Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 注意时态和语法，保持句子简洁且直接回答问题。可以先给出明确观点，再用一到两句具体理由支持，避免重复。可以用连接词如 "because" 或 "so" 来衔接原因，词汇可稍作丰富（例如 "taking notes"、"assignments"）。

例: I prefer handwriting. I usually take notes and do assignments by hand because it helps me remember information better and I’m used to this method from school.

提案: 句子过长且有语法错误，回答应更简练并先明确桌面或笔记本电脑，然后说明频率和原因。注意主谓一致和词序，避免口语填充词如 "totally"。可使用连接词如 "because" 或 "so" 来组织原因。

例: I use a laptop every day. I rely on it for lectures and assignments because most course materials and submissions are online.

提案: 回答应更确定并控制句子长度。避免模糊词太多（如 "maybe"）或时态错误（如 "will taught"）。先给出时间点，然后简要说明学习方式或环境，使用恰当时态。

例: I learned to type in primary school when my school introduced computer classes. The teacher showed us basic typing techniques and we practised in class.

提案: 回答不够清晰且自相矛盾（说不练又说练）。应明确说明是否有刻意练习，如果没有可以说明通过频繁使用自然提高，并给出具体例子或方法（如练习软件、触摸打字练习）。注意语法与连贯性。

例: I mainly improve my typing through daily use during classes and assignments, but I also use online typing exercises occasionally to increase speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting because I'm a student now.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I'm a student now.

原句时态使用正确，保持现在时态表达习惯和状态，因此无需修改。

× In the past I always make the homeworks and make the notes by handwriting.

✓ In the past I always made the homework and took notes by handwriting.

此处谈论过去的习惯，应使用过去时，动词 make 要改为过去式 made。另外 homeworks 不可数名词 homework 不用复数；“make the notes”用法不自然，改为 take notes 更地道。建议：复述过去习惯时全部用过去时，homework不用复数，使用固定搭配 take notes。

× I just get familiar with this method.

✓ I am just familiar with this method.

句子想表达现在熟悉某方法，应使用现在时态和形容词短语。原句 get familiar with 更常见的被动或状态表述为 be familiar with，且 not needed 的 just 放在 am 之后更自然。建议使用 be + familiar with 表示持续状态。

× Yes, totally every day because I am a junior undergraduate student now in the laptop is been is needed every day during the classes and typing is the best skill for every student now in university.

✓ Yes, totally. I use a laptop every day because I am a junior undergraduate student now; a laptop is needed every day during classes, and typing is an essential skill for every university student.

原句时态和人称混乱，包含多处语法错误："is been is needed" 语序与时态错误，应为 "is needed"；缺少句子边界，应拆成几句或用分号；"every student now in university" 表达不自然，改为 "every university student"。建议：简化句子，使用现在时并保证主谓一致，修正被动短语为 "is needed"。

× Maybe from primary school, I cannot remember clearly because at that time we began to have the computer classes and in these classes the teacher will taught us how to type in.

✓ Maybe from primary school. I cannot remember clearly because at that time we began to have computer classes and in those classes the teacher taught us how to type.

表述过去发生的事情应使用过去时：began 和 taught（过去式）需一致。原句中出现 "will taught"（助动词 will 与过去式 taught 搭配错误），应去掉 will。"in these classes" 改为更贴合过去语境的 "in those classes"，并且 "how to type in" 多余介词 in，应直接用 "how to type"。建议：描述过去经历时全部使用过去时，注意助动词和动词形式一致，去掉多余介词。

× I just practice it unconsciously because as aforementioned, I use this skill every day so it just be improved in daily life.

✓ I just practice it unconsciously because, as aforementioned, I use this skill every day, so it just improves in daily life.

原句中动词短语和被动/主动形式混淆："it just be improved" 语法不正确。若表达技能在日常中被动地提高，可用被动 voice，但更自然的是主动表达： "it just improves"。此外注意主语与动词的一致（it improves）。建议：使用主动句型表达技能随使用自然提升，动词用第三人称单数形式 improves。

× I didn't practice it.

✓ I didn't practice it intentionally.

原句使用过去时否定是正确的，但为了更清晰表达原意（之前说是无意识练习并非刻意练习），建议加副词 intentionally 来强调否定的目的性。如果保持原句，也可视为语法正确。