Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and grammatical errors, and add one specific reason or brief example. Use a linking word if you add another sentence.

例: I prefer handwriting. For example, I write notes by hand because it helps me remember information better and I enjoy the tactile feeling of pen on paper.

提案: Answer directly and clearly. Avoid irrelevant words and repetition. Give a specific choice (desktop or laptop) and a concise reason, using a linking word to connect the reason.

例: I usually type on a laptop every day because I take notes in lectures and it is portable, so I can study in the library or a café.

提案: Provide a clear time reference first, then briefly explain how you learned, avoiding tense mistakes and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas.

例: I learned to type in primary school when I took a basic computer class, and later I practiced more in college because typing made taking notes much faster and more convenient.

提案: Correct grammar and be specific about methods. Start with a clear statement about your approach, then give one or two concrete activities you do to improve, linked logically.

例: I improve my typing through deliberate practice. For instance, I spend 20 minutes daily on online typing exercises and I type assignment drafts at the university computer lab to build speed and accuracy.

× Well, I'm I'm really like handwriting because it's my habit.

✓ Well, I really like handwriting because it's my habit.

The sentence contains an extra pronoun-like filler 'I'm' repeated, which disrupts subject usage. Remove the extra 'I'm' so the subject and verb form 'I really like' is correct. Also 'like' must follow the subject directly (not 'I'm like'). Suggestion: Use 'I really like handwriting' or 'I prefer handwriting.'

× William movies type on a desktop or laptop keyboard as my daily in my daily life because I'm also an undergraduate student so I need to record the notebooks.

✓ I type on a desktop or laptop keyboard in my daily life because I'm an undergraduate student and I need to take notes.

The original sentence has several structural problems: an irrelevant phrase 'William movies' and repeated 'in my daily' create confusion. 'Record the notebooks' is unnatural; use 'take notes.' Also join clauses with 'and' rather than 'so' for clarity. Suggestion: Keep subject 'I' at start and use clear verbs 'type' and 'take notes.' This addresses sentence structure errors. (Changes limited to types listed: Sentence structure errors.)

× When I was in the primary school, I have some I had some computer license so I could practice my typing ability and when I entered college I could take notes by typing on the laptop.

✓ When I was in primary school, I had a computer license so I could practice my typing skills, and when I entered college I could take notes by typing on the laptop.

The original mixes present perfect 'have' with past-time reference 'When I was,' which is inconsistent. Use simple past 'had' to match the time frame. 'Typing ability' is better phrased as 'typing skills.' Also remove the extra 'I' and unnecessary article before 'primary school.' Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for past events ('was','had','could').

× I'm always believed that a deliberate practice make the perfect, so I'm always trying and always spend some time on practicing the typing and also I always do some work in the. Office.

✓ I always believe that deliberate practice makes perfect, so I always try and spend some time practicing typing, and I also often do some work in the office.

Several tense and agreement issues: 'I'm always believed' mixes passive with present meaning; use active present 'I always believe.' 'Make' must agree with singular subject 'deliberate practice' so use 'makes.' 'On practicing the typing' is awkward; use 'practicing typing.' Remove the stray period before 'Office' and use 'in the office.' Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual actions and ensure subject-verb agreement ('practice makes').