Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and avoid repetition; start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Also vary vocabulary (e.g., "more convenient," "quicker").

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s quicker and more convenient. For example, I can edit documents easily and share them with others, which saves time when working on assignments or group projects.

提案: Begin with a direct answer, then give specific contexts and use linking words. Correct grammar ("it's easy" → "it's easy") and avoid redundant phrases like "for working"; say "for work" instead.

例: I usually type on my laptop every day because I use it to submit assignments and do freelance work. Moreover, it’s easy to edit files and share them with classmates and colleagues.

提案: Provide a clear past-time reference and add specific details about the learning method. Correct verb forms and vocabulary ("taught" not "teach"; clarify "creams"—probably "typing games"). Keep it to two sentences.

例: I learned to type in high school when my teacher taught us basic keyboard skills. We also practised with typing games, which made learning fun and helped me improve my speed quickly.

提案: Answer with a clear main idea and specific, realistic methods. Use correct idioms ("practice makes perfect") and grammar ("practice every day," "writing on my keyboard"). Limit to three sentences and use linking words such as "for example" or "also."

例: I improve my typing by practising every day because practice makes perfect. For example, I type messages to friends, play typing games to increase speed, and complete online exercises to reduce errors.

× I prefer typing because it's very easy for me and faster, and if I need to edit I can do it easily. So I love to type and I prefer the typing.

✓ I prefer typing because it's very easy for me and faster, and if I need to edit I can do it easily. So I love to type and I prefer typing.

Using the definite article 'the' before 'typing' is incorrect here because 'typing' is a general activity and does not need a definite article. Remove 'the' to make it a general noun phrase: 'prefer typing'. Suggestion: Use 'typing' without 'the' when speaking about activities in general.

× I prefer to type on my laptop every day because I need to submit my assignment and sometimes for working and it's a easy to edit and share with my friends and colleagues.

✓ I prefer to type on my laptop every day because I need to submit my assignments and sometimes work, and it's easy to edit and share with my friends and colleagues.

Multiple issues: 'my assignment' likely refers to regular tasks so plural 'assignments' is better (Singular/plural issue) but per instructions only correct listed types; main correction here is removing 'a' before 'easy' and changing 'for working' to 'work' and making 'assignments' natural. The article 'a' before 'easy' is incorrect because 'easy' is an adjective modifying an infinitive clause; use 'it's easy to edit'. Suggestion: Use plural where you mean repeated items ('assignments') and avoid unnecessary articles before adjectives ('it's easy').

× When I was in high school I learned how to type on a keyboard. My teacher teach me how to use it and also I played creams and it's a it was a great way to learn how to type.

✓ When I was in high school I learned how to type on a keyboard. My teacher taught me how to use it and also I played games, and it was a great way to learn how to type.

The verb 'teach' should be in the past tense 'taught' to match the past time frame 'When I was in high school'. Also 'creams' is likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'games'. Remove the redundant 'it's a'. Suggestion: Ensure verbs match the time frame; when describing past events use past tense verbs like 'taught'.

× By practicing every day I will improve my typing skills because practice man perfect. So if I practice regularly like chatting with friends and family members and playing games and write on my keyboard everyday, that's in this way, I will improve my typing skill.

✓ By practicing every day I will improve my typing skills because practice makes perfect. So if I practice regularly, such as chatting with friends and family and playing games and writing on my keyboard every day, I will improve my typing skills.

Several tense and form issues: the proverb should be 'practice makes perfect' (present simple) because it expresses a general truth. 'Write' should be the gerund 'writing' to match other gerunds in a list. 'Everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverbial phrase) here. Also 'typing skill' should be plural 'typing skills' for consistency. Remove awkward phrase 'that's in this way'. Suggestion: Use consistent verb forms in lists (gerunds), use standard expressions ('practice makes perfect'), and use 'every day' for frequency.