite my poems, but right now I prefer to use my cell phone, so I open the Notes app and take notes there. But I think both are very good options.

The sentence contains incorrect verb forms and word choices. 'handwriting for write my poems' should be 'handwrite my poems' (use the verb 'handwrite' instead of the noun 'handwriting' plus 'write'). 'prefer more use my cell phone' should be 'prefer to use my cell phone' (use the infinitive after 'prefer'). 'go to the app notes' is unnatural; use 'open the Notes app'. Suggestions: use correct verb forms (infinitive after prefer), use appropriate verbs rather than nouns, and choose natural collocations.

× No, I only type on my notebook uh, when I'm in my job 'cause I have to registered everything that I do right now. I prefer to write by handwriting when I have to take notes of something.

✓ No, I only type on my laptop when I'm at work because I have to register everything I do right now. I prefer to write by hand when I have to take notes.

Errors include verb form and word choice. 'registered' is past form but needed base form 'register' after 'have to' (modal-like structure). 'in my job' should be 'at work'. 'notebook' likely means 'laptop'. 'write by handwriting' is unnatural; use 'write by hand'. Suggestions: after 'have to' use base verb, use correct preposition 'at work', and prefer natural expressions like 'write by hand'.

× In my country when you are in 6th grade and the government gives you a notebook or a laptop to improve your your connection with technology. So when I was like 12 years old I learned to type on a keyboard.

✓ In my country, when you are in 6th grade the government gives you a notebook or a laptop to improve your connection with technology. So when I was about 12 years old, I learned to type on a keyboard.

The original is mostly okay but needs punctuation and a small word choice adjustment. Use commas to separate clauses and 'about' is more natural than 'like' for age. Also remove duplicate 'your'. Suggestions: fix punctuation, remove repeated words, and use 'about' for approximate ages.

× My favorite activity to improve my typing is right, uh, by hand, when I have to take note of anything so I can learn how to, uh, write different words and when I don't know something I searched.

✓ My favorite way to improve my typing is writing by hand when I have to take notes, because I can learn how to write different words, and when I don't know something I look it up.

Multiple issues: 'right' should be 'writing' (verb -ing form), 'take note of anything' should be 'take notes', and 'I searched' is wrong tense; use 'I look it up' (present) to fit habitual action. Suggestions: use the -ing form for activities (writing), use plural 'notes' for usual phrasing, and use present simple 'look up' for habitual actions.